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my action research project

4 - Greetings! I know how stressful a big project like this cane be! You've done a lot of good...

Research PapersfebrariusEF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
I am a person with clear goals; MEDICAL SCHOLARSHIP

2 - Greetings! Great essay! I have just a few suggestions: but my dad told me fascinating stories about...

ScholarshipflorezstephanieEF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
Environment of the world-20 years after / Future - topic idea

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EssayspinuEF_Team2 - Jun 18, 2007
My most recent discovery is Japanese music, J-ROCK

11 - I like the metaphor a lot, so I think I'll be using something like that! Thank you very,...

Writing FeedbackMissHiwatariMissHiwatari - Jun 18, 2007
structure of a process paper?

4 - Greetings! A process essay will tell the reader how to do something, or explain how something is done....

Essaysangelfire_kayeEF_Team2 - Jun 17, 2007
Bass guitar - compare/contrast

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Grammar, UsagesecondhandgodEF_Team2 - Jun 15, 2007
sadako sasaki - book summary

2 - Greetings! I think you're right that "leukemia" is not capitalized. Only diseases named after people need to be...

Book ReportskikayEF_Team2 - Jun 15, 2007
A presence in oneself -- an essay

19 - So have I! Take care! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - Jun 14, 2007
Buy Buy Buy! (essay on american compulsive shopping)

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Writing Feedbacksecondhandgodsecondhandgod - Jun 14, 2007
'Trying to adapt to this foreign country' - significant learning experience

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Undergraduatekikaykikay - Jun 14, 2007
Memo style answer about Alberto Gonzales for graduate school

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GraduatePROL1F1CEF_Team2 - Jun 12, 2007
Research Paper on Poverty in Africa

3 - Greetings, Thanks for your promptly reply. I will follow your suggestions. This will really help me since i...

Research PapersjungleFire007jungleFire007 - Jun 11, 2007
How we may cause natural events to happen - an essay

18 - Lead away! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - Jun 10, 2007
the Art Institute of Seattle, Scholarship essay statement?

4 - Greetings! I like what you've added, explaining your skills. One thing I might suggest: I have already...

ScholarshiparacidEF_Team2 - Jun 10, 2007
Difference between Affect and Effect? Grammar

3 - Thank you again! It was hard for me to understand the definition of these words in the dictionary, but...

Grammar, Usagekrieglekriegle - Jun 9, 2007
The human cause of global warming? Research essay.

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Writing Feedbackkrieglekriegle - Jun 9, 2007
College freshman after 15 year break - first essay for this class

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Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07EF_Team2 - Jun 9, 2007
need help for early Black-White interracial

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Research Papersyouinyouin - Jun 8, 2007
Fitzgerald shows in his novel that materialism causes the corruption of society

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Book Reportscat08EF_Team2 - Jun 8, 2007
Feedback wanted for the first essay I've written in 16 years!! GULP

2 - Greetings! We always try to be gentle here! And, the truth is, you've written a really delightful essay!...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Brave New World- Huxley's message?

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Writing Feedbackpoohbear0805poohbear0805 - Jun 6, 2007
Response to "brave new world" by Danial

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Writing FeedbackDaniallsEF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
Eastern thought - an introduction in three parts

24 - Thanks! She lived a good life; seven years, as is average for a ferret. I still miss her, after...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Childhood memory by anthony qcity

2 - Greetings! What a great story! Your writing is very colorful and engaging. I particularly like the metaphor about...

Writing FeedbackqcitysluggerEF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Running Backs: Training and Knowledge to become Successful.

4 - Greetings! I agree, you've written a good essay! I have just a few suggestions: These players did...

Writing FeedbackathiththanEF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Summary of a childhood experience

2 - Greetings! The details really make the story! It's a great essay; I have just a few editing tips:...

Writing FeedbackDIPSETEF_Team2 - Jun 3, 2007
Should Southerners be consider their own ethnic group? Essay

2 - Greetings! If I understand you correctly, you're wanting help writing a thesis statement? If so, you might approach...

EssaysBlue840EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Grapes of Wrath essay correction

7 - Greetings! Sorry, I couldn't get to you before the essay was due, but I think you did an...

Book Reportscat08EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Vocabulary Composition on Soccer

2 - Greetings! What a delightful essay! I love your analysis of soccer and its relationship to politics. Your vocabulary...

Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Expository Essay: Important holidays for me

3 - Greetings! Congratulations on working towards your G.E.D.! I think you've done a fine job with your essay--particularly impressive...

Writing FeedbackVerdeEF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007