|Do these sentences make sense? Can I change the wording?
Grammar, Usagehunnybun39hunnybun39 - Oct 24, 2008
|Diversity to me is an intrinsic part of life; a lifelong learning essay
3 - Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the order in...
Writing FeedbacklilveniEF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|my first two years of high school - Another UF Essay
2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay. Mechanically it is clean; it is well organized, with tightly structured...
UndergraduateLiistEF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|I was ranked 1,569 in Maharashtra; Personal Statement - Physics&Math
6 - Good afternoon. I hope, as Sarah suggested, that you have read the terms of service for the site,...
UndergraduatemerocksjigarEF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|'Young people are no longer interested in religion.' What is your view?
Writing FeedbackThuyChiEF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|Undergraduate dissertation about the Scottish Oil Industry
2 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...
DissertationsSergioGBEF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|Without academic excellence, most students nowadays are squeezed out of the competition
3 - I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the flow too...
Writing FeedbackshatterXEF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|"realistic or optimistic" + "hardship and misfortune" -- essays edit help
NEW - Assignment: Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune? As an old saying in my hometown goes,"Adversities are...
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|What is a good title for an analysis essay?
Essaystouma00cutebunny181 - Oct 23, 2008
|Sunflower-yellow rice,green peas,red peppfood&black shells of mussels; Culture UC
2 - Good afternoon. I really like your essay, but it is somewhat disconnected. I am not sure what the...
Undergraduatevivalamariani51EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|One Character (C. Jefferson) from 'The Body In The Library' by A. Christie
2 - Good afternoon. Your post is quite confusing. If you are looking for information on the character of Conway...
EssayshayaletiniziEF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Do you think policemen should be paid more or less money in Turkey?
4 - Congratulations! Good work! See, you can do it, no problem! Keep up your hard work. Regards, Gloria Moderator,...
EssayshayaletiniziEF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|PS for Common App: Breaking Out. or cont. father's influence on me
2 - Good afternoon. I think your first essay is a good one. It's a good story that illustrates your...
UndergraduatejamieexEF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|I wish to pursue my graduate studies at your esteemed university; my draft of SoP (Computer science)
2 - ... excelled in programming-related subjects like System Programming, Computer Theory, Information Systems and Programming Languages.None of these should be...
Graduatenickee_thEF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Essay: What dish holds a strong associative power for you?
Writing Feedbacknikokoskinasnikokoskinas - Oct 23, 2008
|Encounter with myself; Florida State University - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
NEW - For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State...
Undergraduateroger chavez -
|Essay to gain sponsorship for Honours degree in Business Studies
UndergraduateTizzyTizzy - Oct 23, 2008
|Magazine's periodicity - the correct term?
4 - It doesn't matter what type of periodical it is (magazine, journal, etc.); they are still referred to as "serials"...
Grammar, UsagesaragrunhagenEF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|It is better to have one long school vacation than to have a few short one?
6 - I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed by a body that explains...
Writing FeedbackThuyChiEF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Short Essay Answers: Books, Interests, Why Occidental
2 - Good morning. Just a couple of mechanical corrections, all to do with capitalization. Remember to only capitalize proper...
Undergraduatedocument1EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Responsibility- through example or behavior of others?
Writing Feedbackhelenalqyhelenalqy - Oct 23, 2008
|Fall of Rome - history essay
EssaysjhgEF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|Essay: What will you bring along to Sahara + unforgettable experience
Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrosesweetbitterrose - Oct 22, 2008
|Check for my essay about my holiday trip to Singapore
2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's see: It is the smallest nation in SoutheastAs this is neither a proper...
Writing Feedbackwindcloud232EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|"DEATH PENALTY" ; Essay on a controversial issue.
4 - :) Research is funny like that, isn't it? Just so you know, I'm not up on my religious texts,...
EssayssolEF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|situations that were extremely challenging to overcome - UF admission
NEW - Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or...
|Working for My Family's Business - UF application essay
3 - Good morning :) Mechanically, I do have a few suggestions. First, make sure you are capitalizing only proper...
Undergraduatenicolle18EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|Extracurricular activities; MECD organization in Nicaragua
Undergraduatermdc25rmdc25 - Oct 22, 2008
|Our families have a major influence on who we are as a person - UCF essay!
Undergraduatexoxoheartx3EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|illness had most profound effect upon my life- UConn
NEW - - Describe a person or event that has had a profound effect upon your life. I immigrated to...