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he crowd is roaring and yelling, "Go WIZ"; Narrative Essay / The Wiz

2 - Greetings! What you have so far is very good! I think probably the panicking would work well right...

Writing FeedbackmSaKooLEF_Team2 - May 14, 2007
IS THIS A GOOD PHILOSOPHY PAPER FROM DIFFERERENT PERSPECTIVES?

3 - Wow!!! I cant believe I didnt know about this essay helper thing before. I appreciate it greatly Sarah. Thank...

Essaysshenz711shenz711 - May 13, 2007
Mural on Broad and Spring Garde - help with my "statement of interest"

2 - Greetings! For someone who has no experience writing a statement of interest, you have done a marvelous job!...

Undergraduatelint99EF_Team2 - May 11, 2007
'my High School Mathematics teacher' Admission essay of mine

5 - Greetings! It can be a challenge to cut out a significant portion of something you have written--after all,...

UndergraduateanhminhEF_Team2 - May 10, 2007
CONTRACT; business law assignment

4 - Greetings! Those are good questions. The "no worries" remark does not affect the breach of duty/negligence as far...

UndergraduatelawstudentEF_Team2 - May 10, 2007
International human rights law essay

3 - Hi Thanks alot! That really cleared things up :-) Regards...

Essaysna2iana2ia - May 9, 2007
The Unbearable Lightness, The Dancer Upstairs, The Coast of Utopia

2 - Greetings! You've been working hard, and it shows! I have just a few editing suggestions: since eternal...

Book ReportssilkflowersEF_Team2 - May 9, 2007
"Fiction or Fact-Men Suffering from A Girl's Problem" - research paper

2 - Greetings! You've written a very interesting essay with lots of supporting information! I noted just a few things:...

Writing FeedbackTimcagoEF_Team2 - May 8, 2007
"See the sky" essay

3 - Thank you Sarah. You have always found something encouraging to say. Rajiv...

Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 8, 2007
Why a certain Tv show is popular- cause and effect essay. HELP...

2 - Greetings! That's an interesting topic! You'll want to think about what types of things might make a show...

EssayskatharinaEF_Team2 - May 7, 2007
Hackers aren't criminals but just regular people who are interested in computers.

4 - Here are a couple of things to remember when writing your thesis statement: In formal writing, don't use...

EssaysTopNerdJREF_Team2 - May 7, 2007
'Love is blind, but sees into the heart' - Five senses - poem

4 - I want to do my collage just like you said...but i'm not sure like how to present it to...

Poetrymariamaria - May 7, 2007
Short paper discussing SETTING

4 - Greetings! I like your revision and your conclusion! The only thing I would point out is that one...

Writing FeedbackrollagasperEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
Term paper about the American National Red Cross

2 - Greetings! You ask some very good questions! I'll give you the answers within the best of my knowledge,...

EssaysapragalEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
"Then" as an adjective

4 - Greetings! What an excellent question! Appearance wise...appearance-wise...appearancewise...among the three, I'd be inclined to go with the hyphenated version!...

Grammar, UsagerollagasperEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
Global warming is the gradual increase in Earth's temperature

4 - Wow! Thanks for the info! :-)) Sarah...

Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
Edit my research paper on anabolic steroids

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing advice. Anabolic steroids, an amazing medical drug, was...

Research PapersTimcagoEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
Hate poem - I need some words that end in ing describing this feeling

12 - Greetings! I think your poem can be used creatively in any way you like. Your instructor has given...

PoetrymariaEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
Expository essay on my early years

4 - Greetings! Well, individual instructors have their own takes on things. I suppose just consider this is an essay...

Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
autobiographical narrative account on "Who am I"

2 - Greetings! I agree that writing about yourself can be tough, but I think you've done an admirable job!...

Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
persuasive essay on why the 21st century is the best

4 - Greetings! Yes, those passages are much easier to understand now! I just want to make a couple of...

Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - May 5, 2007
THE STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES OF USING ECLECTIC TEXTS OF THE BIBLE

3 - Many thanks! This will be a better graded essay than I could have got on my own :)...

Writing Feedbackwwe_nutterwwe_nutter - May 5, 2007
THEOLOGY OF LIBERATION RELAVANT, THEOLOGY OF HOPE TODAY

3 - Many thanks! This will be a better graded essay than I could have got on my own :)...

Writing Feedbackwwe_nutterwwe_nutter - May 5, 2007
Compare/Contrast: Siddhartha, Experience and Education and Pedagogy

4 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! Here are my editing suggestions: My educational journey has been...

Book ReportssilkflowersEF_Team2 - May 4, 2007
AMNH Internship Essay

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! There are just a couple of suggestions I would...

ScholarshipbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - May 4, 2007
an essay on - How we evolve

4 - ...in cyberspace, no one case see you blush... ;-)) Thank you!! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - May 4, 2007
persistence of external reality

4 - Greetings! I'm glad to hear it! I don't anticipate any "suffering" will be involved. ;-)) The world needs...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - May 4, 2007
Essay about "What is work?"

5 - Greetings! You are more than welcome here! This is a free forum for everyone and we can all...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - May 3, 2007
Contrast poem and a rhmying couplet

13 - Greetings! You're welcome, welcome, welcome!! :-)) Is the concrete poem supposed to rhyme in any particular pattern?...

PoetrymariaEF_Team2 - May 2, 2007
"Letter from Birmingham jail" - rhetorical analysis

2 - Salut! As usual, you have written a fine, well-reasoned essay! I have just a few editing tips: ...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - May 2, 2007