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"Hollywood High School, love for Journalism" - #1 Describe your world....

3 - The need to dream is my priority. I am a metamorphosis, who is ready to shine and provoke positive...

Undergraduatejessy033 - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 13, 2010
"invaluable work ethic" - Lehigh Supplement - 150-250 words

5 - Great 'wow' theme... great concepts about work ethic from high competition... when you write ethnic, a better word might...

Undergraduatenickg123 - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 13, 2010
"my baseball experience" - 150 words or less on an extracurricular activity...

6 - The relief and sense of accomplishment I felt were indescribable----this is a well structured sentence. Just a year...

UndergraduateWUSTL - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 13, 2010
Metamorphosis, I am a human - an Undergraduate Admissions for Texas State

4 - You're welcome! :) It was a touching read and fun critique. It's nice to critique for someone who understands...

UndergraduateServantofElohim - Nov 12, 2010tarantellajen - Nov 13, 2010
"I got accepted into UT; impact of my brother" - ut topic a

NEW - Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and...

Undergraduatedeeef - Nov 13, 2010 -
Documented Essay concerning the mosque that is to be built near Ground Zero

2 - Hi Tiffany, The way I check for plagiarism is to google selections of text and see what answers...

EssaysTiffanyM - Nov 6, 2010EF_Susan - Nov 13, 2010
Laptop, the Solution of Our Heavy Tasks

NEW - Hi, I am an ESL student and I would like anyone to give me some feedback on my...

Writing Feedbackthinkerbox77 - Nov 13, 2010 -
Requiring students to wear a school uniform is a violation of freedom of choice

NEW - Should schools require their students to wear a school uniform? In schools it has been a tradition to have...

Undergraduateajeddy - Nov 13, 2010 -
"care & compassion for people" -CommonApp: Significant experience/ Topic of my choice

7 - Ohh, totally didn't realize you were using British spelling, I was just poking my spell check on my computer....

Undergraduatemariatateno - Oct 26, 2010ExplodingDonuts - Nov 13, 2010
"the photography editor" - Common App- One of your activites

4 - I feel that I have benefited greatly from my experiences as the photography editor for the (my schools) yearbook....

Undergraduatejmoff2323 - Nov 2, 2010ExplodingDonuts - Nov 13, 2010
"How do you express your inner world" - help with UNC Chapel Hill essay?

4 - Just like howusing glasses helps you see the world around you, seeing through the camera lens helps you...

Undergraduatejlabrousse - Oct 30, 2010Cloud_Tek9 - Nov 13, 2010
"the social and cognitive forces", UC Psychology Major Transfer

3 - I think you have a great paper here. Susan clear somethings up. Just to make some points: ......

Undergraduateburundukgan - Nov 4, 2010Cloud_Tek9 - Nov 13, 2010
ENGINEERING... follow in my father's footsteps - YALE

7 - I just have to say... Kaiser did a wonderful job of editing your essay. He pointed out the most...

Undergraduategomoksh - Nov 6, 2010iceui2 - Nov 13, 2010
"Poetry in Mongolia" - elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities

3 - Yes, I meant Mongolian language, but dropped it. TY Thank you for your advice. I will either try...

UndergraduateSD_DS - Nov 3, 2010SD_DS - Nov 12, 2010
Siblings May be the Best Teachers (Where you come from, UC Admissions Essay)

4 - I think this sentence is not quite right: There are no numbers that can describe how many children a...

Undergraduateohdangmish - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"I am drawn to physics" - Common Application Essay

4 - You shoud go more in depth with your interest in taking things apart, be almost poetic in a sense...

Undergraduatecartur - Nov 1, 2010nabid777 - Nov 12, 2010
"my first stock at the age of thirteen" - Business Transfer Essay (UIUC)

3 - This is nicely written, but it is general stuff that you could say about almost any school. It...

Undergraduatekev946red - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
Is cheating in school and work out of control?

2 - Cheating nowadays is associated with many different words, but actually it has they have the same meaning. There...

Writing Feedbackmohab1220 - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
globalization as it relates to politics & the society in small and developing society

3 - Start with a capital letter: As governance structures are established at a global level to deal with the growing...

Writing Feedbackkaycaste - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"A Changing nation, living in Indonesia"; I am of an Indian descent

2 - Certain incidents have made me uncomfortable and caused me to question my safety and security in this country. ...

Undergraduateh207 - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
Ielts essay :technology that widen the gap between rich and poor ?

2 - To some extent, the gap between rich people and poor is widen widened by technology, because only the...

Graduateiishine - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"Born in Mexico City, I came to the United States" - UC prompt 1: Plastic Life

4 - This is a place to use a colon instead of a semi-colon: ...contained a powerful weapon: a mindset...

Undergraduatemacbookpro - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"My ba ngoai" - Common app essay: Personal essay

11 - As everyone else has said, you have very vivid description and attract us to detail. However I feel that...

Undergraduatecolorcode - Sep 26, 2010ctc414 - Nov 12, 2010
"it is about ski" - the commonapp 150words short answer

4 - Use a comma for a compound sentence: A perfect parabola swept over the snow-white world, and that meteor was...

UndergraduateJeromeM - Nov 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
In need for help on strong argumentative facts on the reality of global warming.

3 - The first thing to do is collect some articles. Just start collecting them from your school database. It can...

Research Paperstippytoe - Nov 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
UC Prompt #1 - My life changed by my Chinese parents

3 - I think the first sentence should be written in the present verb tense: In this world, amazing people are...

UndergraduateDDH35 - Nov 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"The influence my father has had in my life" - Texas common application topic A

4 - Add a comma, and capitalize that W: My life was always full of, "W hat if my father..." I...

Undergraduatejas2011 - Nov 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"The Karate Dojo, we felt like black belts." (working as part of a group essay)

2 - Hey, you did a great job... I bet they don't often see such an entertaining response to this prompt....

Undergraduateneoreader - Nov 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"My relationship with my mother" - Common- Person that has influenced your life.

5 - Ha ha, wow, at least it has a happy ending! :-) Well the good news is that you...

Undergraduatedaisiekae - Nov 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
"From biology teacher to biology major" - a college that ask me why i chose my major

2 - What did you see multiplying? Here is the first sentence of your essay: "Biology has at least...

UndergraduateMohamed123 - Nov 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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