|Vocabulary Composition in my Storyline
3 - wow! you really are a writer....
Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcRajiv - May 21, 2007
|an altogether different way of understanding how we make observations. 2
47 - Greetings Sarah! We are talking about the third level of existence. Other than this, 'higher constituent of...
Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 21, 2007
|Autism is a spectrum disorder; Introduction to Autism
7 - Well Written i have watch shows about the disorder but this essay give me much more information....
Writing FeedbackCeressiesupasikh - May 20, 2007
|Argumentative paper "The bridge of san Luis Rey"
2 - Greetings! I think you've done a good job of arguing your case. The only suggestion I would make...
Writing FeedbackTimcagoEF_Team2 - May 20, 2007
|Turning Dreams into Realities essay - Computer future and exciting new world
4 - Fantastic! I'm glad I could help! Sarah...
Undergraduatehsmith490EF_Team2 - May 18, 2007
|Capote's view of Holcomb, Kansas
2 - Greetings! You would be able to discuss more characterizations if you eliminated some of the repetition. You go...
Writing Feedbackenglish5210EF_Team2 - May 17, 2007
|Research Paper on Amy Tan's "The Hundred Secret Senses"
10 - Greetings! Sorry, I did not make it in time for your class. Just for future reference, "validate," "approve,"...
Research Paperscat08EF_Team2 - May 16, 2007
|Stress - Cause & Effect essay - having a hard time coming up with a topic
19 - Greetings! I think it does flow quite well. The only place I can see that might benefit from...
Writing FeedbacktwinsxtwoEF_Team2 - May 16, 2007
|Dry Loaf poem; Essay topic (deciphering poetry)..Too confusing
2 - Greetings! Deciphering poetry can be difficult! There are some clues, though, in the word choices the author made,...
PoetryaznpooEF_Team2 - May 16, 2007
|on sounds and meaning - an essay
7 - Thank you very much for this piece of advice. I take this to heart. Rajiv...
Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 16, 2007
|"To build a fire" - Analysis of the man's character
2 - Greetings! You've written a very insightful take on the man's character! I remember that when I read this...
Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
|Evaluation essay - Criteria for selecting cocoa varieties
4 - You're very welcome, Frederic! De rien! (and you deserve an A, you are an excellent writer!) Sarah...
Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
|essay on - why I write
17 - I see, thank you! Sarah...
Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
|Effect of bad friends - causes and effect essay
11 - You're welcome! Once you have a rough draft, I'd be happy to help with editing! Thanks, Sarah,...
Undergraduatemr_studentEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
|Writing Pro-Con Essays about same sex marriages.
NEW - What cons are there for same-sex marriages? What are the pros for approving same sex marriage? These are the...
|Analytical Essay - characterize Capote's view of Holcomb
4 - Then again, sometimes life just gets in the way of doing what you would like to do and you...
Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
|Reporter at Large interview paper
5 - Thanks paperhanger, Something that struck me right away was that you were addressing something very personal to yourself....
Writing FeedbackpaperhangerRajiv - May 14, 2007
|he crowd is roaring and yelling, "Go WIZ"; Narrative Essay / The Wiz
2 - Greetings! What you have so far is very good! I think probably the panicking would work well right...
Writing FeedbackmSaKooLEF_Team2 - May 14, 2007
|IS THIS A GOOD PHILOSOPHY PAPER FROM DIFFERERENT PERSPECTIVES?
3 - Wow!!! I cant believe I didnt know about this essay helper thing before. I appreciate it greatly Sarah. Thank...
Essaysshenz711shenz711 - May 13, 2007
|Mural on Broad and Spring Garde - help with my "statement of interest"
2 - Greetings! For someone who has no experience writing a statement of interest, you have done a marvelous job!...
Undergraduatelint99EF_Team2 - May 11, 2007
|'my High School Mathematics teacher' Admission essay of mine
5 - Greetings! It can be a challenge to cut out a significant portion of something you have written--after all,...
UndergraduateanhminhEF_Team2 - May 10, 2007
|CONTRACT; business law assignment
4 - Greetings! Those are good questions. The "no worries" remark does not affect the breach of duty/negligence as far...
UndergraduatelawstudentEF_Team2 - May 10, 2007
|International human rights law essay
3 - Hi Thanks alot! That really cleared things up :-) Regards...
Essaysna2iana2ia - May 9, 2007
|The Unbearable Lightness, The Dancer Upstairs, The Coast of Utopia
2 - Greetings! You've been working hard, and it shows! I have just a few editing suggestions: since eternal...
Book ReportssilkflowersEF_Team2 - May 9, 2007
|"Fiction or Fact-Men Suffering from A Girl's Problem" - research paper
2 - Greetings! You've written a very interesting essay with lots of supporting information! I noted just a few things:...
Writing FeedbackTimcagoEF_Team2 - May 8, 2007
|"See the sky" essay
3 - Thank you Sarah. You have always found something encouraging to say. Rajiv...
Writing FeedbackRajivRajiv - May 8, 2007
|Why a certain Tv show is popular- cause and effect essay. HELP...
2 - Greetings! That's an interesting topic! You'll want to think about what types of things might make a show...
EssayskatharinaEF_Team2 - May 7, 2007
|Hackers aren't criminals but just regular people who are interested in computers.
4 - Here are a couple of things to remember when writing your thesis statement: In formal writing, don't use...
EssaysTopNerdJREF_Team2 - May 7, 2007
|'Love is blind, but sees into the heart' - Five senses - poem
4 - I want to do my collage just like you said...but i'm not sure like how to present it to...
Poetrymariamaria - May 7, 2007
|Short paper discussing SETTING
4 - Greetings! I like your revision and your conclusion! The only thing I would point out is that one...
Writing FeedbackrollagasperEF_Team2 - May 6, 2007