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"Speculating on my death" - essay

2 - Greetings! You've written a very thought-provoking and even provocative essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: ...

GraduatemahmoudEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
'The summer on My Space' - Uni of Texas personal essay

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay on a topic I haven't really seen addressed before. It's a very...

Undergraduatealex08EF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
Interpersonal communication & proxemics

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give you some editing tips on your excellent essay! one person catches a...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
Prompt A for UT at Austin: write about someone that has impacted you

4 - Greetings! I think the flow is very good and the structure is excellent. Each paragraph seems to flow...

Undergraduatealex08EF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
essay contest on personal experience. how do i make it more powerful?

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very powerful! I particularly like the ending. I have only a few...

Writing FeedbackposhbabydollEF_Team2 - Jan 5, 2008
Letter of Intent - my knowledge and experience in communication and media

2 - Greetings! I think you have a very good start to your letter! I do have a few editing...

Letterssatans_angelEF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
Satire Essay -Rights of Handicapped Children (lack of)

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job so far with what is undoubtedly a challenging assignment! One thing that...

Writing Feedbackwarrior108EF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
Open topic essay [graduate program in Human Rights]

2 - Greetings! You ask some very good questions! You are right that the word limit makes for a very...

GraduateleacroEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
"Prejudice and Stereotyping in the Media" - international student essay

3 - Greetings! I think you have improved your essay, yes! The fourth paragraph, though, about Russia, I found a...

Writing Feedbacksatans_angelEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
Mandatory arrest laws - domestic violence

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing for your excellent essay! in addition to homogenizing the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
'the word coconut' / 'aerial view' - UVA short answer essays

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a couple of excellent essays! And yes, the flow is fine! Here are...

UndergraduateblinkEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
"Changing the world" ; Corrine's personal essay

3 - Yeah, I noticed the last sentence is a little awkward, thanks for the tweaking!...

Undergraduatecorrinecorrine - Dec 31, 2007
'Greece lengthy security line' - Significant experience and its impact - personal

3 - Thanks! I tend to ramble and make things long and confusing. You really helped me cut down on my...

Undergraduatesinginheavensinginheaven - Dec 31, 2007
'Grand opera' / 'Employment opportunity' - A Comonapp and a Cornell Essay

7 - Greetings! In this type of essay, it would be better to use words to show the time gap,...

UndergraduateeschiverEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Review of 4 journal articles on domestic violence

2 - Greetings! As usual, your writing is excellent and in-depth. I did wonder, however, about the format you used...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Help for non academic writing his first Essay (mature Student 41 !)

2 - Greetings! I can understand that it might seem a little intimidating at first to plunge into academic writing!...

EssaysMartynmEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Essay: Intelligent Design not Science!

2 - Greetings! I think your essay makes some excellent points! One thing to look out for, though, is restating...

Writing Feedbackrsgino7EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Should Tuck Shop Stop Selling 'Junk Food"? - practice essay (article)

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! I agree that the tense can be a little tricky in...

Writing Feedbackshing200584EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Infringing copyright - writing exam practice essay (letter to editor)

2 - Greetings! I thnk your letter does an excellent job of addressing the issues presented! Here are some editing...

Lettersshing200584EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
History, patterns, and dynamics of violence between intimate partners

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing advice on your excellent essay! scholars integrated the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
The start of a witness report/assignment for law (high school level)

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! I have a few editing tips for you: A witness can...

Writing FeedbackEmiiilyEF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
Malagasy culture and traditional family - SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you very much for your advices and corrections...

Scholarshipstreetracerstreetracer - Dec 20, 2007
My exam practice---"complaint letter on animal abuse"

3 - It really helps me a lot. Thanks again!...

Lettersshing200584shing200584 - Dec 19, 2007
'Mexico-born dad' - someone that influenced me in my life.

2 - Greetings! Where in the world did you get the idea that you are not a good writer? Your...

UndergraduateMarihdzEF_Team2 - Dec 18, 2007
How to read a peer reviewed article in less than 20 minutes?

4 - Hey Fun Bob, I've always found Rapid Reader helpful in reading things quickly - rapidreader.com/scientific.html...

Grammar, UsageFun Bobnasph - Dec 18, 2007
'Complaining about gas prices' - Issue of international significance - Admission

3 - thanks a lot:)...

UndergraduateNSASNSAS - Dec 18, 2007
A memo to my manager as why my company should or shouldnt go global.

20 - Thanks a lot Sarah.. Annie I couldnt find any sample formats in the website mentioned above....

EssaysFun BobFun Bob - Dec 17, 2007
'Introduction to golf' - Common App short answer.

3 - Thank you so much....

Undergraduatet24met24me - Dec 17, 2007
PARENTS & Especially my mother; Personal statement: Important person

3 - Thanks a lot for your help!...

Undergraduatepaulpaul - Dec 17, 2007
Immigration - argument research paper

6 - Greetings! I think your essay turned out very well! Sorry I could not get back to you sooner,...

Writing FeedbacknewworldEF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2007