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Undergraduatedsacksdsacks - Dec 29, 2008
|Need help with one of the Stanford's prompts?
4 - Thanks for the response. And can anyone tell me how to remove or delete this thread, because all...
Undergraduateavneeeetavneeeet - Dec 29, 2008
|'Internship participation' - NYU short answer: Why did you chose this school?
11 - Yeah I agree with Zowzow about the second sentence. It is too long I think. "Gallatin will allow me...
Undergraduatepencilskim - Dec 29, 2008
|BU supplement essays (engineering and BU)
Undergraduatesean1991sean1991 - Dec 29, 2008
|University of Illlinois (academic interests vs professional goals)
Undergraduatemustaamustaa - Dec 29, 2008
|Common app short answer - Fiber optics (150 words)
5 - Start with an intro sentence that captures the central truth of the essay. Three-dimensional vision has been used to...
UndergraduateabcdefgEF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|NYU Short Answers--(singing, bicycle, summer vacation)
5 - Molly and Christine, please check out the contributor page (link at the bottom of the screen), because you could...
UndergraduatemgbingerEF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|common app short answer ("the smallest player on the court")
4 - Standing one inch short of five feet, and always the smallest player on the court, the odds have always...
UndergraduateuhlyssuhEF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|most appealing about Columbia (afraid it Doesnt make sense...)
6 - My generation needs to face the fact that the job market is increasingly competitive due to the economic crisis....
Undergraduateyfung91EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|Rochester supplement (different points of view)
4 - For any foreign students coming to the United States, it is difficult to adapt to the new environment. I...
UndergraduateVeggyEF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|Writing to improve my essay - New Year resolution
Writing Feedbackvickywvickyw - Dec 29, 2008
|Duke Application Essay (risk, dilemma)
UndergraduateNichole_PEF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|Listing and Describing activities - using incomplete sentences?
6 - I used complete sentences when I answered this question. It seemed impossible to lists everything with the character limit,...
EssaysdsacksJohnDavid - Dec 29, 2008
|Health Care; UM / Issue of Importance(personal, national, international)
4 - "Util just recently, health care had never even been an tangible option for my parents" A before a...
Undergraduatejane6272timothyerdei - Dec 29, 2008
|essay of Virginia DId I answer the question+ grammar
5 - I make some changes to make the essay more expressive. I focus less on the story but focus more...
Undergraduatejustinwangjustinwang - Dec 29, 2008
|Music is my way of life, my soul and my community. Rice... why this college?
8 - My father is an accomplished singer, cellist, piano accompanist, and choir director; while, my mother is violinist, and my...
UndergraduatepandoraEF_Constance - Dec 29, 2008
|significant experience - practicing playing the piano
3 - I would add a bit more to the first paragraph. Use it as an introductory paragraph. I noticed that...
Undergraduateowen92217EF_Constance - Dec 29, 2008
|Common App - "Childhood's just like a playground. Think about it."
Undergraduaten00bl3tn00bl3t - Dec 29, 2008
|CommonApp Short Answer (Yearbook)
6 - Contents wise, should I be more creative? Should I be doing more showing than telling? Any other advice apart...
Undergraduatecyjung91Ivy_91 - Dec 29, 2008
|THIS IS MY ESSAY FOR UIUC,I THINK IT REALLY NEED ENHANCEMENT
4 - Thank you...
Undergraduateqiuerweiqiuerwei - Dec 29, 2008
|My why essays
Undergraduategracetmgracetm - Dec 29, 2008
|NYU SUPPS: worked vacations/ family passed trait/ activity an NYU/ song/ ...
4 - The only thing I could suggest would be to focus entirely on the tennis, since you already dedicate half...
Undergraduategcueva26EF_Sean - Dec 29, 2008
|THINK BIG; "Dr. Ben Carson, a world-renowned neurosurgeon " - Character in fiction
3 - You're getting there. Some more advice: "From that page on, I decided that for any task I have...
UndergraduatenbarleyEF_Sean - Dec 29, 2008
|Common app, two essays on music. Which one's better?
3 - Wow! These are both really fantastic essays! If I had to choose, I would pick the first one because...
Undergraduatecoolshadow888zPoliChick - Dec 29, 2008
|Leadership for University of Bufallo
2 - You need to stop writing in abstract terms and start writing using concrete examples. There were people you idolized...
Undergraduatefelixs07EF_Sean - Dec 29, 2008
|"Rome did not finish building in one day." - admission essay help
NEW - this is the topic: Choose an issue of importance to you-the issue could be personal, school related, local, political,...
|An issue of importance to and its significance (Terror strikes)
3 - I agree with Sean. Also, this topic is a bit to controversial and it might be risky talking about...
UndergraduatexyzJohnDavid - Dec 29, 2008
|Carnegie Mellon University (the reputation and economics)
Undergraduatewongxywongxy - Dec 29, 2008
|Why Carnegie (economics essay)
9 - you are totally right. But I just wanted to focus more on me and my expeirience. But your comment...
UndergraduateVeggyVeggy - Dec 29, 2008
|Elaborate on one of your activities (sunny day)
Undergraduatebaubaubaubau - Dec 29, 2008