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|Third-world country, first-world classroom - Texas Freshman application essay.
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|Scripps Short Essay - 'all-girls college' gossip
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|Georgetown "Describe Yourself" Essay
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|MIT Essay -- "I am a physics anomaly."
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|UConn College Essay Help, My First Job
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4 - I pretty much reached the character limit with this response already. Thanks for the comments!...
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