|"strong morals are necessary in today's society" - FSU Admission Essay
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|Naturalism in all of its naked horror - essay
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|'multifaceted culture' - Rutgers Undergraduate Admission; a vibrant community
7 - By "showing" you use adjectives, metaphors, and similies frequently but not too frequently in your writing. By being concise,...
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|Speed essay - free interpretation
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|Orlando's beauty/internship and employment opportunities; WHY CHOOSE UCF?
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|"Next up, from New Jersey" - do you think I've answered the question?
2 - Good evening. Grammatically and mechanically the essay is clean. If the word count allows, I suggest adding a...
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|'pelagic domain' / 'white uniform' / 'Russian math' - 3 UC Essays - Comment
2 - Good evening. In regards to the first essay, I believe your text answers the prompt effectively. You use...
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|the gregarious young man to be - admission essay
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|Accomplishment essay (skiing Tiger the most difficult slope @ Boston Mills)
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|FSU essay---desire to major in pre-law. suggestions for improvement?
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|Don't change our teacher - keep him until the end of the course 059.
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|Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice
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|"the signs of Lepromatous Leprosy" - phd sop
3 - Good evening. OK, let's see: "There it was...the telltale sign on her hand. [...] The incident started...
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|Fear of Change - The Lottery Essay
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|Education and my parents - Ucf admissions essay
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|"traditions which I can relate to as a student" - fsu essay
2 - I'm not really sure if your essay answers the prompt. You define tradition very nicely and illustrate examples of...
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|Obstacle, family history, uniqueness - UCF essay
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|AODAI - MY NATIONAL COSTUME - description paragraph
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|'Unexciting homework' - Common Application Activity Essay
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|"To An Athelete Dying Young" - poem analysis
7 - You've got a good idea for your introduction here. I think you can shorten it up by stating that...
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|Essay for scholarship - Master of Architecture in Deakin University in Australia
6 - I have one more question. I need some kind of heading. What do you think about: "My motivation...
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|Essay about the effects of participation in a sport?
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|Debate Essay: Human Cloning Research
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|"This is the worst economy I've ever seen." - Personal Essay
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|FOGANA, Indian cultural dance competition - common app activities essay
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|Diego Maradona. When people succeed, it is because of hard work.
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|Health promotion - Article Summary
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|Essay about the cause of me choosing my career path
2 - Good afternoon. The prompt asks for the causes of your choice. Is it just the thought of making...
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|'Suicide / LA Diaries' - Essay On A Time In My Life I Felt Desperate
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