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how did tragics in hamlet and king lear changed their future?

2 - Hey, I think you are using the word tragic when you should be using the word tragedy. Tragic is...

Book Reportssum4141s - Jun 9, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 11, 2010
tips for replying for first round selection

2 - Google this: thank you letter example I think the best strategy is to be genuinely purposeful. There are...

Graduateanchu - Jun 9, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Short Essay on High School Scholarship Program

5 - That's funny... yeah, when you have big success with a brilliant online business, you'll have 50K to donate. ...

Writing Feedbacknorthernlight - Jun 9, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Obstacle + unique quality (dentist) - UCF Essay, give me any suggestions!

6 - Hi, This is an interesting field you are entering. I think you can have a great future by...

Undergraduatekicker20 - Dec 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Basics of research paper writing

8 - Well you probably already have seen adamssixsigma.com/Newsletters/TQM_six_sigma_differences_sim ilarities.htm Hey, I use questia and I found a lot of...

Grammar, Usagepushpraj3123 - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Comparison between Thousand Splendid Suns and The Book of Negroes

3 - Go deeper into the particular observation you are making. I think this thesis is too simple. Can you...

Book Reportskanav92 - Jun 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Treatment of Illegal Immagrants - U.S. versus Mexico

4 - Do you mean "lose the reader?"...

Writing FeedbackPaula6 - Jun 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Daisy (the great gatsby) vs Gertrude (hamlet) "frailty, thy name is woman"

3 - Hi there, I want to invite you to consider how someone might be frail or resilient, regardless of...

Book Reportslogo - Jun 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Kate Chopin "The Story of an Hour" - a "craft" question

2 - Yes, a critic helps people appreciate art and deeply understand it. Scholars have other ideas. For example, you...

Book Reportssaphiremom24 - Jun 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
BARRON'S TOEFL "Advances in transportation and communication"

2 - You need a comma here: acquired to human beings society all over the globe, and that... Capitalize Internet....

Writing FeedbackNohna - Jun 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
My essay is on drugs - start and conclusion

3 - Ha haha haha haha ha, I have never heard that before. You get the Funniest Title Award. ...

Essaysompoc - Jun 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
GRE: "All nations should help support the development of a global university"

2 - Here is another idea: In Today, a global university seems to be another Tower of Babel, because...

Writing Feedbackjadetang - Jun 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Growing up who was my childhood Hero (My Uncle)

6 - It definitely makes sense, and you have a nice way of expressing yourself. The transitions between paragraphs are nonexistent,...

Undergraduatejaneypooh - Jun 4, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
"An experience you have had that involves controversy" - Narrative Argument

3 - This is such a powerful sentence. Also, the notion of untouchables at the school is powerful. You are...

Writing FeedbackEcho1334 - Jun 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
ESSAY ON Canadian Domestic Policy

3 - Good advice, Azeri. The place to start is with the readings used in class as a "jumping off point."...

Essaysdeebaby - Jun 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
BARRON'S TOEFL IBT BOOK "learning a foreign language"

4 - Yep, at this point in your practice, Nohna, I think you should use sentences that are not too long...

Writing FeedbackNohna - Jun 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Government should not limit scientific studies and growth

4 - I appreciate your great suggestions! Thank you very much!...

Writing FeedbackLew chuang - Jun 7, 2010Lew chuang - Jun 10, 2010
King Lear major essay - Blindness

3 - Cordelia demonstrates blindness, maybe not by being blind to something but by showing other people's blindness in contrast against...

Book Reportsyonman - Jun 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 9, 2010
My Story So Far + Life's Surprise - Essay for transfer student

3 - I was constantly being mentored by older family members and friends of family. My choices were always pre-determined,...

UndergraduateDaimyo21 - Jun 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 9, 2010
Personal Statement for Physician Assistant (what motivates me)

6 - Paul this is a very interesting discussion you gave here. Thanks, we are lucky to have you participating....

Graduatekhan_kamila - May 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 9, 2010
"To Be Continued" - personal info considered as part of admission application

5 - The first paragraph was just kinda the attention grabber that set up what was to come, and I...

Undergraduateticktock - Jun 6, 2010ticktock - Jun 9, 2010
"The American Dream" - how to start this essay?

4 - maybe you can give a definition of American Dream in your own perspective at begin of your essay....

Essaysmroman - Jun 7, 2010jadetang - Jun 8, 2010
TOEFL essay -Monumental Gifts

7 - The word "plenty" is not the same as many, but the way you use it makes me think...

Writing Feedbackkovcastle - Jun 3, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 8, 2010
Term paper about Christ Figure in literature

3 - Above, I made some slight changes and added some parenthesis to help the clarity. I see that...

Writing FeedbackKingdom10 - Jun 6, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 8, 2010
I think there is too much violence in movies.

6 - Thanks for comments, Yonman. Regarding your question, I do not need to support the reason with a realible...

Writing FeedbackAzeri - Jun 6, 2010Azeri - Jun 8, 2010
Some students prefer to study alone - TOEFL Question

9 - I like your writing style. I like to study alone by the way because I can focus better! :)...

Writing FeedbackNesreen - Jun 2, 2010yonman - Jun 7, 2010
three battles significant in evoving canada as an independant country

6 - Thank you sooooooooooo much Kevin that was SOOOOOO much help im finished my conclusion now all thanks to you...

Writing Feedbackosma - Jun 5, 2010osma - Jun 7, 2010
My academic performance when I was a sophomore.(Not more than 500 words)

8 - Thank you, I need not to review my English books anymore but recharge my mobile phone and log in...

UndergraduateCharz - Jun 5, 2010Charz - Jun 7, 2010
Finding a new york state law about minors

2 - I am not good at this subject, but as a google around I get a sense that minors need...

Research Papersktlovley - Jun 6, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 7, 2010
Essay on Letter of Motivation for buiness school: the knowledge, confidence

2 - With five years of work experience in two if the world XXXXX industry's best companies -- YYYYYYYY and ZZZZZZZZ...

Graduatejavazen - Jun 6, 2010EF_Kevin - Jun 7, 2010
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