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Help me decide which essay to use for the common application...

8 - i would choose the 2nd topic. I think it's more memorable by introducing an outlook I've never considered before...

Undergraduateukierunner - Nov 10, 2009reina92 - Nov 29, 2009
"when I first picked up a racket and a tennis ball" - UC prompt #2

2 - I was astonished at the words that popped out of his mouth and told him that I was sorry...

Undergraduatedonkey101 - Nov 29, 2009zling - Nov 29, 2009
GW honors essay - Is it too business like?

2 - try to make this a more personal essay. what do you have to offer? I don't...

Undergraduatessuraj - Nov 29, 2009meisj0n - Nov 29, 2009
common app. essay. "why & how my friends influence me?"

2 - I'm standing on the cliff, so close to the edge that any gust of wind can knock me off....

Undergraduatesarahhh - Nov 29, 2009jen50192 - Nov 29, 2009
USC ESSAY. #Reflect on an accomplishment you achieved in an unlikely way.

2 - My extreme hunger for electronics led me to never give up and explore new ways to accomplish the things...

UndergraduateMARIOFOREVER - Nov 29, 2009mcsingson - Nov 29, 2009
how i see the world: from blond Barbie hair to tamales. (:

3 - is this.. better? Kinda? No? heh.. oh and I found it a bit irrelevant to state...

Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Nov 29, 2009pcvrz34g - Nov 29, 2009
traveling the world is educational. it has changed me. uc prompt 1.

2 - great story! here's some sentences I fixed for you if you don't mind: The city of Paris and...

Writing Feedbackprincess01 - Nov 29, 2009ashtene - Nov 29, 2009
'Excuse me, is your mom home?' - common app essay~

7 - No, this essay is PERFECT for admissions, it's not only written in an unique way, it also gives a...

Undergraduatelittleman91 - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 29, 2009
Stanford Essay #3: Why Stanford is the Right Place For You?

9 - I really like your first sentence. That's good because you don't want the admissions person to start off with...

Undergraduateluu123 - Nov 29, 2009deanne - Nov 29, 2009
UC Prompt 2: Small town living, and how it shaped me

2 - Good start so far, for the first sentence there should be a comma instead of a period in between...

UndergraduatePscholler - Nov 29, 2009ashtene - Nov 29, 2009
OSU undergrad essay -- Why are you considering OSU

3 - I liked the personal approach you took in explaining your personality and how OSU allows you to express it...

Undergraduatekmadhuri19 - Nov 21, 2009ssuraj - Nov 29, 2009
For as long as I can remember, I have been a writer; Pratt Institute

6 - Well, great work! You have helped me to improve my knowledge about this field. Thank you so much for...

UndergraduateSkittleRose - Nov 28, 2009jezzicaz789 - Nov 29, 2009
UC #2... but it's not just one thing!

5 - Work on tying your paragraphs and subjects together with some kind of common denominator....

Undergraduateootlink - Nov 29, 2009Pscholler - Nov 29, 2009
Common App Essay -- High School Policy Debate

2 - While I was a kid don't say "kid"! not in your college app essay! say child. it's way less...

Undergraduatepafablach - Nov 29, 2009Deva17 - Nov 29, 2009
Stanford Essay #2: Roommate Essay

6 - *really wants to do a stanford application himself* I think your whole idea is wonderful! I can't really...

Undergraduateluu123 - Nov 29, 2009ootlink - Nov 29, 2009
"My Mother" :Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you.

8 - Thank you very very very much! I am going to revise it now!...

Undergraduateskw910824 - Nov 27, 2009skw910824 - Nov 29, 2009
Two month adventure to Naranamoozhy, Significant Experience Essay

3 - sorry that was a typo but thanks...

Undergraduatexballerina - Nov 29, 2009xballerina - Nov 29, 2009
UC Prompt 1: Life as a Puppet

3 - Thus, they had always criticized the actions I took in order to protect me from following the wrong influences....

Undergraduatemurasakidevil - Nov 29, 2009look416 - Nov 29, 2009
What are the three things you want the Bucknell faculty to know?

2 - really liked all three. make sure you read through and make sure you add your own personal touch rather...

Undergraduatedark horse - Nov 13, 2009tjbeyer6 - Nov 29, 2009
my determination will help me strive in BU - common application supplement essay

4 - Thankyou sooo much!!!! Yea it would be awesome to meet both of you there...good luck with your apps!!!! oh...

Undergraduateplopez - Nov 29, 2009plopez - Nov 29, 2009
UC 1: family was my influence

6 - ah, I was attempting to be humorous with the junk food part thanks very much :)...

Undergraduatezling - Nov 29, 2009zling - Nov 29, 2009
My contribution to the scientific community. UC prompt #1

2 - - and what you have gained from your involvement. * I feel your essay, while adequately answering the...

Undergraduateisaiahkupo - Nov 29, 2009citadel01 - Nov 29, 2009
"Raising children is like being pecked to death by a chicken" -UC Prompt 2

9 - yeah but how is that related to the assignment???: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or...

Undergraduatebloopyxd - Nov 29, 2009Deva17 - Nov 29, 2009
the Key Club Office - Common App Activities Essay

2 - This is fine except for two parts: - a bunch of high school students can be superheroes in...

Undergraduatemonochachi - Nov 29, 2009Deva17 - Nov 29, 2009
"How i could stand up once again to pursue my dream" - UC Prompt

3 - thanks so much for ur help...

Undergraduatepremis - Nov 29, 2009premis - Nov 29, 2009
UC Prompt 1 Transfer: Film Studies

4 - Nice work with incorporating the things you've learned while interning. Now it clearly answers the prompt and keeps things...

UndergraduatePscholler - Nov 29, 2009csicasiano - Nov 29, 2009
"every word of the Pokémon theme song" - my first admissions essay! prompt #1

5 - I like this idea alot, its very unique, and in my opinion will stand out alot. Great job,...

Undergraduatechikibayb02 - Nov 29, 2009Aglod516 - Nov 29, 2009
"My Family" - USC: WHAT MATTERS TO ME AND WHY

6 - i want to create a new post! this ones too messy but here's the almost final draft if anyone...

Undergraduategksquf45 - Nov 28, 2009gksquf45 - Nov 29, 2009
UT austin TOPIC B essay- issue of importance to me- business ethic

3 - Maybe it is better in the present tense: As I witness this obnoxious TV commercial, advertising a Hummer and...

Undergraduateicandoit - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2009
I was waiting for an epiphany. It hasn't come. Any advice on choosing a topic?

2 - I did the same thing as you, I just sort of drifted around for a few months before the...

Undergraduatejanedoe - Nov 29, 2009nogasa - Nov 29, 2009
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