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"Why people love watching action movies" Formal Essay

3 - "Action movies are full filling to many movie watchers because it supplies audiences with electrifying excitement, presents us a...

Writing FeedbackYojimbo_bobobo - Nov 10, 2009car3n - Nov 15, 2009
"Judge people by their character" - FSU Essay Rough Draft - Mores

5 - "Judge people by their character, not by how they look,their looks. " "I succeeded in making it and...

Undergraduatethndthighs - Nov 14, 2009glorfs - Nov 15, 2009
A Different Spin on The Diversity Essay

8 - Dr. Suess also said: Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is toing to get better....

Undergraduatechaotic_kiddo - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Not a Love Story - UT Person of Influence

6 - "but I lacked the confidence to do so because I had no idea how to dance like everyone else...

Undergraduatepatorooni - Nov 12, 2009glorfs - Nov 15, 2009
"I flourish in large classes" - Rutgers admissions essay so far..

4 - ...lifetime have enabled me to ascertain a plethora of morals... Wow, lots of big words... be careful not...

Undergraduateairrudra - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Common App Main Essay- "Dancing Through The Days"

4 - Back in the dorms, my roommate Melissa and I professed our excitement for the next day, when we...

Undergraduateutooley - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Water is the most common element for ordinary people; A paragraph about water

4 - thanks for helping me!...

Writing Feedbackapi - Nov 13, 2009api - Nov 15, 2009
Wisc Prompts - #1 Personal Experience, #2 Why Economics?

3 - Hey thanks. I think you just pointed out a huge mistake of mine. (make an introduction without getting into...

Undergraduatemin12 - Nov 14, 2009min12 - Nov 15, 2009
IELTS Writing "agree and disagree"

12 - o i went thr the site but its only to translate it to another language..not 1 that i was...

Essayspuspa - Oct 28, 2009puspa - Nov 15, 2009
TOEFL:External appearances can provide important clues to a person

6 - I am a chinese student who will take toefl test. My essay's structure is similiar with yours. I think...

Writing Feedbacklyqinyi - Nov 2, 2009tiantianwenzi - Nov 15, 2009
Cloudhouse - another essay for Common app Topic of my choice

5 - well, haha, I only hope I will appeal all of them, doubt if I have any bad schools, muahahahaa,...

Undergraduatehanhdung - Nov 11, 2009hanhdung - Nov 15, 2009
"the challenges of life plus my condition" - my pizazz on college apps

6 - thank you for your input...

Undergraduateplaytm300 - Nov 9, 2009playtm300 - Nov 14, 2009
CC supplement question. why do you wish to attend?

3 - I think the idea of splitting the reasons into different categories is a good idea. But it seems to...

Undergraduatezeem - Nov 13, 2009jindu85 - Nov 14, 2009
Rutgers Essay Topic: First two paragraphs

4 - Here's how i'd change it up. It's only small changes. over all i think your short essay is very...

Undergraduateipwnu4free - Nov 14, 2009Jd87rh - Nov 14, 2009
Tulane personal statement - swimming

2 - allowed me to take part in... It was not surprising, t hen, that my coach... Wow, you...

Undergraduateicecreamcat - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Intellectual, athletic, cultural, social interests apart from medicine

6 - Well, the first paragraph is solid. It begins with a clear assertion, you explain it, and then you reflect...

Undergraduateindianajones - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Opinions on Narrative Essay (finance). Does my paper answer the prompt?

10 - I'll close the thread right now. You can see the TOS for explanations of everything. Thanks!!!...

GraduateFredMax - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
The primary reason that I am applying to Northwestern University is its firm academic program.

5 - Thanks, Jansen, as always your contribution here is inspiring to me. I can tell you spend more time than...

Undergraduatevip747 - Nov 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Experience That Helpmed Me Learn What Was Important - CommonApp Emotional Essay

4 - Beautiful. I think you write better than you think you do. All of her memories have now vanished...

UndergraduateAwesomeness - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
"Go to bed" - UC transfer essay prompt 1

4 - How does the anecdote in the beginning tie into you choosing your major? It s a bit unclear, try...

Undergraduatenatsuken - Nov 13, 2009guffaa88 - Nov 14, 2009
A Person With Significant Influence on You--Common App Personal Statement

4 - You an eliminate some of the times you wrote the words "Growing up." I think you should eliminate...

Undergraduatecaisson22 - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Contribution Essay (Rice's academic life)

3 - It was late on a school night, and even though the day had been tough, I could do nothing...

Undergraduatesv6554 - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
"the Spanish classes" - Law School Admission Essay, BC BU NorthEastern etc.

4 - Yes, it is great that you are practicing too write in a way that soothes the reader with a...

Graduatesayruss11 - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
'Enough Is As Good As A Feast' - Common App Essay-An Important Person, a student of mine

6 - Yes, always make the final draft shorter than the first draft. Less is more. Find ways to cut out...

UndergraduateAida_six - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Need to strengthen my SOP for bio PhD program

2 - Prevent is a better word here: would prevent me from doing well in America, Hearing about their efforts...

Graduatetinkywinky - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
TOEFL essay What are some important qualities of a good supervisor

2 - What does this mean? ----> good perception on the man. Do you mean to say this instead? ---->...

Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Art of mind; Nine types of intelligences

4 - Ha ha! You did so well! I like the beginning...where you found out you were not challenged after all....

Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
double or single-spaced & attach my resume? - Application Questions...

9 - That is great, I'm glad it worked out that way. College is a time for transformation, so it is...

UndergraduateKelsey1704 - Nov 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
The Graduation Day... (the best day of my life)

7 - Oh, I see. Well, that works well for it......

Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
"Something is wrong," I told myself; U Pitt's , experience

5 - It is great, actually. The reason it seems like you stray off topic is because you did not establish...

Undergraduatetan1800 - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
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