|The story of "Hunters In The Snow" - an essay on arguing from experience
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|'Never, never give up' - students meeting obstacles
NEW - This is today essay. Opinion about the expression 'Never, never give up' "Every time I meet obstacles on...
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|Reduce stress, body and mind; GED Essay - Why people enjoy hobbies
NEW - Could you please advise and comment my essay. I am preparing for GED writing at the moment. Your feed...
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|"My art is me"; Early childhood eassy on creativity
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|Comparative Analysis Essay of Heroes
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|St. Thomas - meaningful contribution you have made
NEW - Prompt: Describe a meaningful contribution you have made through school, church, or community service St. Louis Dream Center...
|'My boyfriend is moving' - UF: experience & affect your college experience
NEW - Little did I know that a "For Sale" sign would test my strength and perseverance. Fettered by youth, doubt,...
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3 - A few thoughts that you could include to make your essay more rounded. Do you think that instructors do...
Writing FeedbackkincadeEF_Team5 - Sep 16, 2008
|Common Application Essay: Balance
NEW - Here is what I have, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! I can feel the eyes...
|Analyze the Effectiveness of Helen Prejeans argument on the Death Penalty
NEW - I would definitely appreciate some feedback here. =] Now, my teacher did not require proper citations or anything for...
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|Letter about "My most unhappy experience" - party at Jane's house
NEW - Good evening, Gloria. Please help me check this letter out. "Dear Mary, How have you been doing? I'm...
|Some people trust their first impression about a person, while some do not.
4 - Thank you, Gloria. [Is there any way other than a 'thank you' to express my gratitude for your help?...
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|Many people base on advertising to assess things. Getting know about a country.
2 - Let's see: "Many people use advertising as a base to assess things. To me, advertising is not reliable...
Writing FeedbackjerryEF_Team5 - Sep 15, 2008
|'New York City's China Town' - Vires, Aates, Mores essay...
3 - it should be intellectually in the 2nd sentance instead of physically, and the last sentance in the first paragraph....
Undergraduateswooshnic21swooshnic21 - Sep 15, 2008
|Driving force in life - FSU undergrad essay
NEW - FSU prompt: Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life...
|My first summer in high school, camp counselor position - essay
NEW - The auctioneer bellowed out: "Going Once!" I looked at my Dad, he looked at me. The tension was rising!...
|More education than required at job site equals dissatisfaction? - essay
NEW - People who receive more education than they need to function their jobs will feel dissatisfaction. Do you agree or...
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|Drunk - sad story
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|Common App Essay: Either obstacle to overcome or Other
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|'different from my peers' - An essay - Why MIT should admit me?
8 - Thanks a ton!! Do you think this essay has that 'spark', which is required to stand out in the...
Undergraduateadrivitadrivit - Sep 14, 2008
|'his island of Puerto Rico' - FSU Essae
3 - FSU Essay second draft Growing up in a family with parents who didn't have much formal education, I...
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|'a gymnastics routine' - FSU Admission Essay
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|Comparative Essay - Woman at Point Zero vs. Death and the Maiden
2 - Good afternoon. I would suggest beginning by finding the instances within each work that you think show the...
EssaysThe_ManEF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
|I am essay - being a baseball player and being a guitar player
2 - Your essay is disorganized. Try taking one subject at a time, discuss it, and then move on to the...
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|Writing persuasive essay -Salem witch trials
2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin by doing some research on some of the victims of the Salem...
EssaysstarsongEF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
|Qualities and characteristics for an individual at UCF
NEW - first draft. need to cut it by 150 words. be as critical as possible What are essential qualities...
|FAMU: how my name has influenced me
NEW - this is about describing how family culture/ history has influenced you I need to know is this acceptable.. i...
|Looking to entry to a competitive Public Health School
NEW - I would like share with you this essay. Please made your comments: Public Health School - Essay ...
|'Varied cultures' - State of Maine, UNI of Florida Essay
2 - You've got a good essay here; just a few corrections. I like the basis for your essay; I think...
UndergraduateashcakesEF_Team5 - Sep 13, 2008
|Boston College Essay - discussing concerns
NEW - 2 Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you Over the...