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graded research paper not so hot

4 - Greetings! You're welcome! You have the right idea. Fortunately, though, it is not necessary to cite after...

Research PapersrkslperezEF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2007
paper review in economic

4 - Greetings! Overall, the essay makes perfect sense to me. You provide a lot of good information on the...

Research PapersokunaEF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
Is the deterministic universe described by physics incompatible with free will or god existance?

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EssaysmanogamezEF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
CATS; Indoor/ Outdoor / Indoor-Outdoor

7 - Rest is not possible for a mother with a son turning 3 on Friday. :) It is also not...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13amosborne13 - Feb 28, 2007
Combi boilers/ Direct Vs Indirect methods of cold water supply

5 - Greetings! I thought we might be in luck, because I have a union boilermaker visiting me this evening...

EssaysBollox85EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
"Living at the time of Copernicus" - Proper Thesis For a 4-page Paper

5 - It's a rewarding job, but knowing that makes it even more worthwhile! You made my week! (And I hope...

Writing FeedbackmanogamezEF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
'The riddles in A Feast of Creatures' - Comment and critique on intro and conclusion

2 - Greetings! It appears your Intro and Conclusion are exactly the same, word for word. I'm thinking that you...

Book ReportsmeeshEF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
All Quiet On the Western Front - academic essay on Betrayal

2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I enjoyed reading it very much! I have only a few editing suggestions:...

Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2007
Behavioral Support, Social relationships & Peer support.

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay! Most of my observations have to do with punctuation. ...

Writing FeedbackCeressieEF_Team2 - Feb 25, 2007
Memories are something everyone has! - SAT

3 - Greetings! It's good to get input from someone who has just been through it, so thanks, aznpoo! I...

Writing FeedbackkendraEF_Team2 - Feb 24, 2007
How to write a research paper on a novel?

5 - Thank you very much for the help. I was a little worried at first that I may not find...

Research PapersAlex0713Alex0713 - Feb 24, 2007
Short Essay on The Crucible

4 - And I appreciate your letting me know! Thank you! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackrollagasperEF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
"1990's and what happened" - intro and conclusion help

2 - Greetings! I think the conclusion is pretty good now, although the last sentence could be a bit stronger....

Essaysher_heartEF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
Personal information, interests, etc. - Resume and cover letter

6 - Thank you a lot, Ms Sarah Best regards for you Ha...

Letterslth_econlth_econ - Feb 23, 2007
'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits

3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...

Writing FeedbackTimcagoTimcago - Feb 23, 2007
Money is one of the greatest tools in life

5 - Yes I do, but I coudn't think I'm not good at writing essay I've been here for 1 year...

Writing Feedbackaljuraljur - Feb 22, 2007
American events in a specific year -introduction, thesis & conclusion

3 - i dont think my introduction makes sense or has anything to do w/ my topic or my cobclusion.. i...

Research Papersher_hearther_heart - Feb 22, 2007
Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice

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Writing Feedbackkendrakendra - Feb 22, 2007
My motivation to do graduate work

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GraduatempurEF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
My "suicide note"! (suicide poetry)

2 - Greetings! Yes, definitely, I could tell it was suicide poetry (I hope for an assignment! :-)). Probably the...

PoetryaznpooEF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
Spending a million dollar - an introduction for my essay?

7 - Greetings! Here is the edit: Most of us want to be wise when it comes to money, while...

EssaysaljurEF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
Time in Terelj - descriptive essay

4 - Greetings! I think your opening paragraph lacks cohesiveness. It's rather "all over the place." The first sentence sounds...

UndergraduateokunaEF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade

4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...

Writing FeedbackMagstar0202EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction

10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...

Writing FeedbackaznpooEF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...

Writing Feedbackcsneed1677EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you

3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...

Writing FeedbackasianbmEF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
parenthetical citing help

4 - Greetings! How parenthetical citations are formatted depends on whether you are using APA, MLA, or some other form...

Grammar, UsageeltronEF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other

3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...

Writing Feedbackyongen_92yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
Essay about the disappointments you faced in life

3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...

Writing Feedbackayshaaznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
I know personally how enriching studying abroad can be.

4 - Thank you so much Sarah. Having a pro review my essay and give me feedback is absolutely priceless. ...

Undergraduatepash_fashionpash_fashion - Feb 18, 2007