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"service before self" Serving in the Air Force prepared me to succeed.

3 - One day, I talked to an Air Force recruiter, and from there on out I knew I wanted to...

Undergraduatehockeydog2 - Apr 1, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2010
Victorian era, Baker Street (Sherlock Holmes adventures)

4 - That is some great advice!! When I do something like this, I look at a picture (try...

Book Reportsbenscookies - Apr 1, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2010
reason i want to study MBBS in china- regarding undergraduate admission

3 - thank you kevin. :) :)...

Undergraduaterubika - Mar 31, 2010rubika - Apr 2, 2010
Teaching of music, art, and drama are critical in revealing hidden abilities of children

3 - Thanks for your comments and for your help. I appreciate it....

Writing FeedbackAzeri - Mar 27, 2010Azeri - Apr 2, 2010
Tisch Film Portfolio: Dramatic Essay

3 - Hey Kevin! Thank you so much! Those are all great corrections. I sent it in earlier today and now...

Undergraduategber371 - Mar 30, 2010gber371 - Apr 1, 2010
Individual presentation for Master of Science in Software Engineering

3 - Thanks a lot Susan for your help. I will apply your adjustments. It was really helpful. Do you...

Graduatesim0s - Mar 31, 2010sim0s - Apr 1, 2010
Relationship with co-workers / personal values strain - essay for Evening MBA UW

2 - Your essay is coming along fine, though I did find a few things; My high levels of expectations...

Graduatevashwanth - Mar 31, 2010EF_Susan - Apr 1, 2010
A Look at Sodium and its Effects on Hypertension

2 - I would say so! I think this sentence would be better if you said: Sodium has become is...

Research Papersjen1234 - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
European Women History - Thesis needed

2 - The instructions your teacher gave are excellent. Tell her/him that Kevin at EssayForum is impressed by the high quality...

Essayshissunshine - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Obesity is a big problem in most of the countries

3 - Is that right?? I didn't know about that! that is quite impressive. I think it is such a...

Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"a successful business background" -SOP for Masters in Management programme

2 - ...spending my leisure hours in helping my uncles with handling accounts, planning ways to enhance business, designing promotional campaigns...

Graduateyogitagarodia - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
IELTS essay: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.

4 - As a result the changes, people's eating habits have also changed significantly over few decades. Use "and" before...

Writing Feedbackindrukas - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
toefl writing paper ---why people attend college

2 - If you have a college education you will make more money, which in turn will enable you to have...

Writing Feedbackcietzsche - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
GRE issue41---nonmainstream areas of inquiry VS mainstream science

2 - Admittedly, these non-mainstream areas, which belong to the ideology sphere, can... In the first place, because these pursuits...

Writing FeedbackJulia zeng - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"try to live within your means" - my Cause and Effect Essay

4 - You are welcome!! Well, you can practice by helping around here sometimes essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/ we need people with life experience...

Writing Feedbackhtrrkt - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Write about your life ten years from now (100 words)

2 - --- tell them that study and work are both ongoing. I myself sometimes wonder... Furthermore, I...

Writing Feedbackoldbabie - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Edit essay - better life today vs. in nineteenth century - feedback

3 - Living in the contemporary world has many more advantages than living in the nineteenth century. --- Yeah, until some...

Writing Feedbacklovinglife77 - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
university dormitories or apartments?

2 - Because student residences are safe, propitious from financial standpoint, and collective student life.--- this sentence is incomplete. It needs...

Writing Feedbacksamir614 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Short Opinion Essay on Julio Cortazars "Night Face Up"-Feedback

2 - In that first paragraph, you tell us many things about the story, but you don't clearly establish a theme...

Writing FeedbackBilal815 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Thesis about Dark imagery in Romeo & Juliet - feedback

2 - Plural: Light and dark, two kinds of imagery----> Light and dark imagery permeate everyday life.-- correct In Shakespeare's Romeo...

Book Reportsfk24 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Natural Hazards conference attendance scholarship - looking for clarity

2 - It is not so bad to say you are motivated by your career ambition. However, you can simply...

Scholarshiporchid227 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
response to Stephen Kings "Why We Crave Horror Movies"

2 - Capitalization: Stephen King is right, we ... Also, this is a run on sentence called a "comma splice."...

Book Reportscrazygirl101 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
I Am (poem) - complete the blanks

2 - Those are some nice ideas. I hope you will use your own ideas, though! The way to get ideas...

PoetryluvLifeB4itzGon - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
An analysis of European colonization through Orwell and Osterhammel

5 - Yes, this is the sort of thing that gets you an A. Nice job... I love that...

Research PapersRod_Farva - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"my first swimming lesson" - answer about extracurricular activity

6 - ...and maybe getting back on the competition field. into the water, where the competition happens. --- ah, I don't...

Undergraduatewein350 - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Proportions of males and females - practising to write essays on interpretation of charts

3 - The graph compares the proportions of males and females in the highest qualification achieved for working age of population...

Writing FeedbackCharlesL - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
essay for graduate admission in MPH and why it fits as a career choice

4 - Awesome... you are great. In response to this, I started out to study medicine in the university, but...

Graduatewachu - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"the relationship between China and Italy" -personal statement for a university

3 - Short-tempered, sometimes amiable, but often strict with me, my mother has been one of the greatest positive influences in...

Undergraduateyeseniyaus - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
The Big Picture: Community Service essay

5 - Thanks Kevin! These are good tips, I've spruced the essay up a little and turned it in. Thanks again!...

ScholarshipTimMill - Mar 28, 2010TimMill - Apr 1, 2010
Personal statement -- Building and Engineering

2 - I'm sorry no one reviewed it again before the deadline. It is very impressive, though! I see no major...

Graduatexiayiyue - Mar 27, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
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