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6 - However, this claim overlooks the potential advantages of students' own selected course, such as increasing students' motivation and their...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
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4 - Well, if you read about the school to which you are applying, and think of its special qualities in...
Undergraduatekotak07EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
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7 - Thanks four your comment on my essay. I like how your each paragraph connect to each other. I like...
Undergraduatejenchow1992hasnaahmed - Dec 3, 2008
|Have there been any bumps in the road in your life.
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Writing FeedbackMoni09arthas13 - Dec 3, 2008
|"Choose one activity." Univ. of Ill essay
3 - At first, I was lazy and hated going to the volunteer service, but after (a) few months, I started...
Undergraduatejusanglee91timothyerdei - Dec 3, 2008
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UndergraduateJoshrulestimothyerdei - Dec 3, 2008
|toefl: overemphasizing on personal lives of famous people by media
6 - For me,writing an essay in English is not easy. It takes time to practice. Kevin,thank you so...
Writing Feedbackcamellia2008camellia2008 - Dec 3, 2008
|Bhangra, Indian folk dance Common - App. Short answer question -edit/trim
UndergraduateSwamiEF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|Catch-22 Major Research Paper; "Generals Die in Bed"
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Research PapersCubbyEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|The most important activity of your life that teels something about you.
Undergraduatehasnaahmedcfghjkl - Dec 2, 2008
|Three essays, choose the one you like best to edit! "Person You Are"
Undergraduateowojcik7sound10kp - Dec 2, 2008
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2 - In 1995, a Minister, along with his wife and five children, emigrated from Guatemala City, Guatemala. Her youngest...
Writing FeedbacknguyendEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|Poltical Science, Multiple Questions Essay on Political Issues
Writing FeedbackiceboarEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|University of Washington - Choose one of the following two topics and write a short essay.
2 - I know what you mean... sometimes you write something and you know it just is not inspired. However, some...
Undergraduateipo1107EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|"Personal or academic interests." Univ. of Ill essay.
2 - Airplanes represents a kind of magic for little children, but as they grow up, children tend to shift their...
Undergraduatejusanglee91EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|Playing the Piano - short answer
2 - Write so that the words sound like notes.. sometimes with a slow rhythm, sometimes staccato, and drum away at...
UndergraduateMikeyTEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|words contrasting the way in which people live their lives
4 - First paragraph: This essay will investigate the contrasting ways in which people live has changed in the current...
EssayssinaranetoEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|Help with thesis statement on video game addictions
3 - The rapidly increasing popularity of video games suggests that it may be appropriate to think of gaming in terms...
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Undergraduateishla2ishla2 - Dec 2, 2008
|Unfamiliar world / Walk and volunteer / Rascal Flatts' - University of Rochester
Undergraduatehallelujahhallelujah - Dec 2, 2008
|Biting my nails and China resolution - UC- Part of Diversity
Undergraduatecandyapplecandyapple - Dec 2, 2008
|Datong District, the oldest district of Taipei City, is my hometown.
Writing Feedbackcamellia2008camellia2008 - Dec 2, 2008
|'it is the right thing to do' - Page 218 Autobiographical Essay
5 - Well, I would not call it a discrepancy... but the reason I mentioned it is that what it made...
Writing FeedbackrandomzmEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Frontiers of Flight Museum + math, science - USC short answer questions
4 - thankss...
Undergraduateaz2845az2845 - Dec 1, 2008
|Essay on Contribution to hometown (Wesleyan education)
3 - I can learn to adapt changes in the global market while gaining knowledge in many other fields, such as...
UndergraduateAmyRemusEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008