|Live a life that is pleasing to my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ, FSU essay
Undergraduatebeccaboo3290pilla2008 - Oct 10, 2008
|Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay
2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...
Writing FeedbackgodsendEEF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|FSU essay: "Vires", has been forefront in my life
2 - Just a general comment: perhaps refreshing yourself with the rules of comma usage could benefit you; you seem to...
UndergraduatebaileyEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|personal history - FSU to get accepted in college
UndergraduatelecokrEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|Describe a setback that you have faced (brother) - essay
7 - beccaboo3290's tips are excellent! Good job guys! The main thing about formality in academic writing is to stay...
UndergraduateelthanoEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|Luncheon to honor the winners of the Boca Delray Music Society - UF
NEW - Any feedback is appreciated. I have a concern with my middle section. I'd like to make the middle...
|"Wings of Wax" - Emerson College Admissions Essay
NEW - We understand that the college application process often feels stressful, when it should be an opportunity for self-reflection. Stop...
|"... becoming Superman" - FSU Essay..last one I promise
NEW - And last but not least the FSU essay. Like before, all help most appreciated. Thank you! As a...
|passion for a particular subject or a cause Univerity of Delaware APP essay
NEW - Have you discovered your passion for a particular subject or a cause? I walked into the exhibit early,...
|"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals
NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...
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|"million thoughts to pressure me" - FSU essay intro comments/suggestions
2 - That's cool you're a Christian too! I'm applying to FSU as well. It's my top choice. :) That's so...
Undergraduatepilla2008beccaboo3290 - Oct 9, 2008
|"...constant fighting of my parents" - UCF essay number two
NEW - This is my second UCF essay on How my family history, culture or environment influenced me. As before, please...
|Your activities - common app personal statement - 3 to choose from
NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...
|which airplane flies the farthest- science report
NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....
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|"My mother's diagnosis" - admission essay --Vires
NEW - The Florida State University motto "Vires, Artes, Mores" focuses on strength, the arts, and tradition. Each of these values...
|Compare two poems: Love Poems from Spain vs Raven, Annabel Lee
Poetryirishcol25irishcol25 - Oct 9, 2008
|Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work
4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...
Writing FeedbackThuyChiEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|My moral strength: parents and my Catholic education -FSU application essay
Undergraduatepencilpencil - Oct 8, 2008
|"The Treble and the Bass" - No prompt, just me rambling
UndergraduateJustJoshinbyJEF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|ARTISTIC TALENT; UCF- Unique characteristics and qualities
2 - Good evening. The beginning is difficult because right now it is confusing; it does not match up with...
UndergraduatehicckupsEF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|Purpose in undertaking graduate study in a particular program - grad essay
8 - I'm glad I could help. Once you have revised, please note however, that per our TOS I can only...
GraduatehellsnycEF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|"swimming season" - FSU vires and mores
UndergraduatemeganwhitehurstEF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)
2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...
Writing FeedbackwordlesstuEF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|"Vires, Artes, Mores" each been reflected in my life ; Froeign student from Brazil
NEW - The Latin words "Vires, Artes, Mores" have each been reflected in my life in some way or another. These...
|Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?
NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....
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|"Genetic influences" - i need help with my psychology essay
3 - Hi Gloria thankyou for getting back to me, i think you are right i will speak to my instructor...
Essayssusanjo76susanjo76 - Oct 8, 2008
|Education superiority,Cultural variety,Lively student life, Location; Why Lehigh U?
NEW - Question: As you researches and visited colleges and universitys, why did you decided to apply to Lehigh? Please give...
|UC ADMISSION ESSAY: YOSEMITE NATIONAL PARK
3 - You're very welcome. It sounds like the finished product will be a very nice text. Regards, Gloria...
UndergraduatealexteeleEF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|Museum Studies Admission Essay - Syracuse University
4 - Good morning. I don't know if it "lacks personality" but it is "purely business." These prompts are designed...
Graduateluskak96EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|PhD admission - "outline of area of study". Research proposal?
Essaysrizirizi - Oct 8, 2008