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2 - Greetings! While you have some good information about schizophrenia in your outline, it reads like you are writing...
EssaysdidoEF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
|Eng101 essay (personal essay); natural disater?
11 - Greetings! I've done some more editing for you: After seeing the baby, we were very excited. But...
EssaysnewworldEF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
|Tokugawa & sakoku - essay
2 - Greetings! A well-written and interesting essay! I have just a few editing tips: The raison d'ętre of...
Writing FeedbackFredParisFranceEF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
|Oral Report Based on Wilco Book Review
2 - Greetings! I think that's a very creative way to lead into the presentation of your book review! By...
Book ReportssilverystarsEF_Team2 - Oct 4, 2007
|Speech-language pathology - essay opinion needed
Graduateamandahpamandahp - Oct 2, 2007
|Book Review Project: "Wilco: Learning How To Die"
4 - Greetings! I think you have done a splendid job! I understand what you mean about writing about the...
Book ReportssilverystarsEF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
|The Otaku - Explaining with examples essay
5 - Greetings! I would guess that "cosplay" is short for "costume play"? If so, you could say: He regularly...
Writing FeedbacksamuraitomEF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
|COMPUTERS, the most intriguing and complicated things in the world
2 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job with your essay! I have just a few editing suggestions:...
UndergraduatehabtdemisEF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
|I NEED AN OPENING STATEMENT on essay: challenging fate
3 - Thank you Sarah. The idea that "our fate cannot be changed and what happens when we try to change...
EssaysSMontes10SMontes10 - Oct 1, 2007
|Impact Essay (significant experience, achievement, risk)
2 - Greetings! Annoying? No way! That's why we're here! Your excellent essay needs very little work; just a few...
ScholarshipbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
|Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams
NEW - Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams Sports: Fun to watch, exciting, and most of all competitive. These...
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|I like to see super heroes as a mock to society; Superhero Essay
2 - Greetings! You've given your response to the question an interesting twist--very good! There is little I would...
Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
|Chilean /Steady Grades; Personal life&Aspirations - Biography(SCHOLARSHIP)
2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Study my girl, or...
ScholarshipbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
|FSU App. essay: the best advice given; 'be the head and not the tail'
NEW - The topic is to basically explain the best advice given and why? Please read this and give me any...
|EMMA & HARRIET SMITH; AP LITERATURE- Essay on characterization
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! The only thing I might suggest is adding to your quotes...
Book ReportsWonderfulloserEF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
|Defining Classic (Extended Definition Essay)
4 - Greetings! I think you've done a masterful job of fine-tuning your essay! And you're quite right about "it's"...
Writing FeedbacksilverystarsEF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
|How to write a good advertising article?
2 - Greetings! With any website it's important to remember that people can't visit it if they can't find it!...
Grammar, UsageSuperplayerEF_Team2 - Sep 27, 2007
|help with graduate admission into Masters of Science and the Public
8 - Greetings! When you are working on making the sentences a little more manageable, keep in mind that it...
GraduateeplayaEF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
|Political value of surface and identity in a repressive society
2 - Greetings! My interpretation would be that "politics" or "political value" would mean, in this instance, the furtherance of...
EssaystntmayhemEF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
|Reed Essay (interest in a liberal arts and science education)
Writing FeedbackbizkitgirlzcEF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2007
|FSU ESSAY - "Pick your favourite and meaningful quote"
2 - Greetings! Your essay is excellent, and nearly perfect. I have only a couple of small suggestions: I...
Undergraduatecarsons2kEF_Team2 - Sep 24, 2007
|Have you ever done something to make others happy? Peer Pressure Paper
5 - Hmmm. I due until Thursday, so tomorrow I'm gonna take some time before class and ask one of the...
Writing Feedbackusanchezfeusanchezfe - Sep 24, 2007
|Thesis on How do love and forgiveness work together as a theme?
8 - OH MY GOSH!! I can't believe I didn't think of the word redemption!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! You really...
Essaystirano93tirano93 - Sep 23, 2007
|Consumer prices drop - Economy revisited ; expositive essay
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Essayssamuraitomsamuraitom - Sep 23, 2007
|A scary house - descriptive essay
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|english verb tense (simple past, present perfect, past perfect)
2 - Greetings! You've done a good job with this! You are right, some of them are very tricky and,...
Grammar, Usagecolla26EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
|Short Review - reasons for attending college
4 - Greetings! No, technically, that is not a run-on sentence. A run-on sentence is one which has two independent...
EssaysvolzurgEF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
|How my favorite Hobby/Pastime refelcts my personality
2 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job of demonstrating the characteristics you listed! The only suggestions I...
Writing FeedbackbdoanEF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
|A Rose for Emily : Why Did Miss Emily Kill Homer?
2 - Greetings! Faulkner's story brings up a lot of intriguing questions. In contemplating why Miss Emily may have killed...
Essaysblackscorpion15EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
|My review of the great gatsby
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