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7 - I actually thought the metaphorical use of the "road of life" was quite appealing. I hope you integrated your...
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2 - As a distinguished member of my school's community and a devoted athlete, I believe in dependability, responsibility, and honesty....
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6 - This is something that gives you an excuse to call the admissions office, and tell your name, make a...
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|Common App: Fundraising consultant, physical therapist and neonatologist
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UndergraduateSweetGirlSweetGirl - Dec 28, 2008
|U of Illinois #1 (My fascination with the business world)
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UndergraduateprincetongirlEF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
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|BU Supplement (I have many connections with Boston)
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|Common App Essay ("Grazie! Grazie!")
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