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Writing FeedbackposhbabydollEF_Team2 - Jan 5, 2008
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Letterssatans_angelEF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
|Satire Essay -Rights of Handicapped Children (lack of)
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Writing Feedbackwarrior108EF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
|Open topic essay [graduate program in Human Rights]
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|"Prejudice and Stereotyping in the Media" - international student essay
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Writing Feedbacksatans_angelEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
|Mandatory arrest laws - domestic violence
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|'the word coconut' / 'aerial view' - UVA short answer essays
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UndergraduateblinkEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
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|'Grand opera' / 'Employment opportunity' - A Comonapp and a Cornell Essay
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Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
|Help for non academic writing his first Essay (mature Student 41 !)
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Writing Feedbackrsgino7EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
|Should Tuck Shop Stop Selling 'Junk Food"? - practice essay (article)
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Writing Feedbackshing200584EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
|Infringing copyright - writing exam practice essay (letter to editor)
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Lettersshing200584EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
|History, patterns, and dynamics of violence between intimate partners
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Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
|The start of a witness report/assignment for law (high school level)
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|Malagasy culture and traditional family - SCHOLARSHIP
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|My exam practice---"complaint letter on animal abuse"
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Lettersshing200584shing200584 - Dec 19, 2007
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UndergraduateMarihdzEF_Team2 - Dec 18, 2007
|How to read a peer reviewed article in less than 20 minutes?
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|'Complaining about gas prices' - Issue of international significance - Admission
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|'Introduction to golf' - Common App short answer.
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|PARENTS & Especially my mother; Personal statement: Important person
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Undergraduatepaulpaul - Dec 17, 2007
|Immigration - argument research paper
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