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The Big Three, Japanese Archetypes

3 - Well, about the space limitation, remember: you could, if you had to, write this whole essay in a single...

Writing FeedbackFDeacon - Apr 4, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2009
'I love the sciences' - UVM Waitlist Letter

7 - Complacently This letter may indeed become one such document, but... Above, I don't think "complacently" works in that...

UndergraduateJonathanI20 - Apr 4, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2009
Cause and Effect Essay Trouble

6 - What? ? Haha, I guess I see how that is funny. I would advise against it, unless the prof...

Essaysaislynn_h - Apr 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2009
Help with essay - why should we tolerate hateful speech

7 - In your research, you might type "hate crimes" into Google Scholar or some good database. This has already been...

Essayssongforme - Nov 10, 2008EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2009
Stevens or NJIT - which college to choose?

9 - You might be better off looking to see if there is any reason not to attend either of your...

Undergraduatejen2 - Mar 26, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 5, 2009
Essay on Obama's Stimulus Plan

8 - Well, if you have to remain neutral, perhaps you could focus on the fact that it is controversial, turn...

Writing FeedbackFDeacon - Mar 31, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 4, 2009
My sculpture paper, Emile Antoine Bourdelle

6 - I agree with Kevin -- you have met the requirements and given a decent description of the artwork, but...

Writing FeedbackMoeMoe1 - Apr 1, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 4, 2009
Introduction essay for Death of a Salesman prompt- Critiques?

3 - You're on the right track. Willy is only truly happy when he is working with his hands. If he...

Writing Feedbackkeentimothy - Apr 2, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 4, 2009
"Important truths begin as.." (CLEP English Comp w/essay)

4 - Oh, that is an interesting point you made, about the difficulty of writing when you don't know much about...

Writing Feedbacknazgolg2000 - Apr 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 4, 2009
The mighty (movie) essay. Max's past.

5 - wow thanks u guys. im not THAT good. :P tnx again. :)...

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Apr 2, 2009newsha31 - Apr 4, 2009
How to write Term Paper on Alzheimers? 5 pages with cover and bibliography

7 - Don't forget that you can post your drafts here as you complete them. It is really much easier for...

Essayslbuzan - Mar 30, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 3, 2009
How to Write a Perfect and Winning Resume?

NEW - If you're starting from scratch, writing an excellent resume can seem like a daunting task. Never fear! Take things...

LettersEF_Team - Apr 3, 2009 -
art sculpture 6 page essay to start off with - a hook?

5 - Quotations make excellent hooks, so if you can't think of anything interesting to say about your topic to open...

EssaysMoeMoe1 - Mar 31, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 3, 2009
SOP for review ("Learning is like rowing upstream: not to advance is to drop back.")

7 - Thanks a lot Kevin and Silverystarsfor all your valuable feedbacks:))...

Graduatepriyab - Apr 2, 2009priyab - Apr 3, 2009
Pledge of Allegiance, under God, separation of church/state, essay feedback

4 - Amazing, concerning Thoreau. I'll have to read "Civil Disobedience"!...

Writing Feedbackkauilani1 - Mar 31, 2009silverystars - Apr 3, 2009
Pan's Labyrinth vs. The Fountain essay

4 - I agree with the Eliot quote. Tennessee Williams said it best: "I give you truth in the pleasant disguise...

Writing Feedbackmwingboy - Mar 31, 2009silverystars - Apr 3, 2009
Opening paragraph - 1984 by George Orwell - Big Brother control

5 - There is only one way in which one is allowed to carry out sexual activities: to produce a child...

Book Reportspeppersauce - Apr 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 3, 2009
A good X ( Teacher, Roomate, Classmate, Friend, etc.)

3 - You really need to pick one X. (Teacher, Roommate, Classmate, Friend, etc.). Anything general enough to fit all of...

Writing FeedbackCS800 - Mar 31, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 1, 2009
Questbridge Application, vegetarianism

10 - Your second essay is a good description of something that is important to you. Is that what the prompt...

Undergraduatekenziii - Mar 29, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 1, 2009
The Ultimate Controversy: Argument Essay

19 - "Ultimately, Brandon McInerney and all juveniles who carry out premeditated and hate crimes must be tried as adults" I...

Writing Feedbackpanmit - Feb 25, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 1, 2009
Description Movie-Secret essay

2 - Jay lives with his father -- who is a Tamkang music teacher that wears glasses and a beard, and...

Writing Feedbacklilylee34 - Mar 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2009
Power Privilege essay

8 - You still need to work on defining power. You might start by going over to dictionary.com, which lists 20...

Writing Feedbackwilliams73 - Mar 31, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 1, 2009
What is the biggest obstacle that have had to overcome in Life?

10 - Very powerful and thought provoking. thanks again...

Scholarshipjoalex7 - Mar 23, 2009joalex7 - Apr 1, 2009
"Confessions of a Student"

25 - Thanks....

Essayswinner - Jan 7, 2009winner - Apr 1, 2009
'A hope for a wonderful learning experience' - college entrance essay (UCF)?

8 - Try to draft an outline by using question and answer form. Here's the example: Why am i choose...

UndergraduateMr2009 - Mar 23, 2009Abby002 - Mar 31, 2009
What can help a student to write a good essay (research for my assignment)

7 - thanks guys!...

Grammar, UsageLana_J - Mar 28, 2009MoeMoe1 - Mar 31, 2009
What are the Distinguishing Characteristics of Graduate-Level Writing?

NEW - Writing skills become a more fundamental aspect of attending graduate school than they ever were while an undergraduate. Often,...

DissertationsEF_Team - Mar 31, 2009 -
Some Causes of Stress -- work, family, finance.

3 - In our modern, technological century, stress becomes a common experience for all of us. There are many reasons. for...

Writing Feedbackchubbybear - Mar 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
TOEFL Essay - Cars cause a lot of air pollution...

5 - In my view, this payment it is obviously their responsibility to pay for cleaning the environment and to support...

Writing Feedbackinextricable - Mar 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
Samoan Govt Scholarship - Information Technology Course

4 - Up at the top, you said to me, "I really appreciated." That's a common mistake, but you are supposed...

Scholarshipambster - Mar 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
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