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|"Same-sex Marriages in Canada and America"
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|Answer format of "How X will describe you" ?
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|When it comes to writing, my attitude is instinctual negative/Attitude toward writing
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Writing Feedbackcolla26colla26 - Aug 26, 2007
|In Response To "Too Much Pressure"
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Writing FeedbacksilverystarsEF_Team2 - Aug 24, 2007
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|Corporate newsletter answer - GMAT AWA essays rated?
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Grammar, UsagemukmukEF_Team2 - Aug 24, 2007
|Sun-Sentinels journalism programs; UF campus- Significant Event
3 - Greetings! Yes, I think you've definitely improved it! I do have a few editing suggestions: Your first...
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|I Stand Here Ironing (literature using historical Context)
NEW - Family The Great Depression is an era that will always be remembered as a triumph. Many people were...
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|Personal Statements for a PhD application - questions
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|Neolithic Agricultural Revolution
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Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Aug 13, 2007
|Research Brief - fear in a community and election
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Research PapersMistral RollerEF_Team2 - Aug 11, 2007
|Structure for research essay?
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Research Paperskim201EF_Team2 - Aug 6, 2007
|having a birthmother is a good opportunity (is it a good essay?)
NEW - please help me! topic: having a birthmother is a good opportunity for the ones who can not have...
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|Role of Construction Industry in Macro Economics - Need help
2 - Greetings! You might want to check out HM Treasury site here: hm-treasury.gov.uk for such things as the Barker...
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