|Undergrad Application - Waterloo, Canada
2 - Greetings! You've written a fine essay! I have just a few small suggestions for you. Your essay...
UndergraduateRitikaEF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
|Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver
2 - Greetings! You do a good job of capturing the proper tone for this sort of report. If your...
Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
|Can you edit my essay? "Ethics"
2 - Greetings! I think you have done a very thoughtful analysis of the poem. Good job! I have just...
Writing Feedbackmkatts19EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
|Unless guided by knowledge and insight, power will destroy us - how to start?
4 - Both of these books show a lot of human nature. How we would do anything to gain power...
Essaysjag2411aznpoo - Mar 9, 2007
|paper on cause and effect (shall I use the metaphor?)
3 - Hey, yeah that helps a lot. I did not think of putting it into two sentences but that...
Essayspandolfi91pandolfi91 - Mar 9, 2007
|Emperor Jones' flight is a progress in self-understanding
2 - Greetings! The thing that stands out the most to me is that you use the thesis statement, "Emperor...
Writing FeedbackwolfaceEF_Team2 - Mar 8, 2007
|"The English Language" - wonderfully rich and eclectic
9 - Finally, English language has turned the word into a global village through the spread of trade and commerce. Many...
EssaysAsmaAsma - Mar 7, 2007
|Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...
Writing Feedbackjone1113EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
|Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?
4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...
Writing FeedbackkendraEF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
|cause and effect essay on the new "Polytrack" or artificial cushon
5 - Sarah, Thank you for the reply. I did a quick outline and my Professor liked the subject, so I...
EssaysnellegirlGreyflannel - Mar 5, 2007
|'Hamlet delays his revenge' - Another Hamlet essay
2 - Greetings! Well, first, let's define the terms. An epigram is any witty, ingenious, or pointed tersely expressed saying....
Book ReportsaznpooEF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
|The Courtroom - Essay
NEW - I just wrote this essay for my english class. I can't quite grasp what is wrong with it. Most...
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|"Reasons to smoke" I wrote this essay for tommorow's class
2 - Greetings! It can be a real challenge to write essays in a foreign language. You make some good...
Writing FeedbackBBgirlEF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
|example essay about and amazing artists
4 - I'm not sure I understand your question. Can it be an example essay for what? Sarah...
Writing FeedbackokunaEF_Team2 - Mar 3, 2007
|Differences between Mongolian and American Foods
3 - thank you so much i really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackMaggie8802Maggie8802 - Mar 2, 2007
|'incredibly rewarding career' sociology journal response
9 - Greetings! I'll give it a try, but I don't know the subject matter well enough to be sure...
EssayssuperkayteeEF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2007
|The moral education aim in the Alive 0-8 and Alive 0-4
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Writing Feedbacksuperkayteesuperkaytee - Mar 1, 2007
|graded research paper not so hot
4 - Greetings! You're welcome! You have the right idea. Fortunately, though, it is not necessary to cite after...
Research PapersrkslperezEF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2007
|paper review in economic
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Research PapersokunaEF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
|Is the deterministic universe described by physics incompatible with free will or god existance?
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EssaysmanogamezEF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
|CATS; Indoor/ Outdoor / Indoor-Outdoor
7 - Rest is not possible for a mother with a son turning 3 on Friday. :) It is also not...
Writing Feedbackamosborne13amosborne13 - Feb 28, 2007
|Combi boilers/ Direct Vs Indirect methods of cold water supply
5 - Greetings! I thought we might be in luck, because I have a union boilermaker visiting me this evening...
EssaysBollox85EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
|"Living at the time of Copernicus" - Proper Thesis For a 4-page Paper
5 - It's a rewarding job, but knowing that makes it even more worthwhile! You made my week! (And I hope...
Writing FeedbackmanogamezEF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
|'The riddles in A Feast of Creatures' - Comment and critique on intro and conclusion
2 - Greetings! It appears your Intro and Conclusion are exactly the same, word for word. I'm thinking that you...
Book ReportsmeeshEF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
|All Quiet On the Western Front - academic essay on Betrayal
2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I enjoyed reading it very much! I have only a few editing suggestions:...
Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2007
|Behavioral Support, Social relationships & Peer support.
2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay! Most of my observations have to do with punctuation. ...
Writing FeedbackCeressieEF_Team2 - Feb 25, 2007
|Memories are something everyone has! - SAT
3 - Greetings! It's good to get input from someone who has just been through it, so thanks, aznpoo! I...
Writing FeedbackkendraEF_Team2 - Feb 24, 2007
|How to write a research paper on a novel?
5 - Thank you very much for the help. I was a little worried at first that I may not find...
Research PapersAlex0713Alex0713 - Feb 24, 2007
|Short Essay on The Crucible
4 - And I appreciate your letting me know! Thank you! Sarah...
Writing FeedbackrollagasperEF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
|"1990's and what happened" - intro and conclusion help
2 - Greetings! I think the conclusion is pretty good now, although the last sentence could be a bit stronger....
Essaysher_heartEF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007