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The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay

NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...

Writing Feedbackjhogan - Feb 10, 2007 -
College Journal - English Class / Society Living

NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...

Writing Feedbackryan - Feb 10, 2007 -
The big difference - book report

2 - Greetings! First of all, take a de-e-e-e-p breath!! You're going to be just fine! :-)) The difference...

Book ReportsMarieBee - Feb 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2007
China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"

NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 4, 2007 -
Comparison of past thirty years of special education

5 - Fantastic!! I'm so glad!!! You are very, very welcome! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jan 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
Paper on Immortality

3 - HI I really need help, I am just no good at essay writing, and its due Monday, our assignment...

Essayshelpme101 - Nov 16, 2006pamurphy - Feb 3, 2007
Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from

5 - Actually, it would be better if you create a new topic - either way, we'll be able to assist...

Writing Feedbackrang555 - Jan 31, 2007EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay

2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...

Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007KingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
Application to The University Of Mary Washington 250-500 words

3 - thanks a ton for the quick feedback Sarah, I really appreciate it, and the changes you suggested are being...

UndergraduateAzap - Jan 29, 2007Azap - Jan 30, 2007
struggling with admission essay question.

2 - Greetings! These are good questions! I think a paragraph on your strengths, with examples to back them up,...

UndergraduatejimmyD88 - Jan 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Genocide Essay

2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...

Writing Feedbackanf3rnee - Jan 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Essay on out-of-town shopping centres

3 - thank you, I will change that....

Writing FeedbackTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007TheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
History Paper on Revolutions

3 - Thank you, Sarah! The points were very helpful!...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Jan 27, 2007rollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
[about American people] - stuck with a sentence

3 - I guess an ice storm is a valid excuse, ha ha. Not the most pleasant thing to be stuck...

Essaystrine_321 - Jan 14, 2007trine_321 - Jan 28, 2007
Correct word use? "Without a leader to guide our people..."

4 - also is this sentence redundant? "Liberal arts is just as important in our society as science and technology. Without...

Grammar, Usagemyc - Jan 27, 2007myc - Jan 27, 2007
"ART IS A FORM OF PROBLEM SOLVING"- Undergrad SOP/ Graphic Design

2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay -- congratulations! I have just a few suggestions to make it...

Undergraduatemmmm - Jan 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 27, 2007
Speaking in Front of the Class - Advice for Novice Students

NEW - Someone told me once that more people are afraid of public speaking than are afraid of dying. Makes sense....

SpeechesEF_Team - Jan 26, 2007 -
'Eleven' - A personal response essay about a short story

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback! I think I see what your professor is saying...

Book Reportsnbc4911 - Jan 25, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 25, 2007
"My weekend" - essay writing ideas

2 - Greetings! The hardest part about writing is getting started! First of all, give yourself permission to just get...

Essaysaysha - Jan 25, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 25, 2007
Once I was....., now I am..... - Essay

3 - Wow! Great ideas!!! Thank you very much!!!...

Essaysoxylapka - Jan 24, 2007oxylapka - Jan 25, 2007
'Influencing the future' - COMMON APP - Person with siginificant influence

3 - Thank you for your help...I really appreciate it. Especially the editing notes i'm terrible with those sort of things....

UndergraduateKdmaxwell - Jan 23, 2007Kdmaxwell - Jan 25, 2007
Custom essay about my wallet

NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...

Writing Feedbackokuna - Jan 24, 2007 -
"The stangest thing i ever stole" - English Essay

3 - Greetings! Let me give you even more ideas:). What an interesting prompt! However, I can see how you...

Essaysgazza - Jan 22, 2007EF_Team - Jan 23, 2007
Howard Community College, Essay for scholarship application

2 - Greetings! Here are the changes I would suggest: At 6:45 pm, after I said the last "goodbye"...

Scholarshipryan - Jan 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 20, 2007
'A Night Classes program' - college application short response

5 - Many many thanks.......

Undergraduateryan - Jan 14, 2007ryan - Jan 19, 2007
I Need Help With a Thesis Sentence for a Movie

2 - Greetings! Before writing your thesis statement, you need to be clear on what argument(s) your essay will be...

Essaysshineysuitman - Jan 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
'In the Lord of the Flies...' - Part of an Essay

4 - I think you're probably right about that. Not that it's always a bad thing to be "forced" to read...

Book Reportsss03 - Jan 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2007
What subject to choose from for business English class?

2 - Greetings! It can certainly be more difficult to choose a topic when the options are so wide open....

Research Papersasianbm - Jan 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 16, 2007
'the fraternity brothers' - essay

NEW - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Jan 15, 2007 -
[about society] - Is this paragraph understandable?

3 - Okey, thanks so much for the feedback...

Grammar, Usagetrine_321 - Jan 13, 2007trine_321 - Jan 14, 2007