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Vocabulary Composition in my Storyline

3 - wow! you really are a writer....

Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcRajiv - May 21, 2007
an altogether different way of understanding how we make observations.   2

47 - Greetings Sarah! We are talking about the third level of existence. Other than this, 'higher constituent of...

Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 21, 2007
Autism is a spectrum disorder; Introduction to Autism

7 - Well Written i have watch shows about the disorder but this essay give me much more information....

Writing FeedbackCeressiesupasikh - May 20, 2007
Argumentative paper "The bridge of san Luis Rey"

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a good job of arguing your case. The only suggestion I would make...

Writing FeedbackTimcagoEF_Team2 - May 20, 2007
Turning Dreams into Realities essay - Computer future and exciting new world

4 - Fantastic! I'm glad I could help! Sarah...

Undergraduatehsmith490EF_Team2 - May 18, 2007
Capote's view of Holcomb, Kansas

2 - Greetings! You would be able to discuss more characterizations if you eliminated some of the repetition. You go...

Writing Feedbackenglish5210EF_Team2 - May 17, 2007
Research Paper on Amy Tan's "The Hundred Secret Senses"

10 - Greetings! Sorry, I did not make it in time for your class. Just for future reference, "validate," "approve,"...

Research Paperscat08EF_Team2 - May 16, 2007
Stress - Cause & Effect essay - having a hard time coming up with a topic

19 - Greetings! I think it does flow quite well. The only place I can see that might benefit from...

Writing FeedbacktwinsxtwoEF_Team2 - May 16, 2007
Dry Loaf poem; Essay topic (deciphering poetry)..Too confusing

2 - Greetings! Deciphering poetry can be difficult! There are some clues, though, in the word choices the author made,...

PoetryaznpooEF_Team2 - May 16, 2007
on sounds and meaning - an essay

7 - Thank you very much for this piece of advice. I take this to heart. Rajiv...

Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 16, 2007
"To build a fire" - Analysis of the man's character

2 - Greetings! You've written a very insightful take on the man's character! I remember that when I read this...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Evaluation essay - Criteria for selecting cocoa varieties

4 - You're very welcome, Frederic! De rien! (and you deserve an A, you are an excellent writer!) Sarah...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
essay on - why I write

17 - I see, thank you! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Effect of bad friends - causes and effect essay

11 - You're welcome! Once you have a rough draft, I'd be happy to help with editing! Thanks, Sarah,...

Undergraduatemr_studentEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Writing Pro-Con Essays about same sex marriages.

NEW - What cons are there for same-sex marriages? What are the pros for approving same sex marriage? These are the...

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Analytical Essay - characterize Capote's view of Holcomb

4 - Then again, sometimes life just gets in the way of doing what you would like to do and you...

Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Reporter at Large interview paper

5 - Thanks paperhanger, Something that struck me right away was that you were addressing something very personal to yourself....

Writing FeedbackpaperhangerRajiv - May 14, 2007
he crowd is roaring and yelling, "Go WIZ"; Narrative Essay / The Wiz

2 - Greetings! What you have so far is very good! I think probably the panicking would work well right...

Writing FeedbackmSaKooLEF_Team2 - May 14, 2007
IS THIS A GOOD PHILOSOPHY PAPER FROM DIFFERERENT PERSPECTIVES?

3 - Wow!!! I cant believe I didnt know about this essay helper thing before. I appreciate it greatly Sarah. Thank...

Essaysshenz711shenz711 - May 13, 2007
Mural on Broad and Spring Garde - help with my "statement of interest"

2 - Greetings! For someone who has no experience writing a statement of interest, you have done a marvelous job!...

Undergraduatelint99EF_Team2 - May 11, 2007
'my High School Mathematics teacher' Admission essay of mine

5 - Greetings! It can be a challenge to cut out a significant portion of something you have written--after all,...

UndergraduateanhminhEF_Team2 - May 10, 2007
CONTRACT; business law assignment

4 - Greetings! Those are good questions. The "no worries" remark does not affect the breach of duty/negligence as far...

UndergraduatelawstudentEF_Team2 - May 10, 2007
International human rights law essay

3 - Hi Thanks alot! That really cleared things up :-) Regards...

Essaysna2iana2ia - May 9, 2007
The Unbearable Lightness, The Dancer Upstairs, The Coast of Utopia

2 - Greetings! You've been working hard, and it shows! I have just a few editing suggestions: since eternal...

Book ReportssilkflowersEF_Team2 - May 9, 2007
"Fiction or Fact-Men Suffering from A Girl's Problem" - research paper

2 - Greetings! You've written a very interesting essay with lots of supporting information! I noted just a few things:...

Writing FeedbackTimcagoEF_Team2 - May 8, 2007
"See the sky" essay

3 - Thank you Sarah. You have always found something encouraging to say. Rajiv...

Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 8, 2007
Why a certain Tv show is popular- cause and effect essay. HELP...

2 - Greetings! That's an interesting topic! You'll want to think about what types of things might make a show...

EssayskatharinaEF_Team2 - May 7, 2007
Hackers aren't criminals but just regular people who are interested in computers.

4 - Here are a couple of things to remember when writing your thesis statement: In formal writing, don't use...

EssaysTopNerdJREF_Team2 - May 7, 2007
'Love is blind, but sees into the heart' - Five senses - poem

4 - I want to do my collage just like you said...but i'm not sure like how to present it to...

Poetrymariamaria - May 7, 2007
Short paper discussing SETTING

4 - Greetings! I like your revision and your conclusion! The only thing I would point out is that one...

Writing FeedbackrollagasperEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007