Essaystdottdot - Oct 27, 2006
|Grad school admission - essay writing ideas?
3 - If you just need some general pointers, here they are :). Admission Essays should be a very straight...
EssaysraniaEF_Team - Oct 27, 2006
|Graduate Studies - Disability Studies
2 - Greetings! From a quick internet search, it appears there aren't a lot of doctoral programs in disability studies...
GraduategoldencompassEF_Team2 - Oct 26, 2006
|An Example of a Written Response to a Dissatisfied Customer
NEW - Greetings! I am happy to respond to this customer! While we hate to have any dissatisfied clients, it...
|Did Somebody Say Genocide?; response/summary essay
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent, informative essay which does a good job of explaining the complex factors...
Writing FeedbackcalvinphoonEF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|'As America closes its eyes' - Grey Decay by The Sacrosanct College Essay
2 - Greetings! You make some good points here. The subject matter is one which can engender some strong emotions....
Book ReportsThe_SacrosanctEF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse
2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...
Writing FeedbackjkolhagenEF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay
4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....
UndergraduateArmandEF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|Looking for help - graduate school admission personal statement MSW program
2 - Greetings! Admissions essays can be a bit tricky because most people feel uncomfortable writing about themselves, especially when...
GraduateloisEF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2006
|On the morning I've been waiting for all year!
3 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...
Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchikEF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
|Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...
Writing FeedbackstarphyreEF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
|FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)
4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...
UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboyEF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
|Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family
17 - You are a dedicated student and I know you will do very well with your studies! Sarah, EssayForum.com...
UndergraduateeconsangelEF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
|Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!
Writing Feedbackjanicefiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
|WW1 , the Treaty of Versalilles, WW11
2 - Greetings! You have an excellent start here! I agree that your paragraphs could use just a bit of...
Essaysjoshua_arebaloEF_Team2 - Oct 14, 2006
|Help, I'm new here. Is it okay to use parenthese around...
4 - Greetings! Sometimes it's a judgment call as to whether quotation marks are required or not, but I think...
EssaysChloeSongEF_Team2 - Oct 13, 2006
|How to Deal with a Difficult Dissertation Advisor?
NEW - How many of us have shown up to an advisor meeting with a stack of carefully acquired research and...
|'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review
2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
|The Difference Between Personal and Professional Relationship
EssaysPraveenPraveen - Oct 10, 2006
|The damnation of the canyon is one man's account
3 - Greetings! You have definitely improved the essay, so congratulations! There are still a few places that could use...
Writing Feedbackarkaudio123EF_Team2 - Oct 6, 2006
|Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)
Writing Feedbacknjbignellnjbignell - Oct 4, 2006
|Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life
14 - Greetings again! About "degree full-time" versus "full-time degree" . . . the degree itself is not "full-time." You...
UndergraduateeconsangelEF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006
|Doctor Faustus Essay
Writing FeedbackjeffspearsEF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
|The Things They Carried By Tim O'Brien
Essayssamsungsamsung - Sep 27, 2006
|Who is a villain? Need help with essay on Villain of Canadian history
3 - Greetings! When you are looking for someone who is the "most" anything, it is often subjective -- that...
EssaysVladEF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
|'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget
3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
|Paper On Theologians.
5 - Greetings! While I can't give you a lot of information specifically on theologians since I'm not an expert...
EssaysVladEF_Team2 - Sep 22, 2006
|MOVIE THEME EDITING
5 - Greetings! I think "cause" is the proper word there. The part I have trouble with is "do everything...
EssaysstartanewlifeEF_Team2 - Sep 19, 2006
|Nazi Germany was a totalitarian state
2 - Greetings! It is always important to keep in mind that the function of writing is to communicate. If...
Writing FeedbackougoahEF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
|Some information about Ibesn
4 - Greetings again! Perhaps I should have said The Ibsen Society of America. The information on their site seems...
EssaysEileenEF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006