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EssaysstarsongEF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
|Qualities and characteristics for an individual at UCF
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|Looking to entry to a competitive Public Health School
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2 - You've got a good essay here; just a few corrections. I like the basis for your essay; I think...
UndergraduateashcakesEF_Team5 - Sep 13, 2008
|Boston College Essay - discussing concerns
NEW - 2 Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you Over the...
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Grammar, Usagesweetbitterrosesweetbitterrose - Sep 13, 2008
|Essay: "the Father of Medical Healthcare" - Tommy Douglas
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|Argument for Global Warming, need some ideas
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|Are real events, real people, and established facts the best for studying?
2 - You're welcome. ... real people, and established facts. ...books will provide me the ability to imagine, the motivation...
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|What Morrow has to say about writing history; Essay for Time Magzine article
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|"Youth Leadership Program and more" - UF admission Essay.
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|'the guiding philosophy' - FSU application essay
8 - Unfortunately, you are the only one that can provide your own personal story to connect it to. Regards,...
UndergraduateShaenatEF_Team5 - Sep 11, 2008
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NEW - Please give me your input be blunt i dont mind.. For almost one hundred years, the Latin words,...
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|"A person I admire" - High school application essay
|'I wanted to be a UCF Knight' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
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|Playing game is not only fun if I win - there are many other factors I prefer in playing a game
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|'Sound of a man and a woman' - Freshman Composition 1 essay
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|Lewis Carroll - biography and style/literary devices.
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|'The youngest professor in Korea'; USB