|My parents, my uncle and passionate teachers.
2 - Good evening :) I only have a couple of suggestions. First, make sure you are capitalizing only the...
UndergraduatekariikanEF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|"I cherished friendship" - UC APPLICATION prompt 2
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|Against - Global Warming research paper
Research PapershanseasEF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|The expansion of higher education from 1970~2000; leadership of the Presidents
2 - Good afternoon. "With Louise's instruction, I analyzed the expansion of higher education in from 1970~2000, and discussed leadership...
Writing FeedbackireneccEF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|Experience in which you left your comfort zone - University of Richmond
NEW - Here is my essay for the University of Richmond, I would really love it if you checked for content...
|FSU Admission Essay - the prompt tells me what to do but how to start?
Undergraduateathomas1891athomas1891 - Nov 10, 2008
|UC prompt - a man and woman from Hong Kong
NEW - If you can please leave comments about the content, grammar, and punctuation. Thank you! Prompt 1 Describe the...
|UC 1, my intending major, ESL student not sure about grammars
NEW - I think I've develop a good topic (since I've told what I want and instered in). But English is...
|About the description of study experience
Graduateireneccirenecc - Nov 9, 2008
|'sure-to-be-discovered director' - Person Who Impacted You -- UT Essay A
3 - Ahhh, thank you SO MUCH Gloria. I will add those sentences back in (I pulled them out to hammer...
UndergraduateDarthrosenberg0Darthrosenberg0 - Nov 9, 2008
|Personal Response (Ten Things the Chinese Do Much Better Than We Do)
3 - Thanks!...
Writing FeedbackFissionMailedFissionMailed - Nov 9, 2008
|Essay: "Better an egg today than a hen tomorrow"
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|Tips and proof read for a critique report
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|MPH program - GRADUATE APPLICATION ESSAY
4 - Good morning. This is a public website and at this time we don't provide private consultations. Regards,...
GraduateFutureGradEF_Team5 - Nov 9, 2008
|"women are solely responsible for bringing children up"; I completely disagree
4 - Good morning :) OK, let's see. How about reworking it to something like: "The optimal lifestyle for a...
Writing Feedbackmasih_essayEF_Team5 - Nov 9, 2008
|'more than just a five-letter word' - Davidson honor code essay
NEW - I would appreciate any suggestions as to how to condense my response to the prompt. Prompt: The Davidson...
|'The truth about catholic schools' - why i chose this college (St. Olaf College)
2 - I think you could make this essay stronger by discussing more in-depth what it is that makes this school...
UndergraduatenanayawsEF_Team5 - Nov 8, 2008
|short answers - 1. community activity and 2. personal goal
Undergraduateluv4evrEF_Team5 - Nov 8, 2008
|short answer - "Identify type of intelligence and discuss experiences"
2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, only one suggestion: -"I am logical-mathematical, with a penchant for naturalist." Try "I...
Undergraduateluv4evrEF_Team5 - Nov 8, 2008
|'Getting everyone involved' Why would I apply to Lehigh and my contributions
|a person who have influenced you and whats that influence
NEW - please check if there is any grammatical error and if it is catchy thank you Confidence, intelligence, determination,...
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NEW - Throughout my life, I have always been in the absence of knowledge. I have to fight for answers and...
|IELTS essay -Young people taking study break for work or travel
NEW - Hi there, Please help me to rate my essay. Topic in details : In some countries, young people...
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|diversity experience short answer question umich
2 - Good evening. Mechanically, are my suggestions: "The folded chairs set crowded around the table were nearly full....
Undergraduatetln1sg19EF_Team5 - Nov 7, 2008
|Maths Personal Statement for London universities - general checking
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|THE JUNGLE ESSAY #2 - how Sinclair demonizes capitalism?
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|Essay about why do we need laptop?
2 - Good morning. This website is a public forum for students to receive assistance with their writing. You may...
Essaysmiss yaayEF_Team5 - Nov 7, 2008
|Describe a significant experience or achievement (the Corps) - essay
2 - My main concern here is that your piece doesn't quite answer the prompt. You were asked to explain a...
Undergraduatelist00EF_Team5 - Nov 7, 2008
|Character Analysis of "Lust": how the author creates a helpless character.
3 - Thank you. I've changed the we to readers, and have worked out a conclusion, though it is rough. I'm...
Writing FeedbackRuby3561Ruby3561 - Nov 6, 2008
|I volunteer at an orphanage here in Senegal - Short Answer for Common App
4 - I agree; the rest of the essay flows so well that the beginning does seem problematic. I think the...
Undergraduatemspivey2EF_Team5 - Nov 6, 2008