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4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...
Writing FeedbacksilentEF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|UCF essay - "the beautiful pieces of art set up around me"
2 - Good afternoon. You have a very organized, well written essay here. Your paragraphs are properly structured, you use...
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|Conflict at a personal level essay - Need help for opening para
6 - Good afternoon. If the assignment is to analyze the effects of these things on your life, there is...
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|UF Essay - The Place I Adore
2 - ...lugar! (I will never go back to that place!)" ...Oaks Middle school that I... ...language, customs, traditions,...
Undergraduatecarompapale1EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|Satire Essay on animal farm, a modest proposal and the TV show frontline
2 - Good afternoon. Your post is seeking course specific answers, and as such my free assistance will be very...
Essaysbenny332EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|'Continuing to excel' - FSU Essay - Vires
2 - It looks like it answers the prompt efficiently. I would use the Latin word you wrote about in the...
UndergraduatetrewtonEF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|"Left Mom and Dad in China for California" - good for Common App topic 1?
NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...
|"The world I was headed for is more important" - admission essay
NEW - Describe the environment you come from - for example, your family, community, or school - and how this environment...
|'making business successful' - Essay for MBA Finance program
NEW - My name is Yu-Chieh Li. I graduated from the University of North Texas and received my bachelor's degree in...
|"One more shot" - common application short question (150 words)
NEW - "One more shot. Just gimme another shot. Don't give up!" "Yes!" We win the game. Here I stood in...
|Statement of purpose (graduate studies in chemical engineering)
NEW - Please provide your feedback on my SOP.Also please suggest if i could include more details(such as undergrad scores, gre...
|Character of a Man - Essay
NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...
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|Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother
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|Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word
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|my part in giving back and bettering the society - Proofreading and Advice
NEW - UF Admission Essay. Here's the prompt Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how...
|The school has always been a dream of mine. fsu essay "vires, artes, mores"
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|North Dakota - Common app formatting questions and an essay
4 - You're welcome. I italicized that section because I referred to it in my bottom comments, and I wanted...
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|Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]
NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...
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|Defining moments in people's lives - uc admissions essay
2 - Nice job; a good example and a great answer to the prompt. The essay flows well, good transitions are...
UndergraduatelaurenkillEF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Intern in Washington D.C under Congressman Duncan Hunter - Common App Essay
2 - You've got a good subject idea here; this is obviously an experience that has made an impact on you....
Undergraduateprivater_ryanEF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Gendering Children Based on Toys Essay Help- Is it good??
4 - Good morning. What are the specifics of the assignment? More details about what are expected will be helpful....
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|UofM Book that impacted you essay - 1984 application essay
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|"Dance is what I love to do" - Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - You do need a conclusion here to wrap this essay up; something to connect the end with the beginning,...
Undergraduateskrocki09EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Jigsaw puzzles / Singaporean experience - Diversity Essays
5 - Sure; I think the flow of the two essays is fine, as well as the transitions between paragraphs. Both...
Undergraduatekids_jessyEF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|SURGERY SCAR; Overcoming Hardships Essay
2 - Good morning. Well, you won't know how the piece will turn out unless you write it. I suggest...
EssaysdorkeeEF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Tattoos and piercings essay. Audacious Alterations.
2 - My main concern with this essay is that there is a lot of uncited information here, opening the door...
Writing FeedbackFayFuaEF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Cross-country / Nano Research Facility - one of your activities Help
NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...