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Undergraduatet0mmyparkEF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|"I am the youngest of eight children" - Prompt 1 essay Help in title
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Undergraduatejrod91EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|UIUC essay - Child Education Work
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|"Visiting Vietnam in the summer of 200" - UC PROMPTS
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|A time when you tried something for which you had no talent. Essay.
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|"born in Salinas, California" - application essay
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|Law School SOP (single mother)
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Writing FeedbackAsselyaEF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|Are self-published books worth giving reviews on?
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Book ReportsGiannaEF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|"Ping pong is serious business" - common app essays
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UndergraduateNikhilEF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|UC prompt 2, how a friend went missing, changed my life
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|Cumulative class essay about supervisor
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|'greatly influenced'; Statement of Purpose, Graphic Design MFA
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Graduaterwalkerrwalker - Nov 23, 2008
|"the cops around my block" - uc prompt 1
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|'the only other Indian-American' - Common App Admission
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Undergraduateupstateny15EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|How do I start my research paper on anti-censorship?
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Research Paperslillypop215EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|Mechanics a Great Experience
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Undergraduatejrod91EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|"I have volunteered at our neighborhood's public library" - UC prompt 1
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Undergraduategora2867EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|'academic strenght and research opportunities' Why decide to apply - emory supplement
Undergraduatevolleyball09EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|SAIC design statement of purpose; 'As long as there is life, there will be art'
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UndergraduateadelewuEF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|"the day I first came to America" - admission essay
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|'traffic jam, noisy neighborhood' - New movie theater may be built
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Writing FeedbackAsselyaEF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|"I was the only Latin American student," common app- significant experience
|"What Men Live by?" - Leo Tolstoy once asked this question in one of his famous novels
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|Resilience and Confucian proverb
UndergraduaterainyxoxoEF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|'volunteering at local schools' - UC prompt#2 - Helping people
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Undergraduatemember123EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008