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2 - I'm assuming you are seeking technical assistance: First, make sure that if you use a period the first...
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2 - Good afternoon. The content of pieces like these are pretty much up to you. Choose something that will...
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2 - Good afternoon. "citizen" should be capitalized, as it is a proper noun in this case. Avoid using...
Undergraduatesuraju91EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
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2 - ... of America was particularly moving and inspirational to me. Please see my comments as to mechanical errors in...
UndergraduateMIKERANDEF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|Essay: marry someone familiar or different?
3 - Good afternoon. Devotion has really great feedback, all of which I agree with. Since he/she has covered all...
Writing FeedbacksonaliEF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|Voyage of discovery English essay - I don't know how to start it
3 - Good afternoon. What events or experiences are most memorable for you out of this class? Regards, Gloria...
EssaysbiggirlEF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|Check my sop and let it be hidden. (master of environment). Researches in Iran
2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this assignment were not included, I can give advice for...
GraduateshadiEF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|the horror of my dreaded alarm clock - Common App Essay
2 - Good afternoon. First, a few mechanical comments. 1. Avoid using contractions in your academic writing as they...
UndergraduateazianpinoyEF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|PSU Schreyers Honors Essay. NEED HELP
2 - Good afternoon. Mechanically, watch your use of excessive and inappropriate use of commas. Perhaps a quick refresher on...
Undergraduatejusanglee91EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|Duquesne University essay; You never know what event in your life is going to change your life.
UndergraduateSturz15EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|Doodles - Undergrad Admission Essay for Cornell....not finished yet!
2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of thoughts. First, avoid contractions in your formal academic writing, as they...
Undergraduatespazzed_aznEF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
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2 - "Removed; this is too much background that really doesn't have anything to do with the rest of your piece....
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|Rutger undergraduate essay - learning throughout life
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UndergraduateflickeringlightDevotion - Oct 29, 2008
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4 - Oh and, one thing good about writing something that you experienced is that you not only know it, but...
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NEW - hello!! here is my statement of intent for the School of Visual Arts. I was wondering if you could...
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|Learning from failure - CommonApp essay
7 - Oh, thanks! I didn't catch that! And I was wondering about the naive thing, too. I wasn't sure...
Undergraduatedocument1document1 - Oct 28, 2008
|University of Pennsylvania: most interest you / favorite Penn professor
2 - Good afternoon. First, a few mechanical concerns. Make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the...
UndergraduateAlekseyEF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
|'the gruesome scene in summer' - Life Experience Common App. Essay
2 - Excellent essay. Very organized, good flow, very descriptive. You stay on topic and answer the prompt very well. You...
UndergraduateAlekseyEF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
|My research project Common APP 150 words extra-curricular commitment
2 - Good afternoon. It is probably this browser, but I can't tell what is at the beginning of the...
UndergraduatecloudoneEF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
|Why I applied to Molloy - I need some help with my admission essay
2 - Good afternoon. I would discuss the specific aspects of Molloy that drew you to it. What is it...
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|Penn Admissions Essay - having a hard time finishing ..
Undergraduatex3racha3lEF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
|How will college ed. help you achieve personal+professional goals? [Purdue]
8 - You're very welcome. Sure. "House Captain," "Annual Day, Sports Day," Computer Engineering." It's really up to you...
UndergraduatemrhohohaEF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
|holding my flute tightly - Common App: elaborate your activity
4 - Thanks for advices, I really appreciated them. I wrote my essay again but I'm still not sure whether I'm...
Undergraduateahpahf723ahpahf723 - Oct 28, 2008
|Drawing Guinness - 150 words or less work experience (common app)
6 - Good evening. It's really up to the admissions board. Some times they won't even consider something that exceeds...
Undergraduatelburgess88EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
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Undergraduatefawnbolak591EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
|Two children / Orlando Knight - Two UCF essays
2 - Good evening. You've got two good pieces here, so I'm going to give you some suggestions to help...
UndergraduatesaragreenEF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
|My Exchange Year--elaborate on one of your activities
2 - I like the conclusion of this piece, but I'm not sure the beginning and middle match it. For instance,...
UndergraduategracetmEF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008