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|The State of Education in America
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EssaysiluvthevalleyEF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
|Need help to start my essay about film "An Inconvenient Truth"
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EssaysKarinaEF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
|Choosing the areas of academic interest - U Mich short answer II
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|'Science Fair victory' - Diversity Essay for University of Michigan
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UndergraduatebizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
|Poetry Essay (the poet's attitude toward war)
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|'eliminate discrimination'; Equal numbers of male and female students?
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Writing FeedbacknguyenannhonEF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
|Consumers advertisements; analyze the ads' use of ethos, pathos, and logos
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Writing Feedbackslmcc1EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
|The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe - Book review
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Essaysilaugh2EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
|CYCLING; UFlorida- Meaningful Experience
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Undergraduatemalvarezmalvarez - Oct 29, 2007
|need help for "presentation summary" essay
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Writing FeedbackssddEF_Team2 - Oct 29, 2007
|Essay on achievements from my professional life
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|'playing my character' - Howard University - My Admission
Undergraduatedee301568dee301568 - Oct 28, 2007
|Essay on global citizenship
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|'Physical limits' - My UF aplication essay
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Undergraduatelostsy10EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
|Essay on Development of Nuclear activities in Iran
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|Essay on Reactions to Western Imperialism in Asia
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|"It shouldn't hurt to be a child" - child abuse essay
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Writing Feedbackimdapitcher20EF_Team2 - Oct 27, 2007
|Math Essay for college- feedback/comments?
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Undergraduatelopsiciclelopsicicle - Oct 27, 2007
|The theme of Linda Pastan's poem "Ethics" - Literature Essay Help
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|New Deal Programs, How it Changed American Life - Essay Critique
Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2007
|"Cry the Beloved Country" - Essay due tomorrow
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|Purpose of App; Why I chose Penn State University
Undergraduateblue_palaceblue_palace - Oct 25, 2007
|"My family", the greatest influence on me
Undergraduatewolffangel21EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2007
|Influence of Manifest Destiny upon James K Polk
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Research PapersDrock3106EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2007
|My extremely successful business - Imagine you just completed your BIOGRAPHY
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UndergraduateammarraufEF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2007
|Consoles - comparing and contrasting essay
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Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2007
|need an opening sentence (not thesis)
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