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My father sacrificed alot in his lifetime ; Someone Who Has Influenced My Life

10 - Is this supposed to be a five paragraph essay, or a 4? For a standard, five paragraph essay, this...

Writing Feedbackcboggs0027 - Apr 3, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 22, 2009
Basic Introductory Structures of Academic Essays

NEW - Introductions generally consist of four main elements: - A hook - Background information, including definitions of your...

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narrative essay- giving birth, its not graphic

2 - Hyphens: It was two-thirty in the afternoon on a gorgeous sunny, fall, Tuesday. My favorite day of the week....

Writing Feedbackpurfec8gel - Apr 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2009
Thesis Statement about the most influential people in your life

3 - Great idea... and it helps to come up with a single overarching theme if possible -- so that the...

Essayscraig - Apr 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Statement of purpose / design (student exchange program)

3 - Also, I experienced the foreign cultures and met diverse people during the travel. Oh, I see that Anna corrected...

Undergraduatejjinvvang - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
The Good Earth, Pearl S. Buck

4 - The concept of women and women's rights has not only been a struggle for the American culture but also...

EssaysMelanie Rose - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
What is the right stuff essay

5 - Instead of "arrogance," you could just say that they needed a robust ego, and let the reader decide for...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Apr 18, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
The Concept of Courage as Illustrated by Different Characters

3 - According to Atticus Finch, an honest lawyer in Harper Lee's novel "To Kill a Mockingbird", teaching the children that...

Writing Feedbacktak7171 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Aphorism essay - "A Better Tomorrow"

5 - Thanks...

Writing FeedbackNinja Fox - Apr 14, 2009Ninja Fox - Apr 21, 2009
Comparison Essay: Killers in The Green Mile vs. the Killers In Cold Blood

4 - I've read the Green Mile, but not Cold Blood. I don't know any killers, either, so I can't really...

Book ReportsSammy - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
Transferring from Wright College to Rockford College

3 - Yes, you want to revise this essay to make sure you give a better impression of yourself. At the...

Undergraduatekmichelle831 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
The Death Penalty is more costly than imprisoning someone for life

4 - Also, if you are going to make the case that the death penalty does not deter crime, you are...

Writing Feedbacktapsghost - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
WWII Paper - Hitler Expansion

6 - thanks alot my friend!...

Research Papersmhauth - May 1, 2007MoeMoe1 - Apr 21, 2009
I left Hong Kong in 2007 and became a student at Bowling Green State University in Ohio - common app

11 - Yup! That sounds a lot better! Thank you very much!!...

UndergraduateStefanie Chan - Apr 15, 2009Stefanie Chan - Apr 21, 2009
Does Success Come from Luck or Work?

7 - You still need a clear thesis. You can side with hard work, or with luck, or you can argue...

Writing Feedbackadalumi - Apr 16, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 20, 2009
10-15 page research paper on History of Capital Punishment

7 - Okay, then. There are plenty of online sites that will give you the correct formatting for parenthetical references and...

Research PapersMelanie Rose - Apr 18, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 20, 2009
Career, exploration, travel, home - check these paragaphs

11 - Here is what to do: Read some articles and see what special ideas they contribute to the topic....

Writing FeedbackThuong - Apr 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
General biological science, Statement of purpose

8 - This is too general! You should write about this school's specific programs and resources. and experiences new...

Essayspranav143 - Apr 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
GED Practice essay: Do you think stronger laws should be enacted to...

4 - Thanks both of you for your input. I'm leaving for my exam as I type this. Wish me...

Writing Feedbackspczmb - Apr 19, 2009spczmb - Apr 20, 2009
Convincing my professor that I understand: Structure of Writing

5 - I agree with Sean. Begin expanding on yuor ideas and generate a thesis to base your essay on....

Essayslilmisha - Apr 7, 2009Sammy - Apr 20, 2009
Discovery of the "New World"

15 - paste it on here so we can review...

Essayskinggg - Apr 4, 2009MoeMoe1 - Apr 20, 2009
Holocaust Essay (genocide subject)

5 - I'm not an expert just to let you know ahead of time but I am also taking an Ap...

Writing Feedbackahausermun - Apr 11, 2009Melanie Rose - Apr 20, 2009
Essay about war and religoion during 1990s in Europe-Balkan

4 - ...especially when war is going on toward you all around me . In Serbia, people who were living...

Writing Feedbackgacesaa - Apr 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
The best way of adding depth to an essay

9 - Hey, that is a great idea. So, you add depth by adding subtopics....

Essaysstefand - Apr 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
Essay for MSc in Finance

4 - During my Master, I had to provide a Thesis in order to be graduated, and I chose to examine...

Graduateokinawa - Apr 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
My own engineering firm; Scholarship (Educational Goals)

6 - Thanks for the help I'm going to make the corrections you suggested....

Scholarshipgb9570 - Apr 16, 2009gb9570 - Apr 19, 2009
How to Run a Debate in English, rather than Malay.

6 - i would try youtube, or google. Basically list out ur main points, also list out points that ur opposing...

Grammar, Usagekina - Apr 6, 2009ttc1234 - Apr 19, 2009
Arts and Festival DVD recording. Common app - elaborate one activity (150 words).

2 - "After the school Arts Festival closing, I suggested engaging in a research study" Who did you suggest this to?...

Undergraduatejoanna2007114 - Apr 19, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 19, 2009
'Off of an auto-pilot' - Bentley University Transfer Essay

6 - What past work experiences, skills, capabilities do you already have that you can bring onto campus? Using past...

Undergraduatenightgal545 - Apr 13, 2009babydoll - Apr 19, 2009
Art Paper - Elizabeth Murray

4 - Like Kevin said, I would strengthen the first paragraph. One way of doing that is by quoting Murray near...

Writing FeedbackLink42 - Apr 14, 2009silverystars - Apr 18, 2009
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