|'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits
3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...
Writing FeedbackTimcagoTimcago - Feb 23, 2007
|Money is one of the greatest tools in life
5 - Yes I do, but I coudn't think I'm not good at writing essay I've been here for 1 year...
Writing Feedbackaljuraljur - Feb 22, 2007
|American events in a specific year -introduction, thesis & conclusion
3 - i dont think my introduction makes sense or has anything to do w/ my topic or my cobclusion.. i...
Research Papersher_hearther_heart - Feb 22, 2007
|Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice
4 - thank you both :)...
Writing Feedbackkendrakendra - Feb 22, 2007
|My motivation to do graduate work
2 - Greetings! I'm sorry, it is not possible to answer posts privately. I'd be happy to give you my...
GraduatempurEF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
|My "suicide note"! (suicide poetry)
2 - Greetings! Yes, definitely, I could tell it was suicide poetry (I hope for an assignment! :-)). Probably the...
PoetryaznpooEF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
|Spending a million dollar - an introduction for my essay?
7 - Greetings! Here is the edit: Most of us want to be wise when it comes to money, while...
EssaysaljurEF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
|Time in Terelj - descriptive essay
4 - Greetings! I think your opening paragraph lacks cohesiveness. It's rather "all over the place." The first sentence sounds...
UndergraduateokunaEF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
|'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade
4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...
Writing FeedbackMagstar0202EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
|William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction
10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...
Writing FeedbackaznpooEF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.
2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...
Writing Feedbackcsneed1677EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you
3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...
Writing FeedbackasianbmEF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|parenthetical citing help
4 - Greetings! How parenthetical citations are formatted depends on whether you are using APA, MLA, or some other form...
Grammar, UsageeltronEF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other
3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...
Writing Feedbackyongen_92yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
|Essay about the disappointments you faced in life
3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...
Writing Feedbackayshaaznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
|I know personally how enriching studying abroad can be.
4 - Thank you so much Sarah. Having a pro review my essay and give me feedback is absolutely priceless. ...
Undergraduatepash_fashionpash_fashion - Feb 18, 2007
|Summer in a Mongolian place
3 - What you need is a motivator to capture the reader attention, sure it is great you went to all...
UndergraduateSergelenaznpoo - Feb 17, 2007
|What specific goals do you hope to achieve? - Scholarship Essay
NEW - The question is, What specific goals do you hope to achieve at Western Oregon University to help you succeed...
|A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility
2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...
Writing FeedbackkendraEF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
|The Last Minute: How to Write Good Essays When Time is Short?
NEW - Almost everyone who has attended high school or university has found themselves staring down a deadline that approached them...
|What is needed in an analytical essay?
2 - Greetings! These are good questions! Here are some elements normally contained in the analytical essay: 1. Summarize...
EssaysjesusalreadywonEF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
|8-paragraph compare & contrast essay
5 - Thanks so much for all the help. KingTiger...
Writing FeedbackKingTigerKingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
|[working in series, painting] - SAIC statement of purpose
2 - Greetings! I think you've written an excellent essay here! I think you do a fabulous job of describing...
UndergraduatevegetablenaziEF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
|The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay
NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...
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|College Journal - English Class / Society Living
NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...
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|The big difference - book report
2 - Greetings! First of all, take a de-e-e-e-p breath!! You're going to be just fine! :-)) The difference...
Book ReportsMarieBeeEF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2007
|Looking for Feedback
6 - Thanks Sarah, that's very helpful and I'll keep that in mind for my future edits!...
Writing FeedbackSquishSquish - Feb 5, 2007
|China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"
NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...
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|Comparison of past thirty years of special education
5 - Fantastic!! I'm so glad!!! You are very, very welcome! Sarah...
Writing Feedbackamosborne13EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
|Paper on Immortality
3 - HI I really need help, I am just no good at essay writing, and its due Monday, our assignment...
Essayshelpme101pamurphy - Feb 3, 2007