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Should Corruption be accepted in a certain stage of development?

3 - what is corruption why corruption happens how corruption affects what are the effects why some people think that ......

Essaysbondoohoi_us - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, to reduce the crime rate

2 - You wrote: the state still as to... Some of them who had been dependent on one hard drug...

Writing Feedbackwest - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
i need help with writing depth.

3 - ... but he would only accept them for marks if they were quite a bit better. Adding depth...

Grammar, Usagebookworm - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
"Life is always full of T-junctions" - A scholarship essay: personal statement

4 - ...living as alternatives to farming. The number of abandoned fields are increasing, year after year . This scene creates...

Scholarshiphavan89 - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
making a difference via coaching soccer - 150 words

12 - Really?! Eric, thanks for explaining that to me about the absence of serial comma in UK English. I didn't...

Undergraduatelinmark - Oct 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Toefl essay For children it is better to grow at the country side or in th city

3 - However in my opinion, a city would be the best place for the growth of a child. Your...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
"Can TV teach people?" - Give band to my IELTS essay

5 - Luke and west, thanks for helping here! TV channels like National Geographic, Discovery and The Animal Planet are...

Writing Feedbackmaknojia - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
The dreaded "tell us about yourself" question....

4 - Right here you switch verb tense in a way that messes it up a little: The bookcase itself is...

UndergraduateKelsey1704 - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
the change in the life is good or not? discuss both sides and give your views.

3 - Yes, but you should also discuss the issues raised by other people who help. Bilal caught some important ones...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Lunar New Year in Vietnam - essay

2 - thinh, thanks for getting the first half! I'll do some more of it: This is supposed to be...

Writing Feedbacklinh2603 - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
'Grandpa no longer with me' - UC Prompt 1 - Patience, Perseverance, Passion

3 - If I were to generalize my take on life, I can say that it is filled with challenges much...

UndergraduateRypto - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Guideline for Motivation Essay writing (graduate admission and scholarship)

3 - I think the most important thing is to write with your PURPOSE in mind. What is your purpose with...

Scholarshipsaimurkhan - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Cable ship visit report -- ASEAN Explorer return from the Indian Ocean

6 - This really is very impressive. I googled it, because I thought you must have copied it from a text...

Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 7, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
should take circumstance and motivation for committing into account for penalty?

4 - hi. try to change your way,when you write your essays,be inventor. The write is art,so let's try something new...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 10, 2009bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 10, 2009
Animal testing: it's flat out wrong and cruel to the animals involved?

3 - According to absolutist moral philosophy, you might say it is never appropriate to hurt a weaker creature for one's...

Writing FeedbackCam - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
"'helicopter' parents", "cleaning the house" - UC personal statements

2 - This does not really work: My world has shaped me into ... what I want to become. Maybe...

Undergraduatesaltmonster - Nov 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Why Smith (virtue and knowledge).

4 - Hi there, Nice essays! I agree with Susan. I think Example 2 is stronger--Example 1 wastes your...

Undergraduateminnieliu - Nov 9, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 10, 2009
Major, personal talent - UC Transfer Application-Both Prompts

2 - Hi there, Nice work on both essays, I love your angles and the groundwork that you've laid. However,...

Undergraduatecaitwiman - Nov 10, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 10, 2009
Restriction on how many years a teacher may teach same subject- CBEST

3 - nice essay. although the way i understand it only states 1 thesis statement (it is beneficial for students) .....

Writing Feedbacknanskk2000 - Oct 28, 2009elainedlcruz - Nov 10, 2009
Question about Tufts Supplement: Self-identity and personal expression

3 - Awesome, thanks for the quick answer, xit9zangel....

Undergraduatejuinette - Nov 10, 2009juinette - Nov 10, 2009
Why people are producing more and more rubbish?

4 - Kenvin, could u check for me again. i have added 2 sentences There is no doubt that our environment...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 6, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Nov 10, 2009
Common application, personal statement.about a departures exprience..

2 - When she was alive, my best friend's mother Aunty May once expressed a wish, while she was alive, that...

Undergraduateadamsnoopy - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Common Application Main Essay about Peer Interaction In Jazz

3 - ...play as quietly as you've... So , we took it slowly. I would count off the... I...

Undergraduatecwperkins32 - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
Pls Review "Motivation for Application and Career Goals" essay for NUS

4 - Dear Kevin & Alexandr, Thanks so much for reviewing my essays eventhough I have closed it... I...

Graduatecialit0506 - Nov 7, 2009cialit0506 - Nov 10, 2009
Greed leads to destruction (welcome for help)

6 - Thank a lots Kevin that you help and encourage for my writing. Big thanks !!!...

Writing Feedbackvirak - Nov 7, 2009virak - Nov 10, 2009
UC Prompt Essay (both prompts) - Business Major

5 - Your first sentence is just a generalization and your own personal opinion. How do you know the admission officer's...

Undergraduatejeffw - Nov 9, 2009karyenu - Nov 10, 2009
Descriptive Essay: The Mall; 'Everything about the mall just makes me happy'

7 - You talk about everything on what you did on the mall like what kind of stuff you bought...

Writing Feedbackchewyy123 - Oct 31, 2009waldo56 - Nov 9, 2009
So, what am I? I am a writer; Pratt Institute Writing Program

3 - Sometimes I use a set of dashes to make complex sentences more manageable for the reader's attention: There, that...

Undergraduatemashimoto - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
Tourism - business which fosters better relationship between countries and people of different races

2 - ...and made possible a better understanding of diverse cultures. You are doing very well! I think it would...

Writing Feedbackwest - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
DICKINSON C SUPPLEMENT (SCIENCES& ARTS)

11 - I found something else: I take special interest in the... Yes, you write with nice rhythm. For example,...

Undergraduateayida365 - Oct 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
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