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Once I was....., now I am..... - Essay

3 - Wow! Great ideas!!! Thank you very much!!!...

Essaysoxylapkaoxylapka - Jan 25, 2007
'Influencing the future' - COMMON APP - Person with siginificant influence

3 - Thank you for your help...I really appreciate it. Especially the editing notes i'm terrible with those sort of things....

UndergraduateKdmaxwellKdmaxwell - Jan 25, 2007
Custom essay about my wallet

NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...

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"The stangest thing i ever stole" - English Essay

3 - Greetings! Let me give you even more ideas:). What an interesting prompt! However, I can see how you...

EssaysgazzaEF_Team - Jan 23, 2007
Howard Community College, Essay for scholarship application

2 - Greetings! Here are the changes I would suggest: At 6:45 pm, after I said the last "goodbye"...

ScholarshipryanEF_Team2 - Jan 20, 2007
'A Night Classes program' - college application short response

5 - Many many thanks.......

Undergraduateryanryan - Jan 19, 2007
I Need Help With a Thesis Sentence for a Movie

2 - Greetings! Before writing your thesis statement, you need to be clear on what argument(s) your essay will be...

EssaysshineysuitmanEF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
'In the Lord of the Flies...' - Part of an Essay

4 - I think you're probably right about that. Not that it's always a bad thing to be "forced" to read...

Book Reportsss03EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
What subject to choose from for business English class?

2 - Greetings! It can certainly be more difficult to choose a topic when the options are so wide open....

Research PapersasianbmEF_Team2 - Jan 16, 2007
'the fraternity brothers' - essay

NEW - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...

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[about society] - Is this paragraph understandable?

3 - Okey, thanks so much for the feedback...

Grammar, Usagetrine_321trine_321 - Jan 14, 2007
THE 12th CENTURY RENAISSANCE; history class essay

5 - Greetings! You are correct that the literal meaning of the word "renaissance" is "rebirth." It comes from a...

Writing FeedbackalikaEF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets"

2 - Greetings! First I'll look at technical things like grammar, sentence structure and punctuation: The level of violence...

Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
Academic Poetry Writing - everybody can write a poem. Or not?

NEW - Poetry. It's not just for depressed Goth kids anymore. Actually, it never was. All sorts of people write...

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Applying for a fellowship...

7 - I'm blushing and I'm thankful... thank you......

GraduatePROL1F1CPROL1F1C - Jan 11, 2007
'accept the greater challenge' - Review on my Essay for NCSSM

3 - Wow, didn't expect such a quick reply! I changed entranced to fascinated after rereading the paragraph (it sounds better)....

Undergraduateshayonsalehshayonsaleh - Jan 6, 2007
'Emerging as an artist' - Essay - Graphic Design

2 - Greetings! You have a good start on an interesting essay here! One thing I notice is that it...

UndergraduatemmmmEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2007
Writing Creative Essays

NEW - Creative Essays "The girl slowly walked into the room where she saw her dream date. She smiled and...

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'Homeschool' - Personal Statement for Common App

2 - Greetings! I think you have a very good start here. With just a little tinkering here and there,...

UndergraduateaudacityEF_Team2 - Jan 1, 2007
'Mass communication today' - University Ca Essays

6 - Greetings! You have written a wonderful essay! I have only a few small corrections to suggest: "the...

UndergraduaterosadiaEF_Team2 - Dec 31, 2006
short essay for review for police test

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some input! You have several nouns which require an article...

Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Dec 30, 2006
'Japan anime' - Common App. (Wash U in St. Louis, Cornell, + Syracuse)

4 - You're welcome! And you have every reason to feel confident! ;-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

UndergraduateChiisanahimeEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2006
'international student and academic atmosphere' - Boston University Essay

4 - So glad we could help! :-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

UndergraduateskitzzEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.

2 - Greetings! This is a compelling story. It just needs a little tweaking. I lay flat on my...

Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
Keeping cool - Essay revise

2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...

Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
A a system to think without system; Opinions on an unorthodox approach essay?

2 - Greetings! You appear to have the mind of a philosopher! I think this is a very creative essay,...

Undergraduaten0nl33tEF_Team2 - Dec 21, 2006
Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie

NEW - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...

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"Nobody gave me a chance!

2 - Greetings! I'll be glad to help with proofreading your essay. Let's take a look: "I had seen...

Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?

3 - Hi, thanks a lot for your suggestions, I am going to give it to my professor on Friday, and...

Writing Feedbackalikaalika - Dec 19, 2006
Stuck with my essays. Can anyone help me out?

2 - Hi Fred, Sorry to hear you are overloaded with your work. Yes, the Christmas season doesn't allow too...

EssaysfredyEF_Team - Dec 18, 2006