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2 - Shakespeare's somber tone in the onset of the sonnet displays overwhelming melancholy. In order to cite the quotations...
Book ReportsashaibaEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Help with USC essay ("to recognize opportunities")
3 - Usually, it is best not to use contractions in formal, academic writing, so instead of writing, for example, "wouldn't,"...
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UndergraduatexcoratEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|UC prompt 1. Electrical Engineering.
4 - It was in my University in Sri Lanka that I obtained most of my experience and formally declared my...
UndergraduatexcoratEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Trouble when speaking about experience, UC Transfer Question Prompt
3 - Nope, not safe! :) The most important part is to write well, and the second most important part is...
UndergraduateJashleyEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Computer science - UC Prompt #1 and #2 - Transfer Applicant
3 - Neva made some important corrections, and I would even modify one further (prompt 2): As the season progressed,...
UndergraduatekradEF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Lehigh supplement essay - I will contribute to the campus greatly.
3 - Well, the first thing i notice in your essay is that it does not specifically explain why Lehigh is...
Undergraduatemurf5Angela629 - Dec 1, 2008
|ACTIVITIES SECTION OF UC APP - what exactly goes in each section?
2 - I don't know what the application consists of, but if you post the application prompts, I can give you...
UndergraduatePANIAGUA12EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|'change must come from the top' - written for English CLEP
Writing FeedbackRacheliRacheli - Dec 1, 2008
|Response to question "to what other colleges..."?
UndergraduateAmyRemusAmyRemus - Dec 1, 2008
|Sociology - uc prompt ; never came to my mind when I was juggling through majors
4 - I think if you want to make it a conversation way,you have to write a introductive paragraph.And the effect...
Undergraduatesadiacharliesun - Dec 1, 2008
|'biology class' - Passion For A Subject Or Cause University of Delaware Essay
3 - Thank you so much! I will certainly make those corrections that you mentioned. This is a very helpful website....
Undergraduatedb_armadadb_armada - Nov 30, 2008
|Late Show style Personal Statement
Undergraduatecharliesunsadia - Nov 30, 2008
|The Real Estate World - UC Undergraduate Prompt#1
UndergraduateDanielle3EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
|"You don't even look Filipino." - Personal Statement
7 - Thanks egetzshef for your suggestion! I have another question if anyone minds answering lol.. Do you guys think...
Undergraduater991183878r991183878 - Nov 30, 2008
|UC TRANSFERRING ESSAY PROMPT 1 & 2, I have a traveler's eye
3 - thank you!...
Undergraduateguagua - Nov 30, 2008
|A Short UC Prompt 2 - "Growing Up In Long Beach"
6 - The essay as a whole sounds pretty good to me. I don't know if you've finished editing or not,...
UndergraduateTheFlameProofstc3 - Nov 30, 2008
|Native students book review- ""Ending Denial""
NEW - Hi everyone! Thanks so much in advance for your help! The instructions were to make a 7 pf essay...
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|Marital Arts as a Way of Life - uc prompt 2 pls help revise?!
Undergraduatedreadhavokdreadhavok - Nov 30, 2008
|Fixating on Curiosity (UC Prompt #1)
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|Discovering my passion in art history
Undergraduatekatacyklsla2nykatacyklsla2ny - Nov 30, 2008
|UC Prompt #1 "This World of Mines.." Need Revision A.s.a.p.
3 - I think your prompt is pretty good except I think you might have messed up on this sentance "I...
UndergraduateezbzericTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
|the best aspects of an education - Personal Statement
7 - Prompt: Evaluate a significant experience and its effect on you. Five years ago, my mom was diagnosed with...
UndergraduateAndrea09Andrea09 - Nov 30, 2008
|August 1998, America. UC Prompt 1 Need help revise.
2 - In August of 1998, my family and I left Hong Kong and stepped into America for the first time....
UndergraduatewkluiEF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
|"My exposure to music", title pending- UC admissions prompt #2
2 - By the time I entered middle school, I was practicing approximately two hours every day, as well as attending...
Undergraduatewangmaster1219EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
|"I love badminton" - UC prompt 2 essay
3 - Personally, i think you could do without this. They seem like unneeded generalizations and the statement also seems...
UndergraduateNOkiaTTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
|I do not want what others want; my definition of success - UC Prompt essay
2 - All of this celebrity spending to buy these "much needed accessories," appeals to the sense of humor in me....
UndergraduateNOkiaTEF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
|SAIC statement of purpose (animated films). Am on the right track?
15 - great essay! couldn't find anything really wrong with it, i think it answers the prompt quite well :) ...
Undergraduatestc3TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
|UC Prompt #2 Dilligence
3 - "Many of my friends told me that I would mumble, move around nervously, and stutter." The above sentence...
UndergraduateMIGotyouTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
|Rice Essay Prompt: Personal Perspective
2 - Even though I didn't agree with them, I could look at them through nonjudgmental eyes. Great essay but...
Undergraduatelacylou09EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008