|Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from
5 - Actually, it would be better if you create a new topic - either way, we'll be able to assist...
Writing Feedbackrang555EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
|Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay
2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...
Writing FeedbackKingTigerKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
|Application to The University Of Mary Washington 250-500 words
3 - thanks a ton for the quick feedback Sarah, I really appreciate it, and the changes you suggested are being...
UndergraduateAzapAzap - Jan 30, 2007
|struggling with admission essay question.
2 - Greetings! These are good questions! I think a paragraph on your strengths, with examples to back them up,...
UndergraduatejimmyD88EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...
Writing Feedbackanf3rneeEF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
|Essay on out-of-town shopping centres
3 - thank you, I will change that....
Writing FeedbackTheGeekTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
|History Paper on Revolutions
3 - Thank you, Sarah! The points were very helpful!...
Writing Feedbackrollagasperrollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
|[about American people] - stuck with a sentence
3 - I guess an ice storm is a valid excuse, ha ha. Not the most pleasant thing to be stuck...
Essaystrine_321trine_321 - Jan 28, 2007
|Correct word use? "Without a leader to guide our people..."
4 - also is this sentence redundant? "Liberal arts is just as important in our society as science and technology. Without...
Grammar, Usagemycmyc - Jan 27, 2007
|"ART IS A FORM OF PROBLEM SOLVING"- Undergrad SOP/ Graphic Design
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay -- congratulations! I have just a few suggestions to make it...
UndergraduatemmmmEF_Team2 - Jan 27, 2007
|Speaking in Front of the Class - Advice for Novice Students
NEW - Someone told me once that more people are afraid of public speaking than are afraid of dying. Makes sense....
|'Eleven' - A personal response essay about a short story
2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback! I think I see what your professor is saying...
Book Reportsnbc4911EF_Team2 - Jan 25, 2007
|"My weekend" - essay writing ideas
2 - Greetings! The hardest part about writing is getting started! First of all, give yourself permission to just get...
EssaysayshaEF_Team2 - Jan 25, 2007
|Once I was....., now I am..... - Essay
3 - Wow! Great ideas!!! Thank you very much!!!...
Essaysoxylapkaoxylapka - Jan 25, 2007
|'Influencing the future' - COMMON APP - Person with siginificant influence
3 - Thank you for your help...I really appreciate it. Especially the editing notes i'm terrible with those sort of things....
UndergraduateKdmaxwellKdmaxwell - Jan 25, 2007
|Custom essay about my wallet
NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...
Writing Feedbackokuna -
|"The stangest thing i ever stole" - English Essay
3 - Greetings! Let me give you even more ideas:). What an interesting prompt! However, I can see how you...
EssaysgazzaEF_Team - Jan 23, 2007
|Howard Community College, Essay for scholarship application
2 - Greetings! Here are the changes I would suggest: At 6:45 pm, after I said the last "goodbye"...
ScholarshipryanEF_Team2 - Jan 20, 2007
|'A Night Classes program' - college application short response
5 - Many many thanks.......
Undergraduateryanryan - Jan 19, 2007
|I Need Help With a Thesis Sentence for a Movie
2 - Greetings! Before writing your thesis statement, you need to be clear on what argument(s) your essay will be...
EssaysshineysuitmanEF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
|'In the Lord of the Flies...' - Part of an Essay
4 - I think you're probably right about that. Not that it's always a bad thing to be "forced" to read...
Book Reportsss03EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
|What subject to choose from for business English class?
2 - Greetings! It can certainly be more difficult to choose a topic when the options are so wide open....
Research PapersasianbmEF_Team2 - Jan 16, 2007
|'the fraternity brothers' - essay
NEW - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...
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|[about society] - Is this paragraph understandable?
3 - Okey, thanks so much for the feedback...
Grammar, Usagetrine_321trine_321 - Jan 14, 2007
|THE 12th CENTURY RENAISSANCE; history class essay
5 - Greetings! You are correct that the literal meaning of the word "renaissance" is "rebirth." It comes from a...
Writing FeedbackalikaEF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets"
2 - Greetings! First I'll look at technical things like grammar, sentence structure and punctuation: The level of violence...
Writing FeedbackShergillEF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|Academic Poetry Writing - everybody can write a poem. Or not?
NEW - Poetry. It's not just for depressed Goth kids anymore. Actually, it never was. All sorts of people write...
|Applying for a fellowship...
7 - I'm blushing and I'm thankful... thank you......
GraduatePROL1F1CPROL1F1C - Jan 11, 2007
|'accept the greater challenge' - Review on my Essay for NCSSM
3 - Wow, didn't expect such a quick reply! I changed entranced to fascinated after rereading the paragraph (it sounds better)....
Undergraduateshayonsalehshayonsaleh - Jan 6, 2007
|'Emerging as an artist' - Essay - Graphic Design
2 - Greetings! You have a good start on an interesting essay here! One thing I notice is that it...
UndergraduatemmmmEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2007