|The Great Gatsby-- Essay on occasions and events in the novel
Book ReportsWonderfulloserjeanelle - Sep 20, 2007
|15 minutes of fame; NYU COMMON APP
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|ME & My BROTHER / Human behavior psychology -Common App
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UndergraduatemodiEF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
|References or journals for a pys research class
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Grammar, UsagelindbrielEF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
|Hole - narrative essay(incident that happened and changed my mind)
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UndergraduatesamuraitomEF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
|U.S. economy - expository essay
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|Nora becomes prepared to fullfil Pleny's request
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|Blank verse - "The Ball Poem" by John Berryman Help
Poetrytsj456tsj456 - Sep 17, 2007
|Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification
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|My Antonia-essay topic help
Essaystsj456EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
|Is imagination more important than knowledge - SAT essay
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|Position Paper: Does it need to have only two sides?
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EssaysenglinquirerEF_Team2 - Sep 14, 2007
|Memory is an attachment to our physical selves; Reincarnation / Process of memory
4 - Greetings, Rajiv! Thank you for the clarification! I do have a question regarding word choice, though. In this...
Writing FeedbackRajivEF_Team2 - Sep 13, 2007
|Need help on topic novel "Im not scared" by Niccolo Ammaniti
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Book ReportsstudmasterEF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
|End of Suffering -- Essay
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EssaysRajivEF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
|'Breeze to find a job after graduation' - FSU admission
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Research PapersousmanEF_Team2 - Sep 10, 2007
|I want to be able to get as much help as possible in my English class.
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|Help with Question about Economic History (Australian)
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EssaysphilipZ1985EF_Team2 - Sep 9, 2007
|Preparing for TOEFL IBT test - need advice on how to write better
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EssaysphuongleEF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
|The organizational behavior in the Army - help with thesis statement
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|World of writings; NYU - creative work that has influenced me
UndergraduatelunaseaEF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
|Teenage violence in schools
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|"Computer or book"? Computer
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Writing FeedbackangeltetraEF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
|A Soft Complaint (A Formal Argumentative/Persuasive Essay, Incomplete)
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Book ReportssilverystarsEF_Team2 - Sep 4, 2007
|how can I analyze articles better?
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Research Paperscolla26EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
|Reading response to "Talking Up Close"
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Writing Feedbackcolla26EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
|'FFA and FLA Leadership Adventures' - U of Florida admissions
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Undergraduatelinz24708EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
|In Response To "Why Don't We Complain?"
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Writing FeedbacksilverystarsEF_Team2 - Sep 1, 2007
|Essay on how well reasoned was an argument - scale of 0-5
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