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Essay about "Hope" - what to write?

8 - True enough. Since the topic given was "hope" though, I stand by my assertion that an essay that looks...

Essaysqing - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 20, 2009
Essay on the Types of Germs - bacteria

22 - I like the quotation you used. Perhaps you should cite it, according to whatever format you are supposed to...

Writing FeedbackHaya - Jun 4, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
Law School Personal Statement ("I am a fighter.")

11 - You seem to want to do something involving human rights. That's nice. In fact, it is like the concept...

Graduatejeyz - Jun 10, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
Statement in support of application for a Research Technician

3 - Aye, the content of these sorts of essay tend to be fairly standard. You have to talk about certain...

LettersSpellbound - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
TOEFL - modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people

10 - Hmmmm . . . it seems that you are writing to a formula, in which you use the same...

Writing Feedbacklibo_for - Jun 10, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
Conflict resolution and peace study - Statement of Purpose for PhD in IR

4 - You guys are good. Thanks much....

Graduatekevinp - Jun 5, 2009kevinp - Jun 19, 2009
Tasteful Thank You

11 - And really, what's so bad about that? Worst case scenario, he chooses to ignore the perceived implication. Best case...

Grammar, Usageeconomist - Jun 15, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
Leader or event in history - Scholarship Essay for Admission

7 - You can start by saying how they used their intelligence to invent a plane and how you will use...

EssaysteenN_need - Jun 16, 2009sound10kp - Jun 19, 2009
Vocab: Martinet

12 - Context helps, too. That's why it's so much easier to remember words learned while reading than it is to...

Grammar, Usageeconomist - Jun 14, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 18, 2009
Post-graduation Statement of Purpose

22 - Thank you Simone....

Graduate02nishessh - Jun 12, 2009Rajiv - Jun 18, 2009
Scholarship Essay on How High School Sports Influenced you

8 - Congratulations! Don't forget to spread the joy by helping others with their scholarship or admissions essays!...

Scholarshipshupirate2013 - Apr 7, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 18, 2009
Persuading the American people to fight against global warming

5 - No problem. It's good that you posted your outline here before you tried writing the essay itself -- you...

Research Papersldinh2009 - Jun 16, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 18, 2009
TOEFL Writing: 2 short essays (reading versus doing things; Neighbors)

6 - I agree with Sean, I have seen in TOEFL essays this type of starting some time confuses the...

Writing Feedbackbon - Jun 15, 2009biggestv - Jun 18, 2009
Spinning my life events into academic potential - Letter of academic intent

12 - "but I knew that the best way to find answers in life was to go out into the world...

Undergraduatearoundandaround - Jun 3, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 18, 2009
'I will bring a curiosity and willingness to learn new things'; Graduate essay nursing - critique

6 - You need to bridge the Nightingale story and your paragraph about your current goals. You go from something that...

Graduaterumi - Jun 15, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 17, 2009
a baby doesn't know the intricacy of external world; TOEFL IBT Essay "Parents are the best teachers"

6 - Content-wise you could shore up your essay by defining what exactly you mean by "best teacher" before attempting to...

Writing FeedbackHVC - Jun 16, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 17, 2009
help with thesis statment, oedipus the king: "Does Sophocles"

3 - Presumably, you will want to focus more on the key difference between a person with an Oedipus complex and...

Book Reportszack ali - Jun 15, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 17, 2009
a Comparison and cantrash paragraph about two places

4 - Often, you'll end up emphasizing either the comparisons or the contrasts in this sort of essay. So, you might...

EssaysKristian_Life - Jun 15, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 17, 2009
Narrative essay- important decision for CBEST Pormpt

2 - First I will talk about content and then about grammar and style. You've made a good choice concerning which...

Writing Feedbacksapst21 - Jun 16, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 17, 2009
CBEST Essay using technology prompt

8 - The handbook I am using is the one created and required by a major U.S. university. Again, Sean, your...

Writing Feedbackrolandj727 - Jun 15, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 16, 2009
'confused by the question asked'; Human Resource Management Assignment

7 - You might also look at the nature of the uncertainty created. Technology, for instance, can make entire workforces obsolete...

Essayskychong79 - Jun 16, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 16, 2009
"Comrade Hu and passion for languages" - College Admissions Essay Introduction

13 - I'll just say again that I really like this introduction. In addition to being fresh and engaging, the allusions...

Undergraduatelewa - Jun 14, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 16, 2009
Skills Test Essay Seneca college (fall 2009)

6 - Ask the college. Most colleges that use skills tests provide example tests from previous years....

UndergraduateAna - Jun 14, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 16, 2009
TOEFL Essay on why people want to study (give me any comment on my following essay)

8 - Sean, thanks for giving me further clarification. Any other comment, please let me know....

Writing Feedbacklinjuncai - Jun 14, 2009linjuncai - Jun 16, 2009
Cultural psychology short paper

9 - When Sean asks you to say the same thing in fewer words, he is asking you to write more...

Writing Feedbackcarlychan - Jun 13, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 16, 2009
Your way of writing 10 or more pages research paper (univ or college level)

10 - Another key element is learning to make yourself interested in whatever topic you are assigned, as you often won't...

Research Paperssozomige - Jun 10, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 16, 2009
When you notice errors in news articles routinely...

5 - Actually, the author almost certainly meant "defuse". He probably did not mean to say that tensions between Israel and...

Grammar, UsageMustafa1991 - Jun 14, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 16, 2009
The Advantages of Capital Punishment-- very short essay --

6 - thank you.......

Writing Feedbacksilentheart - Jun 12, 2009silentheart - Jun 16, 2009
Cover letter to a Screening Committee; Network Support Specialist

4 - Thanks to both of you...

Lettersjermaine14903 - Jun 12, 2009jermaine14903 - Jun 14, 2009
Australian Gold Rush: Introduction writing

16 - Hey Notoman, thanks for mentioning the plagiarism detector. I knew such software existed, but I didn't know there was...

Writing Feedbackjgv115 - May 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 14, 2009
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