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Income gap is necessary to sustain a society to run dynamically; sports professionals earn big money

4 - Mustafa, don't you think it's important to help people in different ways depending on their level of skill with...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - May 27, 2010EF_Kevin - May 30, 2010
Multinational student body / national diversification - personal statement

5 - "Another reason to seek admission is the university's multinational student body. That is very important to me, because I...

Undergraduatekleek - May 22, 2010EF_Kevin - May 30, 2010
How to write an appeal for Science course NUS?

5 - The important thing to do is follow their instructions. If they provide guidelines for writing the appeal, follow them....

Undergraduatealdokevin - May 27, 2010EF_Kevin - May 30, 2010
IELTS ESSAY : PREPARED FOOD

3 - This is great, thanks for making this an excellent thread. I'll add some ideas: Nowadays, more and more...

Writing Feedbacksheldon - May 27, 2010EF_Kevin - May 30, 2010
Why We Crave Horror Movies

3 - It is great that you do not include lots of unhelpful words and phrases, like some writers do. Yet,...

Writing Feedbackreeseinskool - May 27, 2010EF_Kevin - May 30, 2010
Appeal Essay for Science Course

5 - Since u explained about chemistry in past tense,i guess the following should also b in past tense. This...

Undergraduatebumbledebee - May 26, 2010jensy - May 30, 2010
CAPE poetry essay, experiences of trauma in the Caribbean

3 - Thanks, i appreciate it. I did not even realise that i had made so many mistakes. Also, i am...

Writing Feedbackhustlerprince - May 27, 2010hustlerprince - May 30, 2010
TOEFL: What I would change in my hometown if I could

5 - thx~everyone...

Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - May 27, 2010kevinhsin1124 - May 30, 2010
Students should be required to attend classes; may need explanations of teachers

5 - the teachers can find out what the students still do not understand or misunderstand and then explain ... ...

Writing Feedbackphuocqui - May 24, 2010sheldon - May 29, 2010
"Being beautiful is more important than being intelligent"

6 - I personal think that your essay need 4 parts: - introduce both view - write the point you think...

Essayslilywah - May 23, 2010mabu9669 - May 29, 2010
im writting a oral presentation about myself!

7 - Im the elder sister and I had a younger sister I think you're elder sister is enough or My...

SpeechesElryn - May 19, 2010mabu9669 - May 29, 2010
Good Books for Personal Essay Writing?

5 - You are surely going about this the wrong way. A book cannot bestow you with a large vocabulary in...

Essaysstainluss - May 23, 2010Mustafa1991 - May 29, 2010
Project on sex trafficking - starting the first Line of an essay

6 - I think a direct approach is best for less advanced writers. Consider the upside to a spectacular opening sentence;...

Research Paperskaren_g - May 27, 2010Mustafa1991 - May 29, 2010
Essay on my annual evaluation on "My favourite book"

4 - Great corrections! I also want to say that you should trim away the extra stuff: Favorite books. My favorite...

Essaysjane_ - May 27, 2010EF_Kevin - May 29, 2010
Education: Essay regarding "Issue of personal importance to you"

2 - Here is a run on sentence: My fear of studies grew with each passing day; I distinctly remember the...

Undergraduatehellstrider - May 27, 2010EF_Kevin - May 28, 2010
Revolutions of Heavenly Spheres - CONTRARY THESIS

3 - Thank You Kevin that is really really helpful...

Research Paperssandrute - May 26, 2010sandrute - May 28, 2010
Academic and career goal description for MS in comp science (correct or suggest)

3 - Academic goals and Career aspiration: ------------------------------------- - Learn, Teach, Influence technically, Lead and make difference. - Further academic learning...

Graduatediso81 - May 27, 2010becnil - May 28, 2010
Classification of TV programs

6 - thank u all for your advices. They are really helpful for me :)...

Essaysanubis - May 26, 2010anubis - May 28, 2010
Industrial Revolution: Business and Politics in the New Urban Order.

3 - Wow, Thanks Kevin.... I love the way you explained it....I got it now... Thanks again...

Essaysjoalex7 - May 26, 2010joalex7 - May 27, 2010
SOP for PhD. in printing or specifically printed electronics - Feedback/Comments

4 - Nice!! That is good news for all of us essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/...

Graduateetausif - May 25, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
TOEFL: Improve Roads or Public Transports

3 - I'm so glad Azeri is here helping people. Thanks!! Many people think that governments should spend money on...

Writing Feedbackhatung94 - May 26, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
Online Education Myths, peer review assignment

4 - Yep, maybe it'll be me, or maybe it'll be someone else, but you can get help here! :-)...

Writing FeedbackHigherEducation - May 25, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
An hour and the storm by kate chopin - Good thesis? Common traits.

6 - Ha ha, well you only spent enough time to write a single sentence when you started this thread. Teachers...

Book Reportssuccesful_2010 - Mar 15, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
scholarship essay:explanation of financial need and desire to become

3 - Yes, that is some great advice from Hellstrider :-) I hope you will feel confident as you write some...

ScholarshipSummerc91 - May 26, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
"Being immersed in a different culture" - Essay for Admission to UF

4 - Many kids have to move from state to state, school to school, or even just to a new neighborhood,...

UndergraduateSalib - May 26, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
International Affairs Department, Correct My Reference Letter..

6 - Yes, I was looking at the other one, too, and it seems okay. I was trying to say, though,...

LettersNitaNA - May 25, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
I need help with my essay. I am trying to apply for the Art Institute of NY

3 - I wonder if college can even keep up with the changes in technology. You can probably learn even...

UndergraduateKca171 - May 26, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
"International MSc in Entrepreneurship Education & Training" application letter

7 - It's confusing in the beginning to list these various things. I suggest settling the reader's attention on a single...

GraduateZeinab1383 - May 24, 2010EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
Has the Chinese government changed after the Tiananmen Square Massacre?

2 - Hello, I think you need to proofread your essay better. There are quite a few grammatical errors, some...

Writing Feedbackken349137 - May 26, 2010puroodsy - May 27, 2010
SAT Essay: Are our decisions always limited by the rules of society?

3 - Thanks for all the comments! 'Chimerical' is a word I picked up from the SAT word list. It...

Writing Feedbackpuroodsy - May 25, 2010puroodsy - May 27, 2010
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