|Describe interests, their evolution and what makes them exciting (college)
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|"just do it because it's best for you"; My intended major - UC personal statement (transfer student)
2 - Good evening. "Growing up I always challenged my mother when she said her infamous line, "J ust do...
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|Invisible Children (sociology essay)
2 - Good evening. Mechanically, only one correction; make sure you consistently refer to the group as "the Invisible Children"...
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|Being involved in or witnessed a trouble situation - Essay Help
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|the invasion of HIV aids - elaborate on your extra curriculum activitues
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|"The pedigree of football" - a person who has made influence in my life
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|"I'm smart, because I'm Asian" - uc prompt #2
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|Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?
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|I am Generation Y - essay for college admission (personal statement)
2 - "I am " Generation Y," the unknown, the puzzle, and the hope. But why "Generation Y," why not "Generation...
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|'AIDS vaccine and cure' - Bard College essay
4 - I believe that it answers your prompt, and in regards to grammar, see my suggestions above. Regards, Gloria...
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|Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure.
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|Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article
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|getting a part-time job - U of I admission essay
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|Hypothesis essay on the book, Out of This Furnace
2 - Good evening :) I have some general comments about the piece. First, mechanics. Make sure you are...
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|Critical reflection on self essay
4 - Good evening :) Since I have already commented on sections of this essay, I am going to remind...
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|Essay Comparing 2 poems with the theme of "Women"
2 - Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...
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|Trouble narrowing down research topic about sport hiring process
6 - Good evening :) Excellent work! You have a very thorough outline here. The only thing I see with...
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|UC applications - Do's and Dont's?
2 - Good evening :) I am not familiar with the specifics of this university, but there are some general...
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|Volunteered at a hospital, specializing in the treatment of leukemia and cancer diagnosed children
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|"Knowledge is a real power" - grammar check
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|My first FOGANA experience - to find an outlet that could help me understand my background
3 - Good evening :) In regards to mechanics, a few suggestions. First, when you use quotation marks such as...
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|UPenn and Wharton School - the unique characteristics
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|Common App essay- someone who impacted you
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|Changing My Lifestyle - check my expressions and grammar in this essay
2 - This seems a bit disorganized. Try grouping your thoughts together. For instance, when you talk about the food you...
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|"What values are reflected in my life" -FSU Essay
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|Parents are the best teachers in terms of commitment and emotional support
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|Essay on "Prevention is better than Cure."
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|Let's make the world a better one! ;essay on compassion
NEW - Hello. this my essay on compassion. please give me some advices. especial conclusion. it is the hardest part for...
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