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2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|I need strategies in writing an analogy
2 - Good afternoon :) An analogy is the thinking process of transferring characteristics of your source item to another...
Grammar, UsagetantyEF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|A successful college campus - Lehigh Second Supplement
2 - I think this is a great response. You answer all facets of the prompt thoroughly, and your example is...
Undergraduatevaibhav2614EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|For UC transfer essay, some questions.
UndergraduategalzEF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|to expand my knowledge - FSU essay, opinions and suggestions on improvement
2 - You have a very good essay here; a few structural/mechanical suggestions, but you answer the prompt effectively. You discuss...
Undergraduatelps227EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange
NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....
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|Master in Advertising - my true passion and my hard-working spirit is strong enough
NEW - I am very grateful for your help on my essay - regarding structure, grammar and spelling etc. Requirement:...
|"Mi casa es tu casa" - Common Application- Personal Statement
3 - Good evening :) I think you have done a fantastic job answering this prompt. You have described the...
Undergraduatejdsams02EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|Family, qualities - UCF Admissions Essay: #2 + #4
NEW - 2. How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are? For Centuries, America has been...
|Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:
2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...
Writing FeedbacktonydengcnuEF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|"to even graduate" - PROMPT #2 PERSONAL STATEMENT
NEW - I am the first person in my family to even graduate from high school; when my father was not...
|"The alphabet I know consists of only seven letters." -UC statement pr 2
2 - Good evening :) I have edited one section of your piece and then provided some general comments in...
UndergraduatecuecomeberEF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|International student to apply Tesol - Statement of Purpose
2 - I'm not really sure about the content of your essay. Have you been to college already and majored in...
UndergraduateMinJungEF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|UCF essay about family dinner
2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then made some more general comments in regards...
UndergraduatefrubanEF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|"Playing with my Yoshi doll and making new friends" - UC Prompt #1
6 - In regards to content, I'm not sure really where you are going with it. In the introduction you talk...
UndergraduateXegonyvEF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|UC Prompt 1, My life at a boarding school
UndergraduatethaggEF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty
5 - Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what my poverty...
Writing FeedbackscashLex - Nov 19, 2008
|The Freedom to Choose Death
NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...
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|Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnutonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008
|"trying for the best university in the world" - Uc Prompt #2
Undergraduatehallelujahhallelujah - Nov 18, 2008
|FU Essay - Significant experience/Achievement - Revisions Needed
Undergraduateahhitsj0eahhitsj0e - Nov 18, 2008
|'Growing up I hated to read' - Fashion Institute of Technology essay
UndergraduatesunsetswitheliEF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|Taking action against moral injustice - English Essay Gr. 12 Level
3 - You're very welcome. This is a very importance stance, and this sentence needs to be included somewhere in...
Writing FeedbackGeistEF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|Study abroad program in Nicaragu - Uc Prompt #2. Need Complete Revision
2 - First, make sure your words and sentences aren't redundant. For example, "I started thinking about how I felt before...
UndergraduateveesualizeEF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|"DARPA Grand Challenge" - Lehigh Short Essay
2 - Good evening :) I won't ever "tear you down." :) Constructive criticism, now, that's my forte :) ...
Undergraduatevaibhav2614EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|"the happy and healthy world" -UC essays #1 and #2
2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to the first piece, as long as it fits the word count requirement,...
UndergraduateAsapirs23EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|"I can never know everything, but with what I know, I can accomplish anything" - essay check
2 - Good evening :) I have provided some general comments in regards to mechanics in this piece. First,...
Undergraduatepinks1026EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|comparing essay: Machiavelli & Sheikh Mohamad Bin Rashid
4 - Good afternoon :) That is where your brainstorming comes in; the "hard work" of the assignment. Try brainstorming...
EssayssaraEF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|choose an activity that reveals something about you---needs proofreading.
2 - Good afternoon :) See me comments on your other postings in regards to mechanical corrections, as they apply...
Undergraduategcueva26EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
|Journalism - MACAULAY ADMISSION ESSAY: needs proofreading
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