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2 - Good morning. In regards to the passive tone, the biggest "key" to remember is, "Don't tell your readers...
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2 - Good morning. In this case, you should use the pen name. When citing, you should use exactly what...
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Writing FeedbacklearningtowriteEF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
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NEW - I was just starting fourth grade when I met Jennifer Lim. Then, I had just moved to the Philippines...
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2 - I believe that it is. You explain how these values have impacted your life, and how you interpret them....
UndergraduatezazEF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
|'the barracades blocking' - FSU Admissions Virfes, Artes, Mores
2 - You've got a good start here, and some opportunities where you can expand upon how these values have impacted...
UndergraduateoliviasimonEF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
|Identifying Line Numbers in Shakespearean Plays
2 - Good morning. Are there any explanations in the introduction or preface to the edition? Since each edition of...
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6 - I agree with you; the second one is more focused and thus more appropriate. I was fortunate enough...
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|'The Youngest' - Question about main common app essay.
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|The unique way designers think; SOP - Design
NEW - What intrigues me is how long it takes us to appreciated the importance of design in our community and...
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|Topic 4: prohibite smoking in public places
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Writing FeedbackSophieEF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|Real courage- To kill a Mockingbird essay
4 - Yes, you do. Each time you quote something, you have to cite where it came from. Not everyone that...
Book ReportslearningtowriteEF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|"The Waste Land" as a Manifestation of Dream Content
4 - Sure thing! You know, it really depends on your citation style. MLA requires the complete citation each time...
Writing FeedbackelibatsEF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|"Yes, Your Honor" - College Essay for Common Application
8 - OK, so you've been writing in a passive voice. For instance: "Until I joined the Long Island City...
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|Opposition to new ideas - Taking a position in a timed essay
3 - I really appreciate your valuable comments. I am preparing for an essay writing test and picking differnt topics to...
Writing Feedbacksummersummer - Aug 11, 2008
|Paragraph about School and Writing
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2 - You meaning was not clear at many points in this essay, so if my corrections are not what you...
UndergraduatezohEF_Team5 - Aug 11, 2008
|Essay about what I want to apply for (University of Central Florida)
2 - It would be good to mention what program you are interested in enrolling in, what career path you would...
UndergraduatenikkixooEF_Team5 - Aug 9, 2008
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|HELPING OTHERS; Past and future goals and decisions
Undergraduatecarolina24carolina24 - Aug 8, 2008
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DissertationsmopheEF_Team5 - Aug 6, 2008
|Coach David glanced at me; Person who had a significant influence on me
3 - This is much better. There are more details and it flows more fluidly. "At the beginning of the...
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