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Short Essay on Modern day televison watching.

5 - YES! That is a great way to explain it: Find the way your points are interconnected, and the transitions,...

Writing Feedbackakern - Feb 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 10, 2009
Background, interests, personal and professional accomplishments

5 - I LOVE YOUR ESSAY. I WISH THAT I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU. I like the fact that the essay...

Undergraduatemimi - Feb 8, 2009rlaguswjd89 - Feb 10, 2009
SOP for Graduate Admission: computers and business

4 - I think you should write out the word six instead of 6. Also, the paragraph that starts with During...

Graduatehasysf - Feb 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 10, 2009
COMPARISON AND CONTRAST PARAGRAPH - Savannah GA vs Roanoke AL

10 - first tell the differences b/w those two places you live before and current live than compare the differences!!! such...

Essaysangiemitchem - Jan 30, 2009chipmunk - Feb 10, 2009
Is there a wrong way to start a narrative essay?

14 - No need to say sorry. :) Your merely said what I was feeling while typing the paper, which is...

Essayslilmama1219 - Feb 5, 2009lilmama1219 - Feb 10, 2009
All About Me, A COMPILATION OF MY THOUGHTS

4 - Thank you Sean and Kevin! Yes it is a bit difficult to critique an "about me" paper. But...

Writing FeedbackSeanMasih - Feb 9, 2009SeanMasih - Feb 10, 2009
The Proper use of Punctuation Marks

NEW - An important step in developing a mature writing style is the proper use of the full repertoire of punctuation...

Grammar, UsageEF_Sean - Feb 10, 2009 -
If criminals have punishments that are not severe enough, it may encourage people to commit crimes

7 - hi thanks a lot...I rewrite this...it might be closer my opinion I find out my logic sometimes very strange...

Writing Feedbackpamfan0810 - Feb 6, 2009pamfan0810 - Feb 10, 2009
Essay on theories as to why one might be service orientated and others not.

2 - You might want to discuss what you mean by service-oriented a bit more. For instance, would you consider someone...

Writing Feedbackjenfkb - Feb 8, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 10, 2009
Kouzes and Posner's practices within a leadership event.

3 - The essay seems on-topic to me. If the "five main practices" you mention in the intro have sub-steps, as...

Writing Feedbackharperme - Feb 8, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 10, 2009
Supposedly we, young people, are no longer interested in religion, and thus losing belief in God.

5 - To stay on topic, you might want to deal with the issue of belief. People who really believe in...

Writing Feedbackceberus - Feb 9, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 10, 2009
Synthesis Essay on To Kill A Mockingbird and Brave New World

2 - Were those texts assigned to you, or can you choose other ones. Because To Kill a Mockingbird and Brave...

Book Reportskevin93 - Feb 9, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 10, 2009
U of Texas, Austin Topic A (every stage of my life)

9 - Well, if anyone tries to steal your essay, you show that it is YOUR original work because you gave...

UndergraduateKeonYe - Jan 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
"The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing -

10 - Hello! If someone pastes material from other websites, it causes problems for us and can possibly lead to...

Writing Feedbacksara213 - Oct 9, 2008EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
Scholarship application essay - demonstrating outstanding ability to lead

3 - No, don't trash the first part! But get rid of that weak first sentence. Then, start by telling: ...

Scholarshipsweethypnotic - Feb 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
Lehigh Supplement A, "never limit my academic potential"

4 - Lehigh knows they stand out, and knows theyre great. Do some research, find values off their website or...

UndergraduateFriarup819 - Feb 8, 2009sweethypnotic - Feb 9, 2009
The Significance of Setting in "Roselily" by Alice Walker

6 - Thanks! Your advice really helped and I think I know where I'm going now!...

Essaysalas_babylon19 - Feb 5, 2009alas_babylon19 - Feb 9, 2009
Education Through My Eyes

4 - Thank you very much for your replies. They have really helped me a lot. Thanks Again....

Writing Feedbackmllaury - Feb 3, 2009mllaury - Feb 9, 2009
Drawing a blank on Essay prompt (is there an outline?)

4 - "I want to go to the school because it has a stellar reputation in my concentration area, and I...

Graduatemimi - Feb 8, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 8, 2009
Personal statement for MSc Computer Science (life-long goals)

3 - thank you so much, Kevin, these parts are edited :)....

Graduatesqualla - Feb 8, 2009squalla - Feb 8, 2009
Scholarship essay, person I admire (my dead Uncle)

6 - Ha ha, I was going to say that is a cool idea, because the most influential person could indeed...

Scholarshipsuehatesyou - Feb 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 8, 2009
Formatting, Approach, and References in Graduate Admissions Application

3 - Once you have the basic elements of your response in the right order, though, there is no reason you...

GraduateJungian - Feb 7, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 8, 2009
The rotten Apple spoils his Companion - Need help with proverb

4 - Or, you could take it as meaning that hanging out with people with bad qualities actually does cause you...

Grammar, UsageMChen - Feb 7, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 8, 2009
Death of the Salesman - essay and creative writing

5 - Nope, it is only in my notebook. I wrote that whole scene up as part of a creative writing...

Book Reportssara213 - Feb 2, 2009sara213 - Feb 7, 2009
'System and education of Germany' - Essay for ohio state university

8 - thank you guys,I really appreciate your help I will try to edit my essay....

Undergraduatetojusandra2004 - Feb 3, 2009tojusandra2004 - Feb 7, 2009
Why our MBA program ? Why Now ?

4 - How about saying "Shell Corporation" for that first sentence, so that the reader is sure what you mean. I...

Graduatelogitech - Feb 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 6, 2009
Persuasive Essay - the conclusion paragraph question.

3 - Oh, I recently had the insight that: 1.) The thesis is the core of the essay, a single...

Grammar, UsageAsuki - Feb 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 6, 2009
Do I have to take MCAT for Pharmacy ?

6 - Pharmacy has something called the PCAT exam. pearsonassess.com/haiweb/Cultures/en-US/site/Community/PostSecondary/Products/pcat/pcathome.htm...

Undergraduatemenamilad - Jan 31, 2009sara213 - Feb 6, 2009
Domestic Abuse (persuasive essay)

3 - Wow, Sean gives really excellent feedback. To me, and perhaps to other readers, this is a valuable piece of...

Writing FeedbackTiffiny9880 - Feb 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 6, 2009
Short Response Questions (2 goals, difficult situation): Stevenson Uni

3 - Maybe you can try different ways of starting each response Q: Describe a time when you were having trouble...

Undergraduatexxkixzplayaxx - Feb 4, 2009KeonYe - Feb 6, 2009
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