|Why Penn (the creative approach) - give me some last minute support
3 - The general approach is great! Just eliminate all that is unnecessary and make every sentence count. That is how...
UndergraduateHiroShima11EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
|"Lights out" - poem analysis
5 - I think the images you are using is not strong enough for the atmosphere you want to express. You...
Poetrylearningtowritecharliesun - Jan 3, 2009
|"You broad my eyes," -my first poem
Poetrycibakicharliesun - Jan 3, 2009
|"It was Good to Have Known you Sarah" - Poem
PoetryRajivcharliesun - Jan 3, 2009
|Common App Extra Curriculum(150 words, Senior Math Team)
Undergraduatexinixcharliesun - Jan 3, 2009
|Common App Extracurricular Short Answer (varsity sports and various clubs)
UndergraduateJustin09charliesun - Jan 3, 2009
|Essay question: Why do People Buy?
6 - I think you need to make your question more specific. Why do people buy instead of bartering or instead...
EssaysDennyRistieEF_Sean - Jan 3, 2009
|essay question on national theatre and somerset house???
3 - You might start your preparation for this essay, once you have done some research, by making a list of...
EssaysJasonBanksEF_Sean - Jan 3, 2009
|'too late for the election' - Brown U. Supplement - Academic Interests
UndergraduaterandomzmEF_Sean - Jan 3, 2009
|Last Minute MIT additional essay ("a turning point of my life")
3 - A few more suggestions: "According to the philosophy of Confucius and thousands years of tradition, examination is the...
UndergraduatevivalacanadaEF_Sean - Jan 3, 2009
|NYU short answer (diversity is critical to my future education)
13 - I agree that you should go into explaining how "remarkable" the program is. Additionally, I'm not too sure whether...
UndergraduateVeggychickpig - Jan 3, 2009
|'I listened to the lyrics' - 100th page of my autobiography
8 - this is a really good essay, beautifully written. it gives the reader a good sense of who you are....
Scholarshippiggytails626jh3492 - Jan 3, 2009
|Minority students. As a Puerto Rican student I I helped bring Latino Club to my school.
12 - Of the 2,592 students attending (school name), only 6.6% of them are minorities. As a Puerto Rican student navigating...
UndergraduateprocrastinationEF_Constance - Jan 3, 2009
|I'M A THUG-Common App Essay-My FIRST draft.
UndergraduateyeeLW Trojan - Jan 3, 2009
|UPenn autobiography - i decided to write about my future
Essayslalaforu2LW Trojan - Jan 2, 2009
|Cornell CAS- 1st draft. 'The great thing about magic'
10 - I like your essay. I'm applying to Cornell to but to ILR...Hopefully we'll see each other there....
UndergraduateJSFlashLW Trojan - Jan 2, 2009
|why BU? ("born and raised in Walnut, California")
10 - Thank you, mad3na90, for the correction. I think that the post was getting off track and not helping, just...
UndergraduateuhlyssuhEF_Constance - Jan 2, 2009
|COMMON APPS ESSAY (Alice in Wonderland); I had grown too much
2 - Great job! I could not find any grammatical or stylistic errors, but would like to know the prompt question...
Undergraduateidk1234EF_Constance - Jan 2, 2009
|Hopefully my last: Why BU
6 - As a junior in high school , I lacked the fiery passion my peers kept roaring for specific universities....
Undergraduatemad3na90EF_Constance - Jan 2, 2009
|CORNELL SUPPLEMENT, College of Arts and Sciences (Chemistry)
8 - Even walking by her room, one could sense the fear, stress and frustration of everyone in her class ....
UndergraduatescarpinoEF_Constance - Jan 2, 2009
|'A friend and a competitor' - Common App Essay -- Influential Person
3 - It was the first week of high school, and, unfortunately, the seating chart was alphabetical by last name. ...
UndergraduateFFtoMay1EF_Constance - Jan 2, 2009
|illinois essay - 350 words instead of 300 words?
9 - Personally, I would stick to 300 words or less. If that is simply unacceptable for you, you could also...
UndergraduateSlimeEF_Constance - Jan 2, 2009
|Help me with Trinity's essay
Undergraduatejustinwangjustinwang - Jan 2, 2009
|'A motorbike flew past us' - U Richmond - Leaving the comfort zone
Undergraduatezowzowzowzow - Jan 2, 2009
|Cornell Engineering Essay- a bit shaky?
5 - Thanks!!...
Undergraduatesk8rgal666sk8rgal666 - Jan 2, 2009
|CU essay, to portray a sense of who I am.
Undergraduateylimeylime - Jan 2, 2009
|Stanford--why a good place for you? ("stereotypical Asian parents")
Undergraduatetracey88r991183878 - Jan 2, 2009
|Why the University of Chicago?2 para essays.
Undergraduateeiiiachickpig - Jan 2, 2009
|Common Application Essay - My Father
2 - I think you do too much telling and not enough showing. Also be sure that this essay focuses on...
UndergraduateHansaml91yellowwoman - Jan 2, 2009
|Illinois essay - "I have never 'discovered' nature"
Undergraduateflio191flio191 - Jan 2, 2009