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NEW - I literally just finished this and condensed it to exactly 500 words. It was originally 650ish words--do you think...
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2 - Good evening. I really like the second essay better. It speaks of similarities and differences, and shows that...
UndergraduateAlexandraSusiEF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
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NEW - hi gloria you helped me a lot with my other UCF admission essay i was wondering if you could...
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2 - Good morning. "Although older people have gained a lot of knowledge and experience , the assertion that older...
Writing FeedbackjerryEF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
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NEW - My high school career has been a great ride. Those years are years I will never forget no matter...
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UndergraduateDantheman100EF_Team5 - Sep 6, 2008
|"Objection Overruled" - Elaborate on one of your extracurricular activites.
2 - Depending on your word count restrictions, you could talk a little bit more about why it is you choose...
UndergraduateDantheman100EF_Team5 - Sep 6, 2008
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|"Doctor's passion" - UF, meaningful event
3 - Wow, thank you for the corrections! I appreciate the time you put into correcting this... you all are wonderful...
Undergraduatekolakola - Sep 6, 2008
|What if we had to choose between hearing or seeing?
2 - Good evening. How about how your life would be different if you could not hear? Sure, you could...
EssaysashleyEF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|Stonewall riots -how a historical event has impacted you - English 101
2 - Good afternoon. It sounds like your professor wants something of a personal impact essay. Has the Stonewall riot...
UndergraduatenickatronEF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|The world of design; M.Arch Statement of Purpose
2 - Good afternoon. A statement of purpose is generally designed to give you the opportunity to tell the admissions...
UndergraduateklmoynEF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|UCF - 'Accepting the challenge' - bump in the road, explain circumstances
2 - Good job. This is an unusual subject to answer this question with, which makes it stand out; this is...
Undergraduatedlb1670EF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|I am poem; I am determined and shy
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Writing FeedbackjerryEF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|Colloquial speech in August Wilson's "The Piano Lesson"
NEW - Okay, I am supposed to "Craft a well written essay that illustrates how one of the summer reading authors...
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|"One should never stop learning" / KOREAN ART- US college app
NEW - "One should never, never, never stop learning" I used to hear of it during entire of my life time...
|'favorite art class' - College of Lake County - My application essay
3 - Thank you so much Your suggestions on my essay was excellent you are so kind I thank you again...
Undergraduatekye009kye009 - Sep 4, 2008
|Success can lead people into danger by changing a person's personality
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Writing FeedbackSATHelpEF_Team5 - Sep 4, 2008
|This is list of my acrylic / pastel paintings - portfolio explanation
NEW - 1 The plant is being recharged by the rain-Charcoal, 47.2cm X 63.6cm, 2008 To express rough and comfortable feeling...
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|past year of school - admission essay
NEW - "In this past year of high school, many things have taken place and they have changed me for the...
|Changing and staying the same in life. Which would you prefer?
2 - Good to hear! These are my thoughts: "Humans' life perceptions are diverse. Some people believe that changes...
Writing FeedbackjerryEF_Team5 - Sep 3, 2008
|Help on argumentative research paper (RX, drugs)!
5 - Good evening. Once you have conducted your research and completed your first rough draft, I can help you...
Research Paperscasey2264EF_Team5 - Sep 3, 2008
|'Colombia and the efforts of my parents' Meaningful event, experience, etc.-Narrative
3 - I believe there is one error, a comma in your first paragraph. I think you have answered the prompt...
UndergraduateNena011EF_Team5 - Sep 3, 2008
|STOP HURTING YOURSELF; FSU essay - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
NEW - Please tell me what you think. Please be brutal and blunt, this whole essay thing is making me very...
|Digital Film making & Video Production ; Career goals/ Education@AI
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NEW - Examinations have become an effective method to test the student's capabilities. To pass the exam, we [ it is...
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|Hingham, the meadow; Meaning of MY NAME
4 - Good Afternoon Gloria. Yesterday my friends and I read an English book and it showed us how to...
Undergraduatebiggirlbiggirl - Sep 2, 2008