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'accept the greater challenge' - Review on my Essay for NCSSM

3 - Wow, didn't expect such a quick reply! I changed entranced to fascinated after rereading the paragraph (it sounds better)....

Undergraduateshayonsalehshayonsaleh - Jan 6, 2007
'Emerging as an artist' - Essay - Graphic Design

2 - Greetings! You have a good start on an interesting essay here! One thing I notice is that it...

UndergraduatemmmmEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2007
Writing Creative Essays

NEW - Creative Essays "The girl slowly walked into the room where she saw her dream date. She smiled and...

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'Homeschool' - Personal Statement for Common App

2 - Greetings! I think you have a very good start here. With just a little tinkering here and there,...

UndergraduateaudacityEF_Team2 - Jan 1, 2007
'Mass communication today' - University Ca Essays

6 - Greetings! You have written a wonderful essay! I have only a few small corrections to suggest: "the...

UndergraduaterosadiaEF_Team2 - Dec 31, 2006
short essay for review for police test

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some input! You have several nouns which require an...

Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Dec 30, 2006
'Japan anime' - Common App. (Wash U in St. Louis, Cornell, + Syracuse)

4 - You're welcome! And you have every reason to feel confident! ;-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

UndergraduateChiisanahimeEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2006
'international student and academic atmosphere' - Boston University Essay

4 - So glad we could help! :-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

UndergraduateskitzzEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.

2 - Greetings! This is a compelling story. It just needs a little tweaking. I lay flat on...

Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
Keeping cool - Essay revise

2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...

Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
A a system to think without system; Opinions on an unorthodox approach essay?

2 - Greetings! You appear to have the mind of a philosopher! I think this is a very creative essay,...

Undergraduaten0nl33tEF_Team2 - Dec 21, 2006
Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie

NEW - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...

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"Nobody gave me a chance!

2 - Greetings! I'll be glad to help with proofreading your essay. Let's take a look: "I had seen...

Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?

3 - Hi, thanks a lot for your suggestions, I am going to give it to my professor on Friday, and...

Writing Feedbackalikaalika - Dec 19, 2006
Stuck with my essays. Can anyone help me out?

2 - Hi Fred, Sorry to hear you are overloaded with your work. Yes, the Christmas season doesn't allow too...

EssaysfredyEF_Team - Dec 18, 2006
oral history project essay / gender theme

20 - You can only include the things you can find. :-) I hope this will go well for you....

Writing FeedbacksuperkayteeEF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
ROLE OF THE MYSTIC UTTERANCE "OM"; Herman Hesse's Siddhartha

2 - Greetings! Boy, does this take me back! I read Siddhartha about a gazillion years ago. I think you...

Book ReportsAdamskiEF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
Research paper on Science fair project. Help fast due tomorrow.

NEW - Well, it's not much of a research paper. I been procrastinating lately because winter break is just 2 days...

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Essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey

NEW - I am supposed to write an essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey, in cause and effect order, here...

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FBI CRIMINAL PROFILER; Statement of Goals and Purposes

4 - You're welcome! Happy Holidays to you too! Sarah...

Graduatecjjackson11EF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
Essay: From ARPANET to the Internet

4 - You're welcome--I was glad to help! Isn't the thesaurus a great tool? I love mine! I use the...

Writing FeedbackbubbledesignsEF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
A SMALL STEP - Evaluate a significant experience or achievement - Essay

4 - You're welcome! I, too, hope your grade is high! Sarah...

UndergraduatebernatEF_Team2 - Dec 14, 2006
Personal Statement (applying for Development studies)

8 - thank you very much for your feedback.. bests, Muhiddin...

UndergraduateMuhiddinMuhiddin - Dec 14, 2006
Essay about the career opportunities

3 - Hi! Thanks for your answer, I feel more motivated now:)...

Writing Feedbackbernatbernat - Dec 13, 2006
Tim O'Brien question

2 - Greetings! I couldn't quite tell from your post just what your questions are. Can you be more specific? ...

Book ReportssamsungEF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2006
differences between men and women in a relationship

2 - Greetins, Paola! Sounds like you'll be doing a "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus"-type essay, eh?...

EssaysPaolaSalcedoEF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2006
Thesis - Relations of French and English Canadians

3 - Awesome! Thanks for the advise, I'll take it from here....

Dissertationsdgolverkdgolverk - Dec 11, 2006
Burst of Rainbow. Compare contrast essay: skittles and starbursts

5 - one girl wrote a 4 page paper. returned it sayin it was to long and then she put it...

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299BadAngel299 - Dec 11, 2006
How to Write a Case Study?

NEW - Case studies can be used in any academic discipline. The purpose of a case study is to provide a...

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Position Paper on Kids and the importance of grammar

NEW - I have not changed my position from my previous argument. I still firmly believe that youth will greatly benefit...

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