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"Crash" - Tranfer essay for common app

4 - i think you need to focus more on the transfering part...

Undergraduatesoapman - Oct 15, 2009anniebiotic - Oct 17, 2009
Joseph Heller's novel Catch-22 - U of M favorite book

4 - This is good! I read books but mostly mystery and I don't know how to tie that in with...

Undergraduatepapasmurf - Oct 16, 2009emjay1264jr - Oct 17, 2009
Toefl essay---Technology has made the world a better place to live.

16 - Contain more personal examples, then the essay will be better, in my opinion....

Writing Feedbacktiantianwenzi - Oct 7, 2009lyqinyi - Oct 17, 2009
common app-- Describing my life as tough

3 - Not meaning to be offensive, but I think you should write on something else for your common application essay....

Undergraduatextlraptor - Oct 17, 2009Lawliet - Oct 17, 2009
An amazing place that you visited

3 - thaaaaaaaaaaaaanx alooooooooooooot...

Writing Feedbacksilentheart - Oct 17, 2009silentheart - Oct 17, 2009
True Spirit of Maples~ any advice is welcomed,thanks

10 - Ok, I will follow your advice ^^ thanks a loooooooot...

Undergraduatemaniano - Oct 16, 2009maniano - Oct 17, 2009
Satirical Essay about Stephen Colbert and Politics

4 - Hmmmm . . . well, you need to start by brainstorming a political topic you can write about. Then,...

EssaysMafuyu - Nov 5, 2007EF_Sean - Oct 17, 2009
Rutgers Essay help- Swadhyay

4 - You don't, and no. Our terms of service clearly state that threads do not get deleted, but remain so...

Undergraduateardy619 - Oct 7, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 17, 2009
U.c. Application Prompt Advice (intented major)

2 - Okay, so you have the prompts. Now, write something that addresses them. I have no idea what personal qualities,...

Undergraduateasim6989 - Oct 16, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 17, 2009
Adult returning to school... review/critique this very ROUGH draft?

7 - Start by researching your topic. Then, brainstorm to think of things you want to say about your topic that...

Undergraduateboosted_347 - Oct 15, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 17, 2009
Driving in winter vs. summer

2 - Well, you have a plan, at least. I would suggest you list the similarities and differences between the two...

Essayscrtboy09 - Oct 17, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 17, 2009
face to face communication is better than others such as mail, phone...

6 - I am not sure if the "other types of communication" in the qns is restricted to the examples given...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Oct 13, 2009xtlraptor - Oct 17, 2009
brain drain and solutions for this problem

5 - Hi thinh, I think not all people in Vietnam who has been go abroad do not go back to...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Oct 16, 2009essay0405 - Oct 17, 2009
The advantage and disadvantage of the mobile phones

2 - Hi, I don't think mobile phones create a lot of problem for our life and " people should...

Writing Feedbackessay0405 - Oct 16, 2009tuanlnc - Oct 17, 2009
I'm from China - common app personal statement

10 - lmy125 Yeah, I'm from PRC. Ummm...for example..."A writer who keeps diary since elementary school and strives to capture...

Undergraduatelmy125 - Oct 16, 2009ayida365 - Oct 17, 2009
Dancing / Concentration / Slow down - Help-Brown supplements

NEW - Hey, guys! These are my supplements of Brown. Welcome any comments! Grammar is important! THX! 1.Please tell us...

Undergraduatecatherineding - Oct 16, 2009 -
hopefully it is crazy enough to work ... penn state personal statement

9 - haters...

Undergraduatevlatski - Oct 3, 2009metrostars25 - Oct 16, 2009
elaborate on one of your activites in 150 words or less (football)

6 - okay im handing this in tonight so any other comments would be greatly appreciated....

Undergraduatemetrostars25 - Oct 14, 2009metrostars25 - Oct 16, 2009
Essay on three businesses if Mr. Gates awarded me with $300,000

2 - First one is a going to be a hookah lounge called the "X-Hale, " and from there I will...

Writing FeedbackSyed - Oct 16, 2009youngeebs - Oct 16, 2009
Looking for advice on one sentence of admission essay

7 - The top reviewer's revision makes the sentence much more concise and less confusing/wordy. I started to edit it, and...

UndergraduateJason51224 - Oct 14, 2009worldbound10 - Oct 16, 2009
descriptive argument essay about anything?

4 - It needs to be an controversial issue that you can take a stance on, and refute other stances. Good...

EssaysRaa - Oct 14, 2009worldbound10 - Oct 16, 2009
Toefl essay:: Studying abroad, advantages and disadvantages.

8 - hi, in essay or any academic writing should avoid using some pronoun such as you, we, i as possible...

Writing Feedbackerfan222 - Oct 14, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Oct 16, 2009
We, young people, should plan and organize as the modern life is more complex.

3 - Your essay is excellent! However, I think if there is a conclusion in each paragraph, it will be better....

Writing Feedbackmocixuan - Oct 13, 2009lyqinyi - Oct 16, 2009
common app essay- first topic- "The Palpitation"

2 - Ow. The experience you describe, while it must have been terrifying, was not in fact a matter of...

UndergraduateBasker - Oct 16, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 16, 2009
'Hardware Design Engineer' - the Statement of Purpose for Grad Prog in ECE

3 - Thanks a lot Kevin for the insightful suggestion. I shall incorporate the change right away....

Graduatejagannath_s - Oct 13, 2009jagannath_s - Oct 16, 2009
Michigan Engineering Short Essay

3 - Very good essay. I think it is focused and good for a U of M short answer. The only...

Undergraduateqyuiosilent - Oct 15, 2009worldbound10 - Oct 15, 2009
"just go back in the cage..." - An extracurricular activity essay

6 - Your new version is better, but still falls short. What you need to do is to elaborate on this:...

Undergraduatebythe_Secoast - Oct 14, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 15, 2009
Common App essay - a new approach to an old prompt

4 - Um. You are aware that the point of this essay is to show what a *good* candidate you are,...

UndergraduateA Sizzle - Oct 13, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 15, 2009
Toefl iBT, integrated task: Invasive plants are a growing problem.

3 - Hi Jeannie, This is a Toefl iBT integrated writing task. After reading a passage & listening a lecture,...

Writing Feedbacktuanlnc - Oct 15, 2009tuanlnc - Oct 15, 2009
"I saw a baby die." - Common App Essay - Significant Experience

4 - Alright, thanks a lot. I'll think about how to incorporate the parents and their feelings. The essay is already...

Undergraduatemuffinman8380 - Oct 15, 2009muffinman8380 - Oct 15, 2009
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