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"a successful business background" -SOP for Masters in Management programme

2 - ...spending my leisure hours in helping my uncles with handling accounts, planning ways to enhance business, designing promotional campaigns...

Graduateyogitagarodia - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
IELTS essay: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.

4 - As a result the changes, people's eating habits have also changed significantly over few decades. Use "and" before...

Writing Feedbackindrukas - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
toefl writing paper ---why people attend college

2 - If you have a college education you will make more money, which in turn will enable you to have...

Writing Feedbackcietzsche - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
GRE issue41---nonmainstream areas of inquiry VS mainstream science

2 - Admittedly, these non-mainstream areas, which belong to the ideology sphere, can... In the first place, because these pursuits...

Writing FeedbackJulia zeng - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"try to live within your means" - my Cause and Effect Essay

4 - You are welcome!! Well, you can practice by helping around here sometimes essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/ we need people with life experience...

Writing Feedbackhtrrkt - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Write about your life ten years from now (100 words)

2 - --- tell them that study and work are both ongoing. I myself sometimes wonder... Furthermore, I...

Writing Feedbackoldbabie - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Edit essay - better life today vs. in nineteenth century - feedback

3 - Living in the contemporary world has many more advantages than living in the nineteenth century. --- Yeah, until some...

Writing Feedbacklovinglife77 - Mar 31, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
university dormitories or apartments?

2 - Because student residences are safe, propitious from financial standpoint, and collective student life.--- this sentence is incomplete. It needs...

Writing Feedbacksamir614 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Short Opinion Essay on Julio Cortazars "Night Face Up"-Feedback

2 - In that first paragraph, you tell us many things about the story, but you don't clearly establish a theme...

Writing FeedbackBilal815 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Thesis about Dark imagery in Romeo & Juliet - feedback

2 - Plural: Light and dark, two kinds of imagery----> Light and dark imagery permeate everyday life.-- correct In Shakespeare's Romeo...

Book Reportsfk24 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Natural Hazards conference attendance scholarship - looking for clarity

2 - It is not so bad to say you are motivated by your career ambition. However, you can simply...

Scholarshiporchid227 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
response to Stephen Kings "Why We Crave Horror Movies"

2 - Capitalization: Stephen King is right, we ... Also, this is a run on sentence called a "comma splice."...

Book Reportscrazygirl101 - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
I Am (poem) - complete the blanks

2 - Those are some nice ideas. I hope you will use your own ideas, though! The way to get ideas...

PoetryluvLifeB4itzGon - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
An analysis of European colonization through Orwell and Osterhammel

5 - Yes, this is the sort of thing that gets you an A. Nice job... I love that...

Research PapersRod_Farva - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"my first swimming lesson" - answer about extracurricular activity

6 - ...and maybe getting back on the competition field. into the water, where the competition happens. --- ah, I don't...

Undergraduatewein350 - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
Proportions of males and females - practising to write essays on interpretation of charts

3 - The graph compares the proportions of males and females in the highest qualification achieved for working age of population...

Writing FeedbackCharlesL - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
essay for graduate admission in MPH and why it fits as a career choice

4 - Awesome... you are great. In response to this, I started out to study medicine in the university, but...

Graduatewachu - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
"the relationship between China and Italy" -personal statement for a university

3 - Short-tempered, sometimes amiable, but often strict with me, my mother has been one of the greatest positive influences in...

Undergraduateyeseniyaus - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
The Big Picture: Community Service essay

5 - Thanks Kevin! These are good tips, I've spruced the essay up a little and turned it in. Thanks again!...

ScholarshipTimMill - Mar 28, 2010TimMill - Apr 1, 2010
Personal statement -- Building and Engineering

2 - I'm sorry no one reviewed it again before the deadline. It is very impressive, though! I see no major...

Graduatexiayiyue - Mar 27, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
Transitions in a human life

3 - There are many transitions in the life of human. The stage of maturity is often to be respected the...

Writing Feedbackautumnwave - Mar 30, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
Why animal experimentation is not a acceptable practice (essay ideas)

6 - Sorry to Kevin and meisJon for using the word 'duped'. i realise that most people see this as a...

Essaysatu - Mar 26, 2010noratmedicinefo - Mar 31, 2010
Research Application Summary: my Life, Over Flowing with Curiosity

2 - One word: overflowing Overflowing with Curiosity I was the only one who had the courage to break that...

Undergraduatemrgzg1 - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
Thoughts on the start and revising the use of "I" (the sonography field)

2 - What if you were only allowed to use one sentence and you had to convince a friend of the...

Undergraduategrammarchic - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
"Visiting new countries" - introduction for admission essay

3 - Matthew's corrections look very good. Also, I hope you will challenge yourself to express a concept that is not...

Undergraduaterach917 - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
"finding advanced technologies that work on safe energy"-Statement of Objectives

4 - I think you did do a good job attending to each of those. It helpful if you can find...

ScholarshipDana123 - Mar 29, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
Children's Literature (how to avoid stereotyping)

5 - That is a great point! How can we teach anything about, for example, Japanese culture, without making ridiculous...

Essaysl4cc03 - Mar 16, 2010EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
"Eco Friendly India". TOEFL essay.

3 - thank you for the feed back....

Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 18, 2010megha - Mar 31, 2010
"fascination of being an engineer" - SOP for corrections

3 - Thnq sir/mam...

Graduatekats_rak - Mar 17, 2010kats_rak - Mar 31, 2010
Bachelor of Biology/Psychology -G.Washington University Transfer Admission Essay

5 - [b]Ok sorry for the late reply. I have been so busy with school and getting this essay done. Anyways,...

Undergraduateasmac89 - Mar 29, 2010asmac89 - Mar 31, 2010
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