|Common application essays, need opinions (one of two to choose from)
5 - Thank you for all of your opinions... I really appreciate them... Would you give me any grammatical advice?...
Undergraduatecandyapplecandyapple - Dec 25, 2008
|Yale hold a legacy ; Why Yale, 500 characters only?
6 - mmh, I'll try to rewrite it by targeting one or two things instead of all these things. It's just...
Undergraduatealicimooalicimoo - Dec 25, 2008
|With the help of Frida Kahlo I learned to embrace my unique looks, show the real beauty
NEW - edits and input please!! Frida Kahlo self-portraits prompt : what work of art, music,science and mathematics, or...
|Common application short answer--internship at a department store
NEW - In July 2007, I worked as an intern for 4 days at Zhongyou Department Store. I was assigned to...
|"Computer game" + "Stock market" - Common Application Essay
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|Account of Activities
NEW - Activity 1 In the early 2008, I participated in Beijing Olympic Games Volunteering Service. I filled in the online...
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|NYU short answer+common app (Cambodia, English book)
Undergraduatealice955alice955 - Dec 25, 2008
|Four Short Answer Questions (family, club, song, why this college)
Undergraduatetonydengcnutonydengcnu - Dec 25, 2008
|My experience ("never a peaceful moment in my house")
UndergraduateSapphireSapphire - Dec 25, 2008
|Common app short answer (Academic League)
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|UC essays - My NSS Story + A GAME TO REMEMBER
3 - Hey Yea you are right about the titles. Will try to do something about that. And thank you for...
Undergraduatepallakgpallakg - Dec 25, 2008
|Common app short answer, student councilors (Advice on shortening)
UndergraduateimikeEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|Yale supplement essay ("Razia Auntie's house")
Undergraduateangel101angel101 - Dec 24, 2008
|UPenn Why Us (5 points)
2 - Meeting different people every day sounds exciting. I believe learning in such a big community gives a global perspective...
UndergraduateshokEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|Stanford Essay #2 (What your freshman roommate should know about you)
UndergraduateIvy_91Ivy_91 - Dec 24, 2008
|Why Northwestern? NU will be the place for me.
Undergraduatebhangra369EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|SUNY Old Westbury Essay - Challenges you expect to face
2 - "Besides dormitory living conditions and a substance free-living environment, the most significant challenge I will have to face is...
UndergraduateCrackberryEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|Stanford Essay - Global warming
Undergraduatejacobose_22jacobose_22 - Dec 24, 2008
|things that we dont want to do and still do - essay feedback
Undergraduateray2008ray2008 - Dec 24, 2008
|Common App Essay - Does this tell enough about me?
4 - Thanks for the comments and feedback. I really appreciate them a lot. You guys just like, instilled me with...
Undergraduateilikefoodilikefood - Dec 24, 2008
|"Imagine a room" - CommonAPP essay
Undergraduatemustaamustaa - Dec 24, 2008
|Explain what has lead you to chooses your career path
Undergraduatehkass001EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|rough draft: academic/career/life goals. ideas are welcomed
2 - I've seen good friends turn into thieves and become apathetic about the suffering of their community because of the...
UndergraduatedarkknightgauryEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|'DNA and my future biological studies' - Cornell Arts and Science Supplement.
6 - Chink, I have often thought that you would make a good contributor! Please check out the contributor page! The...
UndergraduatejoshuaEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|Common app essay help (karate as a means to build my character)
4 - Nope, don't be stressed. If college, and the careers it prepares you for, are causing stress, it defeats the...
UndergraduateimikeEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|The world is currently in a major crisis. Common App - Issue of Concern
9 - Three SATs, a few applications, and an onslaught of essay requirements have worn me out. Oh... I see...
Undergraduatelighter3891EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|'amazed by electricity' - Petroleum engineering Admission Essay
2 - I'll put a period after his quote here: "Scientists dream about doing great things. Engineers do them" (-James...
UndergraduatesamydudeEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|Personal Essay - "I had won first place in a Karate competition"
UndergraduatestimpsimpEF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|common app essay-nigerian culture
2 - This is excellent. I see no errors, and I am impressed by your thoughtfulness. I think the admissions person...
Undergraduatejoke0611EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2008
|"Unpatriotic" MIT Essay; Describe the process through which you discovered value in the negative.
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