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LettersDocDoc - Jan 8, 2008
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Writing FeedbacknavinnangEF_Team2 - Jan 8, 2008
|A mature student who hasn't written an essay in 20 years needs help
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|"Speculating on my death" - essay
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GraduatemahmoudEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
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Undergraduatealex08EF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
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Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
|Prompt A for UT at Austin: write about someone that has impacted you
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Undergraduatealex08EF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
|essay contest on personal experience. how do i make it more powerful?
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Writing FeedbackposhbabydollEF_Team2 - Jan 5, 2008
|Satire Essay -Rights of Handicapped Children (lack of)
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Writing Feedbackwarrior108EF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
|Open topic essay [graduate program in Human Rights]
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|Mandatory arrest laws - domestic violence
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Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
|'the word coconut' / 'aerial view' - UVA short answer essays
2 - Greetings! I think you've written a couple of excellent essays! And yes, the flow is fine! Here are...
UndergraduateblinkEF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
|"Changing the world" ; Corrine's personal essay
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|'Greece lengthy security line' - Significant experience and its impact - personal
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Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
|Help for non academic writing his first Essay (mature Student 41 !)
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|Essay: Intelligent Design not Science!
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Writing Feedbackrsgino7EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
|Should Tuck Shop Stop Selling 'Junk Food"? - practice essay (article)
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Writing Feedbackshing200584EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
|Infringing copyright - writing exam practice essay (letter to editor)
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Lettersshing200584EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
|History, patterns, and dynamics of violence between intimate partners
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|The start of a witness report/assignment for law (high school level)
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