|Once I was....., now I am..... - Essay
3 - Wow! Great ideas!!! Thank you very much!!!...
Essaysoxylapkaoxylapka - Jan 25, 2007
|'Influencing the future' - COMMON APP - Person with siginificant influence
3 - Thank you for your help...I really appreciate it. Especially the editing notes i'm terrible with those sort of things....
UndergraduateKdmaxwellKdmaxwell - Jan 25, 2007
|Custom essay about my wallet
NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...
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|"The stangest thing i ever stole" - English Essay
3 - Greetings! Let me give you even more ideas:). What an interesting prompt! However, I can see how you...
EssaysgazzaEF_Team - Jan 23, 2007
|Howard Community College, Essay for scholarship application
2 - Greetings! Here are the changes I would suggest: At 6:45 pm, after I said the last "goodbye"...
ScholarshipryanEF_Team2 - Jan 20, 2007
|'A Night Classes program' - college application short response
5 - Many many thanks.......
Undergraduateryanryan - Jan 19, 2007
|I Need Help With a Thesis Sentence for a Movie
2 - Greetings! Before writing your thesis statement, you need to be clear on what argument(s) your essay will be...
EssaysshineysuitmanEF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
|'In the Lord of the Flies...' - Part of an Essay
4 - I think you're probably right about that. Not that it's always a bad thing to be "forced" to read...
Book Reportsss03EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
|What subject to choose from for business English class?
2 - Greetings! It can certainly be more difficult to choose a topic when the options are so wide open....
Research PapersasianbmEF_Team2 - Jan 16, 2007
|'the fraternity brothers' - essay
NEW - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...
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|[about society] - Is this paragraph understandable?
3 - Okey, thanks so much for the feedback...
Grammar, Usagetrine_321trine_321 - Jan 14, 2007
|THE 12th CENTURY RENAISSANCE; history class essay
5 - Greetings! You are correct that the literal meaning of the word "renaissance" is "rebirth." It comes from a...
Writing FeedbackalikaEF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets"
2 - Greetings! First I'll look at technical things like grammar, sentence structure and punctuation: The level of violence...
Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|Academic Poetry Writing - everybody can write a poem. Or not?
NEW - Poetry. It's not just for depressed Goth kids anymore. Actually, it never was. All sorts of people write...
|Applying for a fellowship...
7 - I'm blushing and I'm thankful... thank you......
GraduatePROL1F1CPROL1F1C - Jan 11, 2007
|'accept the greater challenge' - Review on my Essay for NCSSM
3 - Wow, didn't expect such a quick reply! I changed entranced to fascinated after rereading the paragraph (it sounds better)....
Undergraduateshayonsalehshayonsaleh - Jan 6, 2007
|'Emerging as an artist' - Essay - Graphic Design
2 - Greetings! You have a good start on an interesting essay here! One thing I notice is that it...
UndergraduatemmmmEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2007
|Writing Creative Essays
NEW - Creative Essays "The girl slowly walked into the room where she saw her dream date. She smiled and...
|'Homeschool' - Personal Statement for Common App
2 - Greetings! I think you have a very good start here. With just a little tinkering here and there,...
UndergraduateaudacityEF_Team2 - Jan 1, 2007
|'Mass communication today' - University Ca Essays
6 - Greetings! You have written a wonderful essay! I have only a few small corrections to suggest: "the...
UndergraduaterosadiaEF_Team2 - Dec 31, 2006
|short essay for review for police test
2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some input! You have several nouns which require an article...
Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Dec 30, 2006
|'Japan anime' - Common App. (Wash U in St. Louis, Cornell, + Syracuse)
4 - You're welcome! And you have every reason to feel confident! ;-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...
UndergraduateChiisanahimeEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2006
|'international student and academic atmosphere' - Boston University Essay
4 - So glad we could help! :-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...
UndergraduateskitzzEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.
2 - Greetings! This is a compelling story. It just needs a little tweaking. I lay flat on my...
Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Keeping cool - Essay revise
2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...
Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|A a system to think without system; Opinions on an unorthodox approach essay?
2 - Greetings! You appear to have the mind of a philosopher! I think this is a very creative essay,...
Undergraduaten0nl33tEF_Team2 - Dec 21, 2006
|Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie
NEW - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...
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|"Nobody gave me a chance!
2 - Greetings! I'll be glad to help with proofreading your essay. Let's take a look: "I had seen...
Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
|PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?
3 - Hi, thanks a lot for your suggestions, I am going to give it to my professor on Friday, and...
Writing Feedbackalikaalika - Dec 19, 2006
|Stuck with my essays. Can anyone help me out?
2 - Hi Fred, Sorry to hear you are overloaded with your work. Yes, the Christmas season doesn't allow too...
EssaysfredyEF_Team - Dec 18, 2006