|Uni. of Rochester Supplement, the picture puzzle
3 - I think you need a specific example of how you are independent and how you have perseverance, if that...
Undergraduatekimku91piggytails626 - Dec 30, 2008
|just a quick question about admission essay formats
9 - I think you should double space it since the essay is uploaded. If you are copying and pasting it...
Undergraduatepencilyasin391 - Dec 30, 2008
|NYU Supplement (trait+New York City)
Undergraduatelrnsmith09lrnsmith09 - Dec 30, 2008
|'human civilizations' - My JHU Supplement essay-why do you want to choose this major?
Undergraduatebaubaubaubau - Dec 30, 2008
|Common App - "Cliff Solving"; being an assistant teacher to a third grade class
Undergraduaten00bl3tBliss - Dec 30, 2008
|COMMON APP ESSAY- PERSONAL STATEMENT: Lebanon country
Undergraduatenourinouri - Dec 30, 2008
|Comm. app. short essay; "Sub! Sub!" my coach screamed impatiently at the referee
12 - Yea, cutting down will be a challenge. Thanks for your encouragment. I'm glad you got the message, otherwise, I...
Undergraduateamyamy - Dec 30, 2008
|YALE supplement essay. Critique welcome.
UndergraduatekorchaginaFFtoMay1 - Dec 30, 2008
|Individuality, Notre Dame Supplement
3 - I think your essay is organized well but like Gloria said, try to involve your perspective with how you...
Undergraduatesreekarbananazzz - Dec 30, 2008
|Univ of Virginia Supplement- a piece of artwork that has suprised me
2 - There have been many works of art by famous artists that have surprised me, but I was surprised by...
UndergraduatenouriEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|NYU Personal Statements (6 questions and answers)
Undergraduatebrood910brood910 - Dec 30, 2008
|'international background and teachings' - UPenn Professor Essay
6 - Throughout my childhood and early academic studies, I have developed a strong affinity towards learning about history and how...
UndergraduateparadoxEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|commonapp essay, "everyone has a different mountain" - review
Undergraduatearhguyver - Dec 30, 2008
|Common Apps Essay (two very different worlds: US and Korea)
Undergraduatebrood910guyver - Dec 30, 2008
|'Lego blocks / Carnegie Project / Electrical Tech' - Brown Engineering Supplement
6 - Yes, that is correct about "sought." I can't find much room for improvement here; you write very clearly....
UndergraduatedsacksEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|Bucknell Supp - three most important things your future classmates and faculty should know about you
5 - I would gladly to confront any opposing arguments and intellectual challenges that come into my way, or to be...
UndergraduatebaubauEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|Common app essay + short answer (The journey to authentic leaderships)
UndergraduateLinaVuBliss - Dec 30, 2008
|Priceton Supp Essay ("Some questions cannot be answered")
Undergraduateilikefoodilikefood - Dec 30, 2008
|Brown Essay "What is an academic experience, project, class or book that h"
Undergraduatehbinjohbinjo - Dec 30, 2008
|Common App Short -- first job
UndergraduateFFtoMay1EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|Bowdoin supplement - change the world
7 - Students at my new elementary school did not treat me in the welcoming way that I had expected. ...
Undergraduatedebaterchick09EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|UMich Diversity (Short Essay, my Korean-style lunch)
5 - Nice essay, it may be a simple example but I think you got the point through. sometimes cheesy isn't...
Undergraduatetofun00bl3t - Dec 30, 2008
|Revise, set back eassy, the relationship with host family
3 - an American family offered me a place to live. In this family, there are mother and father, and their...
Undergraduatehanson3566hanson3566 - Dec 30, 2008
|Eating pizza with a pair of chopsticks; culture difference, personal interest
22 - Fortunally I really want to go to Georgia tech and I haven't sent that yet alone with few other...
Undergraduatehanson3566hanson3566 - Dec 30, 2008
|Penn long essay - What makes you a good match for Penn?
5 - Wow. Your essay is awesome. You really conveyed why the University of Pennsylvania was right for you. I really...
Undergraduateeiiiaamy - Dec 30, 2008
|COMMON APP SHORT ESSAY WOULDN'T SAVE!
6 - For the word count I simply use microsoft word. If you are using wrd2007 simply, you just have to...
EssaysSofiaarh - Dec 30, 2008
|Personal statement; Perspective - its definition still lacked meaning. That soon changed.
UndergraduateHiroShima11HiroShima11 - Dec 30, 2008
|Common App Main Essay ("I am a man of ideas.")
5 - The Hero, the Outcast, the Star-crossed Lovers, the Orphan, the Shrew: these storybook stereotypes, these pieces of humanity --...
UndergraduateJustJoshinbyJEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|"Describe the world you come from..." MIT's Essay B Option
Undergraduatepyroboyredevil147 - Dec 30, 2008
|Reflective Response on "To Build a Fire" by Jack London
2 - Nice job! Just use commas to introduce quotes: I think that the author does an excellent job building...
Writing Feedbackrockd211EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008