|UC essay #1: Living in Orange County
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|Black and White personalities - UC Prompt Numero Uno
2 - Good evening :) A few suggestions. First, make sure you are properly formatting the titles of the books...
UndergraduatecutelilgaaraEF_Team5 - Nov 17, 2008
|Writing is the basis for all education and is too often overshadowed in schools today
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|'The lights flickered back and forth as I sat in my seat.' Personal quality - did i go off topic?
Undergraduatemathfun1227EF_Team5 - Nov 17, 2008
|UC Promt: 'sacrifice and adversity' - freshman applicants
2 - Make sure you are using proper spacing. For instance, "...next day , while..." should be "...next day, while..." ...
UndergraduateveesualizeEF_Team5 - Nov 17, 2008
|I really enjoyed what I did; FIT(fashion merchandising)
|Trouble Getting Started on UC essay about my journey
EssaysElbozonicElbozonic - Nov 16, 2008
|'I knew little about my grandpa' - Texas Lutheran University admission essay
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|Life is all about changes and lessons - FSU admisson essay
2 - Make sure to maintain the theme (in this case, strength) throughout your piece. You let it get away from...
UndergraduatebrefranzenEF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|An emotional connection with the reader - rhetorical research writing
2 - Good evening :) Sometimes, mainly in creative writing situations, it is OK to use "you;" but you are...
Research PapersBryeEF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|Philmont Boy Scout Ranch is the summer hike everyone in Troop 62 looked forward to. UF Essay
Undergraduatechatch15117EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|Studying at traditional schools or via computer or TV
2 - I think your response is a very thorough response to the prompt. It is organized, well structured, and explains...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|UC Personal Statement - finding leeway
UndergraduateRiceFiendRiceFiend - Nov 16, 2008
|King Lear - main points of my Essay
4 - Good evening. This website is to assist students with their academic writing. We help with editing, proofreading, grammar,...
EssaysthundahEF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|Fr. Julian: Common App- influential person essay.
Undergraduateacorbett19acorbett19 - Nov 16, 2008
|Nurture has only limited impact on early human development compared to Nature
2 - One of my main concerns with this piece is that none of the research/statistics/data is cited. Where did this...
Writing Feedbackdude91EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|Literature response- writing like a child, need reviews
NEW - I had to write something similar to a "My Name" fragment by Sandra Cisneros. The Format was ...
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|FSU Application Essay- "Vires, Artes, Mores" and my parents
NEW - To me, "Vires, Artes, Mores" captures the essence and character of an individual destined to be a productive and...
|I prefer working in the large company - more chances of promotion
Writing FeedbackAsselyaAsselya - Nov 16, 2008
|Essay about "Better communication types"
NEW - Here is another essay. It will be a very great help if you give me any suggestion or comments...
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|'Painting is my identity' - your extra-curricular activities - commonapp
Undergraduateprincetongirlprincetongirl - Nov 16, 2008
|"Art is not a thing; it is a way." - Elbert Hubbard - FSU Admission Essay.
Undergraduaterejoice916EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|(prepare for future job/increase knowledge) Why people attend college or university?
Writing Feedbackfranklampardenfranklamparden - Nov 15, 2008
|My leadership skills will benefit the university community and cause for a better society to live in
Undergraduatebballjessie23bballjessie23 - Nov 15, 2008
|Crohn's - UC essay #2
Undergraduateskeim23skeim23 - Nov 15, 2008
|How the internet has improved your academic experience.
5 - Good evening. This website is to assist students with their academic writing. We help with editing, proofreading, grammar,...
Writing Feedbackjnix612EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|Just started working on my Ph.D.
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Dissertationsresearcher_lawEF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|"Can I get you something to drink?" - common app essay.
|help with organizing a short answer for UR
2 - Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...
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