|A comparative analysis with the themes of race power and justice
2 - Good morning. Good evening. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific...
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|Still Part of the Team - I need my essay to be cut for Temple University!
Undergraduatepjoseph09EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|Family history + my qualities or unique traits - UCF Admission Essay
2 - Good morning. A few things: first, the list of characteristics is a bit ostentatious; shorten it up a...
UndergraduatenayrEF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|Abolish the death penalty!; Reasearch on DEATH PENALTY
4 - Good morning. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...
Research PapersbluewingEF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|"I'm mentally ready" - FSU ESSAY HELP
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|"The Voting Age" essay
Writing FeedbacktaiyakiEF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative)
8 - That's a good start. What kind of examples can you think of that illustrate these three items? Regards,...
Writing FeedbackReinhardtEF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|"I thought long and hard about where to spend 4 years" - UCF Essays
4 - You're very welcome, and thank you for the encouragement! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Undergraduatehockeyplyr1034EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|association between paternal age at birth...
Research PapersrivoltaleandroEF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|For UR, what makes you a good fit? Give suggetions for my work.
4 - I suggest that you definitely include the publication information (at least one source) and remove any "filler" from the...
Undergraduatejunma314EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|"Circle of Love" - Univ of Florida admission essay review on a meaningful event, experience ...
2 - Good evening. I only have one comment: "...enjoyed the day's festivities; for a brief moment, I was..."...
UndergraduatenayrEF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Writing an essay on a persuisive argument - where do I begin?!!
2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin with an outline. Write down all of the points you want to...
Essayscee89EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|"I've been a musician for eight years.." - FSU admission essay
6 - i decided to just delete the last part. "along with the help of my role models: my band director,...
Undergraduateliljay9083liljay9083 - Oct 11, 2008
|UCF: "How has family/culture influenced who you are?
NEW - Work in progress, just wrote this from scratch. I'm having some trouble with word choice though, and on how...
|"...this power exists" - FSU essay on three famous Latin words
2 - Great response to the prompt; a few mechanical errors, but overall a strong essay. Nice opening and conclusion; the...
UndergraduatefloridagirlEF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|"many different points of view" - UR promt 2
NEW - Rochester students represent many different points of view. Each student constructs an independent study and research plan. Describe what...
|The Jungle Sinclair - paper based on the book
4 - Ok thanks!...
Book Reportsjeseniainscjeseniainsc - Oct 10, 2008
|Starting an essay, define key features of mental health
2 - Good evening. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...
EssaysminabEF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|Upenn short question - "explain why"?
2 - In regards to the prompt, it seems like they want you to name a specific professor that you want...
UndergraduatewongxyEF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|An experience through which you have gained respect for you differencies.
2 - Good afternoon. The middle paragraph seems a bit too stiff for my liking; how about softening it? Something...
UndergraduateelthanoEF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|What led you to choose the area of academic interest you chose?
2 - Your content provides a good reply to the prompt, but your mechanics need some work. I suggest a refresher...
UndergraduateelthanoEF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|"Life can be full of many obstacle and surprises" - Admission essay
UndergraduateSammySammy - Oct 10, 2008
|Live a life that is pleasing to my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ, FSU essay
Undergraduatebeccaboo3290pilla2008 - Oct 10, 2008
|Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay
2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...
Writing FeedbackgodsendEEF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|FSU essay: "Vires", has been forefront in my life
2 - Just a general comment: perhaps refreshing yourself with the rules of comma usage could benefit you; you seem to...
UndergraduatebaileyEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|personal history - FSU to get accepted in college
UndergraduatelecokrEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|Describe a setback that you have faced (brother) - essay
7 - beccaboo3290's tips are excellent! Good job guys! The main thing about formality in academic writing is to stay...
UndergraduateelthanoEF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|Luncheon to honor the winners of the Boca Delray Music Society - UF
NEW - Any feedback is appreciated. I have a concern with my middle section. I'd like to make the middle...
|"Wings of Wax" - Emerson College Admissions Essay
NEW - We understand that the college application process often feels stressful, when it should be an opportunity for self-reflection. Stop...
|"... becoming Superman" - FSU Essay..last one I promise
NEW - And last but not least the FSU essay. Like before, all help most appreciated. Thank you! As a...