|a voyage to a hill tribe village - on Comm App short essay.
UndergraduateRnoRno - Oct 20, 2008
|'giving up my time to help my uncle' - personal statement
4 - AHHHH!!! i added stuff, but now i realize that Uc are making me answering two prompts using 1000 words.so...
Undergraduatenickymickynickymicky - Oct 19, 2008
|Essay on labor and Delivery Pain
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39hunnybun39 - Oct 19, 2008
|First Nations Ambitions Triumph
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|Management class Research paper
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Research Papersevetteevette - Oct 19, 2008
|'no intentions of stopping now' -: Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - I think your essay has good potential. I, too, am applying to FSU this semester, and right now, I'm...
Undergraduatecese09rhasia - Oct 19, 2008
|The Art Institute Essays..
Undergraduateseven321seven321 - Oct 19, 2008
|the juxtaposition of christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf
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|"Which kind of college student are you?" - Classification Essay Help
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EssaysHaniEF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|Help with essay: How does "language" represent you
2 - Good morning. I suggest by starting with an outline. Write down the main points you want to cover...
Essaysroksteady22EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|personal essay about me, MELANIE ROSE ZUNIGA
2 - Good morning. As the prompt and/or instructions for this essay were not included in the posting, I can...
Undergraduatemelybaby1EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|'Accountant dream' - How has The Macaulay Honors College changed you?
|[Analysis of Issue] Humans are becoming subservient to machines
4 - No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is that your...
Writing FeedbackfranklampardenEF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|"The art of living is more like wrestling than dancing"- need help UF essay
|"Music has become big impact on my life" - FSU NEW ESSAY
NEW - The connection between Vires, Artes, Mores exemplifies not only the morals, values and intelligence a well rounded person has,...
|Essay about my weekend activities
3 - Hello Gloria, I really don't have words how much appreciated your comments and feedback. I wish I knew about...
Writing Feedbacksolsol - Oct 18, 2008
|'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?
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Writing FeedbackvipaoEF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|My strengths, talents, and interest - why do I wish to attend UHart?
2 - "I am hoping to garner higher..." In regards to the content, I think you're on to something here....
UndergraduatebeingryanjudeEF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|Personal statement...how i became an adult in the past 2 years.
|Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities - my statement
NEW - Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities that are necessary for me as a student. For the past...
|University of Miami Admission Essay Feedbacks
4 - Good morning. My mechanical suggestions are as follows: First, make sure that you are capitalizing only proper...
UndergraduatelfmasieriEF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|Summary On Pain Meds - paper
4 - Good morning. OK, let's see: "...interventions regarding any adverse reactions." "...should be well rehearsed...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|help on the play Doctor Faustus by Chritopher Marlowe
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EssaysrimiEF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|UF ESSAY: "meaningful event" - Upward Bound
Undergraduatecollegeicntwaitcollegeicntwait - Oct 18, 2008
|"Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!"
9 - OK, I'm assuming the above is the new conclusion. One suggestion: "...talented, a natural leader, and overall...
Undergraduateccn7EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|"College was the best time of my life." -UCF APPLICATION ESSAY
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Undergraduatevivalavidavivalavida - Oct 17, 2008
|Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE
Writing Feedbackcowman809EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with
Undergraduategbtlgbtl - Oct 17, 2008
|how does Penn make a perfect match for you?
UndergraduategbtlEF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life
4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...
Undergraduatefernaj13EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008