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Graduate Studies - Disability Studies

2 - Greetings! From a quick internet search, it appears there aren't a lot of doctoral programs in disability studies...

GraduategoldencompassEF_Team2 - Oct 26, 2006
An Example of a Written Response to a Dissatisfied Customer

NEW - Greetings! I am happy to respond to this customer! While we hate to have any dissatisfied clients, it...

LettersEF_Team -
Did Somebody Say Genocide?; response/summary essay

2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent, informative essay which does a good job of explaining the complex factors...

Writing FeedbackcalvinphoonEF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
'As America closes its eyes' - Grey Decay by The Sacrosanct College Essay

2 - Greetings! You make some good points here. The subject matter is one which can engender some strong emotions....

Book ReportsThe_SacrosanctEF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse

2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...

Writing FeedbackjkolhagenEF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay

4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....

UndergraduateArmandEF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
Looking for help - graduate school admission personal statement MSW program

2 - Greetings! Admissions essays can be a bit tricky because most people feel uncomfortable writing about themselves, especially when...

GraduateloisEF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2006
On the morning I've been waiting for all year!

3 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...

Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchikEF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...

Writing FeedbackstarphyreEF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)

4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...

UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboyEF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family

17 - You are a dedicated student and I know you will do very well with your studies! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

UndergraduateeconsangelEF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!

5 - It seems like you worked very hard on this essay, but there are a few minor changes hat will...

Writing Feedbackjanicefiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
WW1 , the Treaty of Versalilles, WW11

2 - Greetings! You have an excellent start here! I agree that your paragraphs could use just a bit of...

Essaysjoshua_arebaloEF_Team2 - Oct 14, 2006
Help, I'm new here. Is it okay to use parenthese around...

5 - Thank you very much!...

EssaysChloeSongChloeSong - Oct 13, 2006
How to Deal with a Difficult Dissertation Advisor?

NEW - How many of us have shown up to an advisor meeting with a stack of carefully acquired research and...

DissertationsEF_Team -
'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review

2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
The Difference Between Personal and Professional Relationship

5 - Thanks Anyway I will try to write it. Praveen Kumar...

EssaysPraveenPraveen - Oct 10, 2006
The damnation of the canyon is one man's account

3 - Greetings! You have definitely improved the essay, so congratulations! There are still a few places that could use...

Writing Feedbackarkaudio123EF_Team2 - Oct 6, 2006
Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)

5 - Thanks for pointing out those problems, I'll fix up as much as I can and then see if I...

Writing Feedbacknjbignellnjbignell - Oct 4, 2006
Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life

14 - Greetings again! About "degree full-time" versus "full-time degree" . . . the degree itself is not "full-time." You...

UndergraduateeconsangelEF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006
Doctor Faustus Essay

2 - Greetings! While I think you have a good rough draft here, I do have a few suggestions that...

Writing FeedbackjeffspearsEF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
The Things They Carried By Tim O'Brien

10 - can i have your email, that i can email it to you. Help me with my terrible construction. I...

Essayssamsungsamsung - Sep 27, 2006
Who is a villain? Need help with essay on Villain of Canadian history

3 - Greetings! When you are looking for someone who is the "most" anything, it is often subjective -- that...

EssaysVladEF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget

3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
Paper On Theologians.

5 - Greetings! While I can't give you a lot of information specifically on theologians since I'm not an expert...

EssaysVladEF_Team2 - Sep 22, 2006
MOVIE THEME EDITING

5 - Greetings! I think "cause" is the proper word there. The part I have trouble with is "do everything...

EssaysstartanewlifeEF_Team2 - Sep 19, 2006
Nazi Germany was a totalitarian state

2 - Greetings! It is always important to keep in mind that the function of writing is to communicate. If...

Writing FeedbackougoahEF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
Some information about Ibesn

4 - Greetings again! Perhaps I should have said The Ibsen Society of America. The information on their site seems...

EssaysEileenEF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
My review on Henrick Ibsen's A Doll's House

3 - Thanks a lot. I'll try to improve my writing....

Book Reportssmskamelsmskamel - Sep 13, 2006
MAJOR CONCERNS on T.S. Eliot's context revealed in The Love Song of J Alfred

3 - Thanks for your suggestion....

Writing Feedbackougoahougoah - Sep 13, 2006