|The Super Student, a person who had an influence on me - admission essay
Undergraduateeagle6002eagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008
|Cross Country; most exhilarating experience; Extracurricular Activity
2 - Good afternoon :) "For me, Cross CountryThese are not proper nouns and shouldn't be capitalized. has been one...
Undergraduateeagle6002EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life
2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...
Writing FeedbackTMcGeeEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|Jackie essay - Demolish my essay or work with it.
3 - I think if you explain to your audience that responsibility is reflected in your life now, that will be...
Undergraduatejenchow1992EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|Graduate Essay-Why do we need a Semiotic Methodology of Theatre? UNFINISHED
2 - Good afternoon :) As this is not within my area of expertise, I have made comments in regards...
GraduatecarlajayneEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|UC prompt 1---multiculture in school and my contribution
2 - Good afternoon :) As you didn't include the prompt for this essay or what kind of assistance you...
Undergraduateester1213EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|Columbia / prudent adventurer ~~~I need suggestion~
2 - Good afternoon :) Since you didn't describe what kind of assistance you were seeking, I have some very...
Undergraduateester1213EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|"striving to major in a certain area" - UC prompt 1 - i need help
2 - Good afternoon :) First, a mechanical suggestion: avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "wouldn't" should be...
UndergraduatekewlliljethroEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|"MC in Valentines Day event" - UC transfer applicants prompt #1
2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then provided some more general comments in regards...
UndergraduategalzEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|My Team, This is who I am. Prompt two.
2 - I have edited the first section and then given you some general comments in regards to the rest of...
UndergraduateAndrewessayEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|I had my first experience in sales and merchandising ; FIT App
2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section of your piece and then given some more general...
Undergraduatesaemilee517EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|Global Warming Phenomenon- Research Paper
Research PapersSergioc1EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|'looking to become a computer engineer' - Rutgers University Admission
6 - Good afternoon :) I think that if you present the piece well-rounded from many angles such as you...
UndergraduateBlackPhoenixEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|'Curiosity in mathematics and science' - University of Rochester
2 - "The education facilities there provide stellar academic programs related to the sciences in a cordial environment. Should I decide...
Undergraduatequack09EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|Field of Linguistics, anyone?
DissertationsmikitungEF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|International Youth Leadership Forum travel - UC Essay prompt #2
3 - Good afternoon :) I believe you have answered the prompt effectively. You describe the experience as well as...
Undergraduatejedijessy91EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|WPI Short Answers-Need revise & critic
3 - Well, I forgot that I have already paste my second essay before. Anyway, thank you very much for...
Undergraduatehelenalqyhelenalqy - Nov 21, 2008
|"my life is prepared for all methods" - UC Prompt #1
3 - Great thanks, u've helped me a lot :) I was just wondering my passage was a little bit irrelevent...
Undergraduatehallelujahhallelujah - Nov 21, 2008
|'self respecting male' - common app essay for princeton
Undergraduateaktanukuquack09 - Nov 20, 2008
|'recognized by many coaches' - the world you come from. UC prompt #1
NEW - hello, I was wondering if you could help me with fixing up my introduction paragraph, as well as editing...
|"Born in Peru" - Need Help On Personal Statement Prompt #1
UndergraduateFatalKid91FatalKid91 - Nov 20, 2008
|"6th grade incident" - UC transfer. Prompt #2
2 - I don't think it's a bad example to use; on the contrary, it obviously made an impact, causing you...
UndergraduatemusikloverEF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.
2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....
Writing Feedbacksadie0910EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|Essay about bad effects of the internet on students
2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|I need strategies in writing an analogy
2 - Good afternoon :) An analogy is the thinking process of transferring characteristics of your source item to another...
Grammar, UsagetantyEF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|A successful college campus - Lehigh Second Supplement
2 - I think this is a great response. You answer all facets of the prompt thoroughly, and your example is...
Undergraduatevaibhav2614EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|For UC transfer essay, some questions.
UndergraduategalzEF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|to expand my knowledge - FSU essay, opinions and suggestions on improvement
2 - You have a very good essay here; a few structural/mechanical suggestions, but you answer the prompt effectively. You discuss...
Undergraduatelps227EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange
NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....
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|Realism Essay - the readers choice
NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...
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