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4 - Greetings! No, technically, that is not a run-on sentence. A run-on sentence is one which has two independent...
EssaysvolzurgEF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
|How my favorite Hobby/Pastime refelcts my personality
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Writing FeedbackbdoanEF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
|A Rose for Emily : Why Did Miss Emily Kill Homer?
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Essaysblackscorpion15EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
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Book ReportsjeanelleEF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
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Book ReportsWonderfulloserjeanelle - Sep 20, 2007
|15 minutes of fame; NYU COMMON APP
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Undergraduatevishal720EF_Team2 - Sep 20, 2007
|ME & My BROTHER / Human behavior psychology -Common App
2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay that reveals a lot about what kind of person you...
UndergraduatemodiEF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
|References or journals for a pys research class
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Grammar, UsagelindbrielEF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
|Hole - narrative essay(incident that happened and changed my mind)
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UndergraduatesamuraitomEF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
|U.S. economy - expository essay
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Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
|Nora becomes prepared to fullfil Pleny's request
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Writing Feedbacktsj456tsj456 - Sep 17, 2007
|Blank verse - "The Ball Poem" by John Berryman Help
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Poetrytsj456tsj456 - Sep 17, 2007
|Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification
4 - Greetings! Your essay has some interesting information! I have some editing suggestions for you: these Metalheads are...
Writing FeedbackReinhardtEF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
|My Antonia-essay topic help
4 - Greetings! When I do a Google search using "My Antonia" as my search terms, I come up with...
Essaystsj456EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
|Is imagination more important than knowledge - SAT essay
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|Position Paper: Does it need to have only two sides?
2 - Greetings! Normally, in a position paper, you would take a position regarding the issue, and give your opinion...
EssaysenglinquirerEF_Team2 - Sep 14, 2007
|Memory is an attachment to our physical selves; Reincarnation / Process of memory
4 - Greetings, Rajiv! Thank you for the clarification! I do have a question regarding word choice, though. In this...
Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - Sep 13, 2007
|Need help on topic novel "Im not scared" by Niccolo Ammaniti
2 - Greetings! While I haven't read the novel, I can try to get you pointed in the right direction....
Book ReportsstudmasterEF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
|End of Suffering -- Essay
22 - You're welcome, Rajiv! (and I think "efforts" is the appropriate word for it in my case ;-)) Sarah,...
EssaysRajivEF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
|'Breeze to find a job after graduation' - FSU admission
NEW - Hello the topic for the essay is (what is the best advice you have ever received, and why?) and...
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Research PapersousmanEF_Team2 - Sep 10, 2007
|I want to be able to get as much help as possible in my English class.
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|Help with Question about Economic History (Australian)
4 - Greetings! I would suggest researching what types of economic development there have been, and looking for any impact...
EssaysphilipZ1985EF_Team2 - Sep 9, 2007
|Preparing for TOEFL IBT test - need advice on how to write better
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EssaysphuongleEF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
|The organizational behavior in the Army - help with thesis statement
2 - Greetings! I think you've crafted a very good thesis statement! I have just a few small editing suggestions:...
Writing FeedbackmonifahEF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
|World of writings; NYU - creative work that has influenced me
UndergraduatelunaseaEF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
|Teenage violence in schools
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Writing FeedbackangeltetraEF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
|"Computer or book"? Computer
2 - Greetings! I agree, I think this one is better than the other. You make some good points! One...
Writing FeedbackangeltetraEF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
|In what way will Scholarships contribute to your life career?
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ScholarshipMatthewlunasea - Sep 4, 2007
|A Soft Complaint (A Formal Argumentative/Persuasive Essay, Incomplete)
2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I think you've done a very good job of striking the balance; I...
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