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2 - I think this is a very honest and honorable essay. You describe what you have done and how you...
UndergraduatebullyEF_Team5 - Oct 2, 2008
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UndergraduateupaEF_Team5 - Oct 2, 2008
|Helping people is my passion ; NEOUCOM - what would you contribute?
UndergraduateSchoubeySchoubey - Oct 1, 2008
|"the horrible quasi-suicide incident"; /Common App
2 - Excellent essay. Grammatically and mechanically pretty clean, and your point is very poignantly made. It flows well, is organized,...
UndergraduateWankmasterEF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Pharmacy school essay - participation in Mercer's Doctor of Pharmacy
4 - Good afternoon. Unfortunately, posting them here on the forum is the only way I can receive them so...
Graduateht43verEF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|"I am unique" - UCF admission; UCF community
3 - erotondo09 has a good point; you could leave the sentence as "I will do everything in my pwoer to...
UndergraduateYellowRosesEF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|"I have been in that very arena many times" - FSU admissions essay
3 - It is absolutely a good thing. The more secure and confident you are in your writing, the more confident...
UndergraduatepnkpolkadottzEF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Help with my thesis on link between obesity and suicide
4 - Good afternoon. I suggest begginning the writing process with an outline. Jot down all of the main topics...
EssayssuperkayteeEF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Stanford - not believing in evolution
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|Choices that define us and Haunt Us Essay
2 - Good morning. The second essay is better constructed and more organized, so I have edited it here: ...
Writing FeedbacktomotomoEF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Writing an essay about essay - Revising
2 - Good morning. Since the prompt for this assignment was not posted, I can edit for grammar and mechanics...
Writing Feedbacksexy1984EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|'Neal bhai' - your activities (150 words or less) common app
4 - It's a great essay, but the question says 'elaborate'. It tells a nice story but doesn't actually tell what...
Undergraduatekotak07j4ckieee - Sep 30, 2008
|Will take great pride in wearing the garnet and gold - FSU admissions essay
NEW - For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State...
|Four ways to control stress, take up a hobbies, exercise regularly, set realistic goals, etc.
2 - Controlling Stress In other words, having fun with family and friends ...If this is the conclusion to the...
Writing FeedbacktimkaEF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|Narrative Essay about a personal experience in which impacted your life
5 - Good afternoon. The essay is currently successfully written in present tense. The times when you are thinking back...
UndergraduateFissionMailedEF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|Essay length - should I abide by this?
5 - Good afternoon James. Please reread through the original post; this is not an essay for a "tutor" or...
Essaysekinkler90EF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|"The Melting Pot" - Common app Main essay
Undergraduatealeinadaleinad - Sep 30, 2008
|Introduction-contrast, it needs to be long and catchy
3 - hello gloria, thank you for that. the prompt will be, i need to make an introductory paragraph, about...
Essayspinks1026pinks1026 - Sep 30, 2008
|I love the campus, student life, and school - UCF essays
NEW - No longer than 500 words or a total of 7000 characters for both statements. How has your family...
|"Project Big Dipper changed my mindset" - Common apps short question
Undergraduatewongxywongxy - Sep 30, 2008
|help with an essay on propaganda
2 - Good morning. Well, it seems that your instructor is looking for examples in which propaganda is found in...
EssayspandaEF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|"There is a trace of each of these old values" - FSU Essay Evaluation
4 - Just that; relaxed "can't", "won't", etc. These are things we use because we are linguistically lazy. Formal academic writing,...
Undergraduateking723EF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|"Can we make a difference in the world?" Notre Dame
Undergraduatepandolfi91pandolfi91 - Sep 29, 2008
|The reasons for applying to Claflin and your future plans - admission
2 - Good evening. Well, first think about your answer. Why do you want to apply to this institution? What...
UndergraduateJohnDoeEF_Team5 - Sep 29, 2008
|My high school career is drawing to an end - UF Admissions Essay
3 - I believe your essay answers the prompt effectively. You use good examples and have a good intro as well...
UndergraduateBZellars09EF_Team5 - Sep 29, 2008
|Adolescence is the precursor to adulthood. - UF Admission Essay
NEW - Prompt: Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life. Adolescence - My essay: Adolescence is...
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NEW - Looking back on my life, I realized that I am not able to isolate one of three Latin words....
|Three main reasons that have inspired me to continue my education
4 - I think with the corrections this essay will answer the prompt easily. Your thinking and writing skills are illustrated,...
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