|Need advice on essay question- "Unique characteristics and experiences"
3 - Hey, thanks alot. I think you are doing a great job on this boarding helping everyone out. I think...
UndergraduateGuruKid - Oct 15, 2008GuruKid - Oct 17, 2008
|"I have played piano" - Chopin's Second Ballade
6 - Thanks!...
Undergraduatepianolegend91 - Oct 9, 2008pianolegend91 - Oct 16, 2008
|UF Essay - "Ready for My Unpredictable Future"
Undergraduateesthie_ - Oct 14, 2008esthie_ - Oct 16, 2008
|GED Practice: Discuss the influence of rock music on young people
2 - "Because rock music is good entertainment for everyone, especially young people, it influences good physical condition, improvement of exercise...
Undergraduatefisherman - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Essay for Fellowship-INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY MANAGEMENT
5 - Good afternoon. This is a very good start. You've done a great job explaining "the role of family...
Graduatefara - Oct 7, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|CORNELL COMMON APP ESSAY; To feel desired is a primary biological need in life
2 - Good afternoon. My only suggestion is to make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first...
Undergraduateakhan11 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|What experiences have led you to select your professional field?
2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...
Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"struggling to comprehend my nemesis" - a significant experience
2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay! Mechanically and grammatically clean, organized, fluid, with a great story for...
Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|An unexpected act of kindness
4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Is there any error in this phrase?
8 - Good afternoon. Grammatically, as it is this statement is a fragment. I suggest: Obtaining an MBA will...
Grammar, Usagesaikarvn - Feb 9, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'true inner being' - MY UF admission essay
2 - Good afternoon. One mechanical suggestion: "...including soccer, which I had never played before. By my senior...
UndergraduateHelena - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Three Hovering Doormen--Four sonnets forming one poem
2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's start at the top. A sonnet is a poem of fourteen lines, traditionally speaking....
PoetrySimone - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"I manage all of this", I would love to be a part of this place - FSU Essay - critique and ideas...
2 - "...say I have not, nor plan to, give in when these times occur." "...problems, and depend only on...
Undergraduatemoochykk33 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|'My determined and independent grandfather' - person who had a significant influence
2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of suggestions. First, "Grandfather" should not be capitalized, unless it is the first...
Undergraduatelist00 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|"I am a fencer." -Common App essay: is it any good?
4 - You could add more analysis on how deeply these skills have effected you a bit more; other than that,...
Undergraduatelexlavender - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?
NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...
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|Essay: "There's no place like home."
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
|'the beauty of mathematics' - California exchange student
Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008mickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008
|FSU Resume; 'letterman on my high school football team'
LettersSportjag - Oct 15, 2008Sportjag - Oct 15, 2008
|Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
|Doctor of Pharmacy Degree in less than three years; Why University of the Pacific?
2 - Why is this program better than all of the others? What is it specifically about this institution that is...
Undergraduatewendywu - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay
4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|'Teachers and student relations' - Common App - elaborate on one of your activity
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|Super Powers Hero - FSU Essay
NEW - "Vires represents strength in its many forms. Whether it is physical, emotional, or intellectual, it is something that can...
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|The National Merit Scholarship Essay - UF Essay Help
7 - Congratulations on National Merit. Oddly enough, I just applied to National Merit and I'm writing my UF letter...
ScholarshipAlbo - Oct 12, 2008Liist - Oct 14, 2008
|Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
|"my strong moral and intellectual ability" - Last Minute Essay. (FSU)
NEW - Throughout my entire life the Latin word Vires has been my guiding philosophy. Vires embodies my moral and intellectual...
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|(techniques that Schlosser) FAST FOOD NATION ESSAY
4 - Ethos,logos, pathos are the three writing styles that everyone needs to know to be a more effective writer and...
Book Reportstaeb1n - Oct 10, 2008taeb1n - Oct 14, 2008
|Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help
NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....
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|'difficulty learning' - UCF ESSAY - BUMPS IN THE ROAD
Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008