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Undergraduatedeadfire55 - Oct 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 7, 2010
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| "Moving to Florida adventure" - UCF Admission Essay- "Bump in the road"
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| Not only belief: Young people are no longer interested in religion
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| I'd run my own business" ;To purchase a house or a business - TOEFL
Writing Feedbackecmagalhaes - Oct 2, 2010nn8nk - Oct 7, 2010
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| A week at Warrenville Paint and Hardware - experience, achievement, risk, dilemma
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| "Pledge of Allegiance Controversy" ApplyTexas Essay Topic B
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| A beautiful campus, engineering and Co-op program - Why Northwestern College Essay
Undergraduatebrad2011 - Oct 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 6, 2010
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| How to write a good essay? Give me some pointers (imaginery, phrases)
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| The Courageous Keys - Princeton Supplement
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| What I dont know - Being a student.
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| "What it took to get me from there to here" Common app essay
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| "don't panic but strive" - Risk you have taken and its impact - Common App Prompt
Undergraduatenovanix - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 6, 2010
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| "working class America" -what part of this admission essay should I cut out / edit?
Undergraduatexphara - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 6, 2010
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| "Where Spanish and American traditions merge" - Study abroad scholarship essay
ScholarshipKrysmoi - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 6, 2010
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| About the invetion of soap in ancient Egypt: edit my paragraph?
Writing Feedbacklzhd1028 - Oct 6, 2010lzhd1028 - Oct 6, 2010
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| "Don't be angry" valuble piece of advice my father once gave me.
Writing FeedbackZubaida - Oct 2, 2010anhduy_tran - Oct 6, 2010
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| Self-Founded Book Bridge Club: 150 word
Undergraduatetensplyr4eva - Oct 1, 2010gmt_snail - Oct 6, 2010
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| Research Paper on HR topics, help me select one from the list
Dissertationsruch051286 - Sep 6, 2010patricia39 - Oct 6, 2010
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| Twin essay for UMiami. I have high testscore and a low gpa, so this essay is crucial!
Undergraduateleetaniau - Oct 4, 2010donrocks - Oct 6, 2010
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| "When and Where"; doing work by hand or using machines?
Writing Feedbackkperera - Oct 5, 2010kperera - Oct 6, 2010
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| "to bring my ideals to fruition" -Academic and extracurricular pursuits - UPenn
UndergraduateMarleyWH - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| Mae Jemison; historical figure influenced you and explain that influence
Undergraduatefreezard7734 - Aug 4, 2010freezard7734 - Oct 5, 2010
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| *Strength is Success - Texas Essay Prompt C*
UndergraduateMarisamanga - Oct 5, 2010Marisamanga - Oct 5, 2010
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| "the suburbs of Detroit" - MIT undergrad - Describe the world you come from
UndergraduatetheTalkingRice - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| Rutgers: volunteering diversity
UndergraduatePriyanka3 - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| "goals of my dad" - Drexel Essay with the major of Business
UndergraduatePriyanka3 - Sep 4, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| "High school swim practice" - University of Illinois under grad admission essay
Undergraduatemagnum542 - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| writing an essay about something i'm proud of in the world or sth i'm ashamed of.
Essaysduhnah - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| Given your desired major and why- Prison Ministry
UndergraduateRyanVi16 - Oct 2, 2010EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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| "Breaking Away, Being Out On My Own" - UF Essay
UndergraduateBubbles Pink - Oct 3, 2010Bubbles Pink - Oct 5, 2010
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