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2 - This essay seems to focus more on your own view of the recent economic turmoil than on Dr. Core's...
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|CommonApp Personal Essay (Topic of your Choice, incentives for charitable)
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6 - The downward trend hurts a bit because universities typically expect to see a 5-10% drop in students grades as...
UndergraduateUmichEF_Sean - Jan 7, 2009
|common app essay, topic of your choice ("Mona Lisa smiles")
6 - Another thing that comes to mind: "Now I have learned to balance the two sides of me -sincerity and...
Undergraduatelee337EF_Sean - Jan 7, 2009
|"Food heaven", "financial capital" and "shopping Mecca" - "Issue of local concern" Michigan essay
8 - your right, hey im really sorry A346, my bad honestly..i shoudlnt have jumped to conclusions......
UndergraduateA346mustaa - Jan 7, 2009
|'a developed and a developing economy' - U of T essay ( issue of importance)
10 - You've got it. You definitely answered the prompt... Just make the final tweaks to the essay and send it!!!...
UndergraduateshamveelEF_Constance - Jan 7, 2009
|Common app short essay - an after school club
3 - Great Job for the suggestions, Shamveel!! Menamilad, I would go with what Shamveel wrote. A few times you were...
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|"Chase my love to secret of nature and philosophy" - Intellectual Goal
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|Cbest exam; Property theft - problem in community essay
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|Miracle. The birth of a new child. International Baccalaureate Admission paper.
Undergraduateicemaster2340EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
|"From Bolivia" - American University Essay
10 - Just cut out the unnecessary stuff, like this: Smack! my headboard resonated as I arose violently after I...
UndergraduateluisinarraEF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
|'Liberalisation of aviation' - Airline deregulation essay
2 - The airline industry currently occupies a very important place in the Irish market, due to both the major changes...
Writing FeedbackTizzyEF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
|Statement of Purpose / Admission Essay for U of Maryland ME Grad Program
2 - This essay is excellent! You cannot help but write an impressive essay, because you truly are a serious student....
GraduateMrDominoEF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
|We should sense the world as it is; extracurricular activity, community service essay
3 - When I was in fifth grade, my teacher organized a class visit to Welfare House. It was the first...
Undergraduategdtbj2008EF_Constance - Jan 7, 2009
|'A workaholic in a pharmacy' - UCF Burnett Honors College
NEW - Prompt: It is Tuesday, March 14th, year 2028. Please describe the entries in your appointment book for the day...
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UndergraduateSofiazowzow - Jan 7, 2009
|Fellowship Essay - Graduate Arabic - University of Maryland
NEW - 2. The essay should not exceed 1000 words. 1. What is your reason for applying for a Flagship...
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|USC essay- "to be a successful Hispanic", let me know what you think
Undergraduatelattentlattent - Jan 6, 2009
|I just realized that it is my grandfather's influence that has molded me into what I am today
7 - Yes, the rule for powerful communication is: Say it, explain it, and then say it again. That way, the...
UndergraduateSlimeEF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
|Common Application essay- Money
3 - Linnus is absolutely right! you can tell us one of your experience with money stuff (something like that) which...
Undergraduatemenamiladshine lee - Jan 6, 2009
|Sharps and Flats - common app essay...
Undergraduateonindoicemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009
|What is a book that has inspired you? (Pourquoi)
Book ReportsEchoEF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
|writing technique advices for the essay " regular and election days"
8 - It is better than it was, certainly. You now sound more thoughtful, and have gone into more depth on...
Writing FeedbackcraverEF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
|FSU essay ("traditions and customs that have become a part of my life")
11 - True, if you start playing around with formatting, you can make an essay seem slightly longer or shorter than...
Undergraduatevk123EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
|'In love with the sky' - Main essay. Influential experience in ur life
21 - You have several options, but one approach would be to say that when you first came here, you found...
Undergraduatenewsha31EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
|Colorado State University Admissions
4 - Kevin's suggestions are excellent, especially the part about beginning with "Now would be a good time to explain how...
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