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Research Paper on Life situation

4 - Anecdotal evidence is the very core of sociology, so you should be on solid ground referencing your own experiences,...

Research Papersflawless 23 - May 28, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
students should work in groups

6 - Peter, You did an excellent job of providing examples for your facts. Good work....

EssaysPeterV - May 21, 2009Geoff - May 28, 2009
Persuasive essay (Lithium based batteries>Nickel based batteries)

33 - Thanks for the support guys, i really appreciate it....

Writing Feedbackkylelanning - Apr 27, 2009kylelanning - May 28, 2009
Essay on the legal drinking age

8 - Your essay come up with a very different way of presentation. I loved it. I will use it...

Writing Feedbackkokujampo - May 25, 2009biggestv - May 28, 2009
Job Portfolio: What do I include?

7 - Eric already mentioned this, but it bears repeating: a sample article tailored to the place you are applying would...

LettersMJames - May 5, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Essay on Early Years Social Policy

4 - Since you have already researched the two acts, why not write up a list of differences between them, and...

Essaysmaextra7 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Personal Essay - Something I've learned through a personal experience

6 - Great essay. I love the way you cross-cut your experience learning the bass guitar with your volunteer experience. The...

ScholarshipTheAnswer - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Perseverance essay in relation to ice hokey

7 - You mention that Orr lived at a time of war, and that this complicated his life. You might want...

EssaysGeoff - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Originality means putting old ideas together in new ways

7 - Good work. I liked how you really explored your thesis statement throughout your essay....

EssaysIndian - May 21, 2009Geoff - May 27, 2009
effective or ineffective decision making and leadership - research question

5 - You'll do best, I think, if you can do as the assignment requires, and write from experience. The assignment...

Research Papersmsennie - May 21, 2009EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
Clep essay-Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible.

4 - Your essay is very general and need specefic examples. Your grammer still need improvement. so I think to improve...

Writing FeedbackIndian - May 22, 2009biggestv - May 27, 2009
"A Latin-American" - Scholarship/college essay

8 - Since I was a child Good job. Now, go through and remove excessive words that clutter your message....

Scholarshipmishmon - May 24, 2009EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
Facilitating Children's Learning

11 - At issue in this study was the extent to which large numbers of classroom teachers were able to implement...

Essaysmaextra7 - Feb 25, 2009annieshanta - May 27, 2009
A DIFFERENT way to say "going towards"

18 - Yes, it's so easy to write "humankind" instead!...

Grammar, Usagezeal3h - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
WPE --The minimum wage in the U.S.

5 - Yes, that's the one. You know that there are reasons to increase minimum wage (protect workers from exploitation)...

Writing Feedbacksapst21 - May 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
Causes of Global Financial Crisis

3 - While moderating here, I have often found myself recommending three books over and over again: Stechen King's On Writing,...

Writing Feedbackferocious12 - May 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
Essay on advantages of computer games

16 - To make your essay a bit stronger in view point you could list a few well known negative views...

Writing Feedbacktara11 - May 5, 2009maextra7 - May 26, 2009
Is father or mother who play the more important role in building up the children

8 - That's a very good idea, Mel! Another possibly useful source is the book Raising Cain, which discusses the...

EssaysTan Huey Yean - May 19, 2009EF_Simone - May 26, 2009
Raising a teenage boy vs teenage girl - writing a comparision and contrast essay

5 - You could even perhaps ask parents who have both a son and daughter about their experiences raising them and...

Essaysliiliiyaanaa - May 17, 2009maextra7 - May 26, 2009
Reading Based and Comparsion

4 - it says to find the period of the style's artwork I cant really seem to find it? Hercules the...

Book ReportsMoeMoe1 - May 20, 2009MoeMoe1 - May 25, 2009
energy towards college, family personal statement/diversity statement for Law School

4 - Hi JVS, instead of asking people to email their essays to you, please just browse around in EssayForum to...

Graduatejvs2764 - May 24, 2009EF_Kevin - May 25, 2009
Personal Essay (the college of Medicine)

3 - Simone, I'm so glad you mentioned "indecision." I could not find the words to express what I wanted to...

Undergraduatesammour - May 24, 2009EF_Kevin - May 25, 2009
[TOEFL ESSAY ] Should the Government Provide Free College?

4 - Thank you sooooo much. It helps me a lot. :)...

Writing Feedbackrjsdndi - May 24, 2009rjsdndi - May 25, 2009
How can I describe this graph?

7 - I'd say the number for the Master's degree is off. The bar clearly stretches to the $60,000 mark, so...

Essayssoha - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 24, 2009
Toefl: Is this good enough to get 24 score in writing section.

3 - Aye, the more concise the better, as multiple writers have noted. However, your fix for the sentence changes his...

Writing Feedbackbiggestv - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 24, 2009
School bus trip - a story

4 - Better yet, write the story so that the theme emerges from it without your protagonist having to reflect on...

Writing Feedbackceberus - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
Making this the most persuasive research essay

8 - I'd say your essay needs to deal more with the issue of where graffiti is placed. I don't think...

Research Papersgiovanni33 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
University of Wisconsin essay help - technically I am transferring

6 - I'd say the essays are pretty important, if only because they show how much a student wants to get...

Undergraduatenodnarb402 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
A time-travel machine to go back in time in your own life and change something

22 - Your verb use is fine, as far as strength goes. I suspect that you have sometimes sacrificed grammatical accuracy...

Undergraduateivan9210 - May 7, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
Macbeth Motif essay. How motif develops Lady Macbeth

4 - To make this essay more readable and easy to understand: (1) Put quotes around "fair is foul and...

Book Reportsgeorgexu316 - May 19, 2009EF_Simone - May 23, 2009
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