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Esteban - Thesis statement for an arguementative essay

3 - You should definitely add in the title of the story and the author's name. Also, you should revise your...

Essaysep505 - Apr 10, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 11, 2009
IELTS ESSAY: lessons with teachers versus others sources

8 - oh,yes,sure it does. i appreciate your help!...

Writing Feedbackeffy_sun - Apr 8, 2009effy_sun - Apr 11, 2009
Scholarship Essay, goals for myself in the future

9 - Thanks Sean. I'll let everyone know if I get the scholarship....

Scholarshiparbennett - Feb 17, 2009arbennett - Apr 11, 2009
Class Office Speech (strange high school traditions)

2 - Then...it's toga day! and the most-anticipated senior prank. You write very well, and you do not seem...

Speechesfittifitz - Apr 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2009
Appeal letter - Goals, Good Intentions, Seeking Reevaluation

7 - I hope you get to do what you want to do! If you have a clear vision of what...

Letterskrzyazn - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2009
SAT essay: Are people's lives the result of the choices they make?

4 - Thanks ^ ^...

Writing Feedbackkitty Freud - Apr 9, 2009kitty Freud - Apr 10, 2009
TOEFL essay: movies - serious or amusing?

11 - If you like Blackadder, you should check out some of Atkinson's stand-up comedy. A few skits are "Mr Bean-ish,"...

Writing Feedbackeric_ly - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
Persuasive Speech: Schizophrenia and Suicide

4 - It sounds like an excellent topic to me -- it's a bit different from the usual run-of-the-mill topics that...

Speechessilverystars - Oct 7, 2008EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
Something That Changed Me - Becoming a Bully

13 - Yes, six! (Picture me with an amiable yet incredulous expression.) At least, that was my experience. I'm all...

Writing FeedbackANSH729 - Mar 27, 2009silverystars - Apr 10, 2009
The individuality, use of machines and traveling for pleasure - essay

7 - Yes, that's what I meant! :)...

Writing FeedbackChidem - Apr 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2009
Apprenticeship Program Aplication

5 - I have been searching for the right program, one that enables me to apply... Don't say 5....

Writing Feedbackangelfight - Apr 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2009
Economic paper: the role of opportunity cost in financial decision making

5 - Like Kevin, I can only guess at your meaning, as a result of unfamiliarity with the subject matter combined...

Writing FeedbackAbby002 - Apr 7, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
Advertisers, affecting our childs thought process

10 - Overall this is a really well constructed essay. I wonder, though, if you might make a bit stronger if...

Writing Feedbacklilmisha - Apr 3, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
Understanding How Children Learn, critical reflection

3 - It would make a great deal more sense if you were being asked to think about how your teaching...

Essaysheatheruk86 - Mar 31, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
UCF admission essay (why did I choose to apply and family influence)

4 - Thank you so much it has been very helpful!...

Undergraduategizzy1376 - Apr 8, 2009gizzy1376 - Apr 9, 2009
Definition Essay: Building the Blocks, Becoming Successful (The Climb)

3 - "Success" is derived from the Latin word "successus"... You can follow Sean's advice by using a new topic...

Writing Feedbackbhoptl - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2009
How to Effectively Write an Excellent Cover Letter?

NEW - If you think writing a resume is hard, try writing a cover letter. Remember, the cover letter is what...

LettersEF_Team - Apr 9, 2009 -
Destined - a poem

10 - Thank you Sean. That was much more than I had expected to hear. You're right, I have no...

PoetryRajiv - Sep 1, 2008Rajiv - Apr 9, 2009
Pushed to hard work-----a positive or negative development?

4 - Yes, as you refine the essay to cover the prompt perfectly, it will be good to add one more...

Writing Feedbackkirin - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2009
problem-solution essay (domestic or international problem)

4 - Kevin is right, narrowing down your topic might make the assignment more manageable. In addition to picking a specific...

EssaysMzITalia316 - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
What is a Research Paper?

3 - A research paper is generally exactly what you would expect it to be, a paper that summarizes and evaluates...

Research Papersbrayanpeter - Apr 7, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
Need assistance finding academic journals on 'operating systems'

3 - Here is something that might work. Go to Google Scholar, and do a search for "Linux." Then try doing...

EssaysAlexW - Apr 7, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
Political Allegory

5 - As you rework this essay, think about how you can move, as you progress from the introduction to the...

Writing Feedbackhannahkim91 - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
Hypocrisy in the Chrysalids

5 - Your are most welcome!...

Writing Feedbackmacawtopia - Apr 6, 2009Rosamond - Apr 8, 2009
Pride and Prejudice Research Paper

3 - This is pretty vague. "Submissive" means that she is quick to give in, give up control. To react...

Research PapersEBGames - Apr 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2009
Creative essay about New Zealand

5 - Maybe the essay is not supposed to be expository. Maybe you do not need to know about New Zealand...

EssaysPanpan - Apr 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2009
NYU SUPPLEMENT QUESTIONS -- DEADLINE SENSITIVE

4 - This is the para regarding starting a club or an activity. As pointed out 'human rights' is a very...

Undergraduateisgluska - Apr 1, 2009vistasad - Apr 7, 2009
Personal statement-Law ("The world makes way for the man...")

6 - You have worked as an intern in a law firm. Bring out your learning with respect to law during...

Undergraduatebarbie - Apr 2, 2009vistasad - Apr 7, 2009
(Hardships / Family history / Institution / Qualities) - college essay remake

6 - The first para definetely needs improvement. Make it more real life by alluding to an actual set of circumstances....

UndergraduateMr2009 - Apr 4, 2009vistasad - Apr 7, 2009
Help with narrowing down research question and thesis

5 - "Online classrooms allow students to learn through a limited screen and only see teachings one dimensionally. Learning is a...

Research Papersyangstauwm - Apr 5, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 7, 2009
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