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"the desire for "the outside world" - family experience, history U of Washington

2 - Hi, I really like the concept of your essay. You just need to adjust your syntax and word choice....

Undergraduaterexarski - Dec 8, 2010wtangalang - Dec 10, 2010
Does age matter?---my main essay for Common App

7 - Indeed, age does matter if I take it as an excuse of failure, but it doesn't matter when taken...

Undergraduatewwd - Dec 7, 2010MirayPhilips - Dec 10, 2010
Why Literature, Science & Arts? - University of Michigan Ann Arbor

4 - wwd: cause those are the subjects im interested in... physics maths and whatever is way too basic... my english...

UndergraduateMirayPhilips - Dec 10, 2010MirayPhilips - Dec 10, 2010
When I Grow Up.. I want to be a doctor - Pittsburgh

3 - Thank you so much! I have corrected everything and have sent it in. I appreciate your help...

ScholarshipOleh - Dec 8, 2010Oleh - Dec 10, 2010
Motivation letter for Bioinformatics (Biomedical Science and Technology)

NEW - Dear sir, I am presently working as a project assistant at University of UDINE, Dept. of Biomedical Science...

Graduatevijayayarra - Dec 10, 2010 -
"Faith (from India)" - UChicago essay_Find x

4 - i tried to sort of lead into the topic. but yeah, it does seem a little modular at the...

Undergraduateabhijitroy - Dec 9, 2010abhijitroy - Dec 10, 2010
Columbia is cool, teaches, and aids foreigners - in 1500 letters

11 - I agree with NissanHaque that you should not humiliate other schools and I don't think "I understand that no...

Undergraduatedraconlord - Oct 31, 2010wwd - Dec 10, 2010
"Living in two worlds" - UC Prompt #1

4 - I've very thankful I'm very thankful for the way in which my parents raised me. ...becoming a doctor...

UndergraduateSparklePirate - Nov 27, 2010EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2010
"Immigrant parents from Mexico" - my workd, family, community

3 - My parents can be described as being hardworking and resilient. When you use 2 or more adjectives in...

Undergraduateghernandez2116 - Nov 27, 2010EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2010
"The Art of Storytelling" talent, world

4 - There is a certain richness and beauty ----To be grammatically correct it would need to say "There are..." but...

Undergraduateyoromori - Nov 27, 2010EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2010
UVa - "All the Trees of the Field Will Clap Their Hands"

3 - Great! Thanks for the suggestions!...

Undergraduatethadmoore - Dec 9, 2010thadmoore - Dec 9, 2010
My Little 'Buddha'

6 - Like Buddha who even didn't speak a word against the pundit,mM y player did not respondkept calm in response...

Writing Feedbackdhunjunikesh - Dec 7, 2010dumi - Dec 9, 2010
Gay Rights and Why I want to attend- Vesalius College

12 - I really like your second essay. Though, I think you should show this to your English teacher (really helps!)...

Undergraduatecoeurreign - Dec 1, 2010sdawn - Dec 9, 2010
"Having a parent develop a mental illness" - personal application, UW-Seattle

6 - Thanks for all the help Kevin. I'm going in as undecided though so it will be difficult to relate...

Undergraduatecornflakes13 - Nov 23, 2010cornflakes13 - Dec 9, 2010
"a love for debate" - Stanford Essay: Intellectual Vitality

4 - Maybe it was already said, but more directly: You need to focus on one specific time that you were...

Undergraduatejdurnford - Dec 9, 2010Supervisor - Dec 9, 2010
"the camp as a milestone in my academic and social evolution" - experience, risk

2 - I was expecting the camp to be a milestone in my academic and social evolution. It became slightly more...

UndergraduateAWadood7 - Dec 8, 2010EF_Susan - Dec 9, 2010
Statement of purpose - MS - Information & Engineering Technology

2 - I have a strong liking for mathematics, which prompted me to take up science and later pursue engineering. ...

Undergraduatemrug1512 - Dec 8, 2010EF_Susan - Dec 9, 2010
"the obesity epidemic in America" - Anthropology Essay

NEW - "I couldn't open up a magazine, you couldn't read a newspaper, you couldn't turn on the TV without hearing...

Writing Feedbackalswn95 - Dec 9, 2010 -
"Music Technology" - DUQUESNE COLLEGE ESSAY!!

2 - Ever since I was a small child growing up in Ypsilanti Michigan, one of the many things that was...

UndergraduateZiggyiggy - Dec 7, 2010EF_Susan - Dec 9, 2010
"Where is the Line Defined?" - Argumentative Essay-no OUTSIDE SOURCES!

3 - At the end of the first paragraph I am wondering why this is worth writing about. It would...

Writing Feedbackericao2010 - Nov 26, 2010EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2010
"MY OWN PATH, Chinese mothers" - CommonApp Essay

6 - Although these doctors and nurses had such a big job on their hands with taking care of very sick...

Undergraduatejyu104 - Nov 26, 2010EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2010
"Esmeralda's situation, Mexico" - event, USC ESSAY

4 - Look at how much stronger it will be if you get rid of "I believe" I believe e Everyone...

UndergraduateDaisyJFran - Nov 26, 2010EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2010
"The High Price of Materialism" - Introduction Help

4 - thadmoore's suggestions are solid. However, i suggest you go with: Contrary to the media's false portrayals, materials...

EssaysChristinasha07 - Dec 8, 2010abhijitroy - Dec 9, 2010
Why do you think people attend college or university (a necessary step in the life)?

4 - For every student they have a goal to achieve. To reach the destination they need proper guidance and good...

Scholarshipwhitney - Nov 28, 2010saibaba26 - Dec 9, 2010
Ietls essay: Should bottled water be banned by governments?

2 - the only suggestion that I have is where you say PET im going to assume that you mean petroleum,...

Undergraduateiishine - Dec 6, 2010rickym - Dec 9, 2010
"It's been years and I'm now 17 years old" - Common application essay : Me

5 - thankyou so much =)...

UndergraduateDeepannita - Dec 7, 2010Deepannita - Dec 9, 2010
"a passion for exploring the world" - Colorado Admission Essay Critique

NEW - Here is the prompt: The University of Colorado at Boulder's Flagship 2030 strategic plan promotes exceptional teaching, research,...

Undergraduatephotobrat93 - Dec 9, 2010 -
the "Excellence Scholarship & Opportunity Programme (ESOP)" for my Master's degree

NEW - I am not an english speaking person (as you can read) so I need help to correct my motivation...

Scholarshipbenbenv18 - Dec 9, 2010 -
EE SOP for UW, Electric Machines and Power Electronics Consortium

3 - EF_Kevin Thanks very much your carefully review. I would make some changes according to your advices. Best Regards...

Graduatepaulsong86 - Nov 29, 2010paulsong86 - Dec 9, 2010
"Computer family"/"I never give up"-University of Washington PS

NEW - A) Discuss how your family's experience or cultural history enriched you or presented you with opportunities or challenges in...

Undergraduatetcn94125 - Dec 9, 2010 -
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