|'academic studies is a pleasure, not a chore' - UF, meaningful event
NEW - Please review my essay and give me suggestions on how to improve it... I also think my last paragraph...
|Essay: Who should pay tuition fees? STUDENTS or the GOVERNMENT?
Writing FeedbackstressfulEF_Team5 - Aug 26, 2008
|'A problem solving person' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
NEW - I am glad i found this site; it seems pretty helpful. Please let me know what you guys think....
|Family history, culture, environment influence - UCF essay
2 - okay here is a more revised version. take the liberty to change it, expand it, and organize it better....
Undergraduatejasonwjasonw - Aug 26, 2008
|Initial Assessment Essay on the "The Story of an Hour"
4 - Got it pulled together.. It is a little better any suggestions on what can improve or what I am...
Writing Feedbackjrobertson49jrobertson49 - Aug 25, 2008
|Global warming presents a genuine risk to our existence; INTRODUCTION
2 - Great job! One small change though: "After years of research scientists have finally come to the conclusion that...
Writing FeedbacknangyEF_Team5 - Aug 25, 2008
|Unique qualities - UCF essay; I am loyal, dependable, and hard-working
2 - Good job. Just a few mechanical errors, but I do like the ending much better. Keep up the nice...
UndergraduatesportzgrrrlEF_Team5 - Aug 25, 2008
|Essay on "Best companies to work for" - Struggling Marine!
2 - Good evening. OK; let's start with what your definition of "good" is. Benefit packages: i.e. health benefits, dental,...
Essaysmidas8412EF_Team5 - Aug 24, 2008
|no other tools than face-to-face talk can replace human needs to meet and share joys and sorrows
4 - Both of those are fine; they are still used frequently today. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackurgentEF_Team5 - Aug 24, 2008
|STAGE,Excite staff; UF admission - Experience, event, possible contributions, etc.
2 - Your first and second paragraphs are not very well connected. I am unsure if in the first paragraph you...
Undergraduateseniors09EF_Team5 - Aug 23, 2008
|'Healthcare Documentation Integrity' - essay for admission into an Art School
UndergraduateKWMKWM - Aug 22, 2008
|'Forget the presence and look at the future' - another FSU admissions essay
2 - Good job. Your essay is very confident and spirited. You explain clearly why this motto applies to you and...
UndergraduateRunyenEF_Team5 - Aug 21, 2008
|'Computer discovery' - essay for acceptance in Computer related field
NEW - [current date aligned to right] [my name aligned to left] [my address aligned to left] Title: How...
|Essay about The Fountainhead by Ayn Rand
4 - You are welcome. If you need further asssistance, please feel free to post again. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
EssaysdorkeeEF_Team5 - Aug 20, 2008
|'Invisible things' - Religion Argumentative Essay
NEW - prompt: R.D. Gold in his book Bondage of the Mind basically says that religious dogmas, and religion itself, is...
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|'Introducted to Jesus Christ' / 'Varsity soccer' - where you come from and your world
NEW - Can you review both of my essays? Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from ď for example,...
|Darfur, Sudan - people, history, identity essay
NEW - hey! im getting marked out of 60 10 for background info-family size, geo, assets, jobs Description of conflict -10marks...
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|LOOSING THE BEST FRIEND- Life obstacle!
Undergraduatebeebeebeebee - Aug 20, 2008
|Life of a death row inmate research, I have a thesis sentence
4 - I suggest you wait on the conclusion and the opening/thesis until after you've written the paper if possible. After...
Research PaperssheisabratEF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
|Essay for fulbright scholarship in computer science
2 - Great job! A few subject/verb confusions, but other than that you've got a pretty good draft. Your content is...
ScholarshipdjellelEF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
|"changing experiance" UF admission essay
UndergraduateDiiyahEF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
|Outer space explore vs. Basic needs essay
2 - You make some really good points in this essay. If you can find some research supporting how much the...
Writing FeedbackngngmaiphuongEF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
|'My popularity' - college experience, your contribution UF admission essay
5 - As I stated before, your focus should be on your thoughts and feelings after the scare. Remove as much...
Undergraduatedman0227EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
|How to avoid in writing in the passive tone
2 - Good morning. In regards to the passive tone, the biggest "key" to remember is, "Don't tell your readers...
Grammar, Usagesylock232EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
|pen names in MLA works cited pages
2 - Good morning. In this case, you should use the pen name. When citing, you should use exactly what...
Grammar, UsagesarekEF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
|'medicine and future hard work' - essay (with star wars), applying to pre-med
UndergraduatetorchampEF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
|'her husband, my father, has died' - UF - meaningful event
|Being in the middle of the spiral staircase. Essay on Education
5 - Sure :) Well, what about personal improvement? As one rises through the levels of education is it not...
Writing FeedbacklearningtowriteEF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
|essay on Juliets speech in Romeo and Juliet Modernized
2 - Make sure that everything in quotation marks is properly cited according to the specifics of your required citation style....
Writing Feedbacksylock232EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
|"Jennifer Lim" - College Application Essay
NEW - I was just starting fourth grade when I met Jennifer Lim. Then, I had just moved to the Philippines...