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Annotated Bibliography for "Affirmative Action in the Workplace"

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Grammar, Usageslmcc1EF_Team2 - Dec 4, 2007
a comparative essay on the rhetorical devices and messages between ..

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips for you: Thoreau and King Jr.,...

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"interaction of porcelain" - my art essay

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Writing Feedbackwx079076EF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
newfound, vocab... grammar... and more!

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Grammar, UsageAngleterreEF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
The apastrophe question and more

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Grammar, UsageAngleterreEF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
Personal Essay for Scholarship... is it too funny?

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ScholarshipswimfinEF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
new heights; grammar, sentence structure, AND vocab!

2 - Greetings! I'm glad to help with a bit of editing! "New heights" sounds fine to me, but...

Grammar, UsageAngleterreEF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
Descriptive essay about a very mundane object [THE BARRETTE]

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very good! I do think the way you explained it to me...

Writing FeedbacksweetsEF_Team2 - Dec 2, 2007
"Global Warming - Global Causes, Effects, and Methods to Prevent" - review and do editing!

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Rutgers University: As a Libra I can I would describe myself...

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UndergraduatefragoEF_Team2 - Dec 1, 2007
Need Help with a research paper about Air Pollution in New York City

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Research PapersKarinaEF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
Descriptive analysis of a business book

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Writing Feedbacklondres128EF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
'corporate strategy of business' - (describe where you come from)

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Undergraduatesweetxtartsweetxtart - Nov 30, 2007
'My Indian heritage' - Talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience essay

2 - Greetings! What an excellent, well-written essay! It is virtually flawless; just one comma will make it perfect: ...

UndergraduatesweetxtartEF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
"Your abilities with a rival candidate for a job" - compare-contrast essay

4 - Greetings! If you are supposed to write it as a letter to the boss, that should give you...

EssayscatEF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
The stress a person undergoes when applying for admissions - essay

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a good essay! However, I think you should eliminate the first paragraph. It...

UndergraduatemcasEF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
'taking care of others' - UC prompt #1

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UndergraduatephotoguyEF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
The monarchs had to rule with greater wisdom than themselves had intended

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Writing FeedbackssddEF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
Editing for a service activity essay

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Writing Feedbackxxalixxxxalixx - Nov 29, 2007
"A Celebration of Dai de Los Muertos" - concert paper help me

NEW - A Celebration of Dai de Los Muertos The name of the play is "Reunion" wrote by Olga Sanchez...

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Essay on not regretting things - how to start?

8 - Greetings! I really like this kind of assignment, because it gives you a lot of creative freedom. If...

Essaysneen4thEF_Team2 - Nov 29, 2007
MOVING TO AMERICA; "Challenging Experience"

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Undergraduatevishal720fozyn76 - Nov 29, 2007
Reflection Essay, but broad description

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EssaysVitVit - Nov 29, 2007
Neo-Classical Art, White House - Essay

NEW - "By the last quarter of the 18th century a new style "Neo- Classical Art" emerged, one that artists embraced...

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'excel in math & science and personal qualities' - uc

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Undergraduatemcasmcas - Nov 29, 2007
'a Chilean with a love' - World I come from essay

2 - Greetings! What a delightful essay! I think you did a great job answering the prompt. I have just...

UndergraduatebizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Nov 29, 2007
I Need Help in the "Literature" Type of Essay

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EssaysalashmoriEF_Team2 - Nov 29, 2007
Discussion about what I learned this semester

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Writing FeedbackmandymooreEF_Team2 - Nov 28, 2007
Citing from an Anthology

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Grammar, UsageA5HLEYEF_Team2 - Nov 28, 2007
Which is better - SPEND money or SAVE money?

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Writing Feedbackpaulpaul - Nov 28, 2007