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Two short answers; How did you first learn of Smith College / why this College?

3 - Thank you so much!...

Undergraduateluv4evr - Nov 24, 2008luv4evr - Nov 25, 2008
Computers have made life becomes easier or difficult? Discuss

2 - I suggest that you add a sentence to the first paragraph to say what your opinion is: although computers...

Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
Panorama City + I cried - Improved UCI PS Prompt #1 & #2 - Help me out

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, make sure that you aren't using contractions in formal academic writing; for example, "it's"...

Undergraduatekobenit4eea - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Been a student, but not a teacher" -Common app short question 156 to 150

5 - You're very welcome. I do think the second one is a more appropriate response; it acknowledges the prompt...

Undergraduateluv4evr - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Key Club" - Help on my UC Personal essays

3 - Good afternoon :) How has Key Club changed your dreams and aspirations? You should delve into that a...

Undergraduatemichellezonk - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
I am writing an essay about radio and international communications

2 - Hello! In order to come up with the main themes, I suggest that you search for books and...

EssaysMiss Loloa - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
'living and schooling in different countries' - world you come from family, community

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited your first paragraph and made some general comments also: "After another...

Undergraduatecloudone - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
'studies, sports or other things' - Tell about a personal character

4 - In regards to the above piece, watch your random capitalization and excessive use of the period; make sure you...

Undergraduatetonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
The Peking Opera - Describe your activities

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to the first piece, one suggestion: 'hip, and cool' Should be...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Question: Why we have to write personal essays?

2 - In our society, the written word is a very important way of communicating. Individuals are judged not only in...

UndergraduateZephyr003 - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"want do anything without parents' permission." - UC prompt#2

2 - Greetings! I'll do my best to make helpful suggestions... This is a run-on sentence: Working as...

Undergraduatephraephet_oh - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
Capitalism, Jainism - UC prompt #1

2 - Good afternoon :) Some mechanical corrections: "...venturesome businesses of lemonade stands, babysitter clubs, and..." In regards...

Undergraduateshahindian2009 - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
To major in film & traveling - Uc Essays Prompt #1 and #2

2 - Good afternoon :) Some general mechanical corrections in regards to both pieces. First, avoid contractions in formal academic...

Undergraduatemgasparo - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Passionate Art Student's PS for UC! Learn about a foreign kid's experience!!

7 - Good afternoon :) I do like your changes. In regards to the sentence, I suggest "All these...

Undergraduatecrappyhair - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Living in suburban paradise, right now, I have not fully figured out what I want to do with my life.

3 - Good afternoon :) I think your content is a good fit for this question. You do a good...

Undergraduatenancyy - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"I'm a Mexican female" - UC Personal statement Prompt numero uno!

2 - Good afternoon :) I don't think you have a problem with voice at all! As a matter of...

UndergraduateNickle - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Marching band - common app short answer

NEW - Required In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150...

UndergraduateErocknroll212 - Nov 25, 2008 -
'Will I be in college?' - UC prompt 1

3 - Good afternoon :) I agree with Nickle; you do a great job explaining the experience, but no time...

Undergraduatekyledood - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
'Shopping and Dinner with the Girls' - UCF HONORS COLLEGE

2 - Good afternoon :) Mechanically, make sure you don't use contractions in formal academic pieces; for instance, "couldn't" should...

Undergraduatemolzeeee - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Research paper on Poe's "Ligeia"

4 - Excellent! This is a great passage; if you keep your comparisons similar to this, you're going to have a...

Writing FeedbackTe Amari - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
'It was God' - UCI PS Prompt #2 Help - quality, experience

2 - Good afternoon :) I think this is a proper answer to this prompt; you describe the experience and...

Undergraduatekobenit4eea - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
New SAIC essay now that it is on track, last advice needed.

2 - Good afternoon :) As you didn't include the prompt for this piece, I have edited your first paragraph...

Undergraduateadelewu - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
UC essay prompts 1&2- "The Jaws of Life" Any Critique would be appreciated!

4 - Good afternoon :) I don't think that it is too personal; there is a difference between the familiarity...

Undergraduatejojomover - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
The Sleeper, Poetry Analysis - Assignment "Literary Analysis"

2 - Good afternoon :) To begin with, I have some questions: What type of analysis are you to...

Poetryinsanitywhisper - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"every time I walk into the open space" - UC prompt #2

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited a paragraph of your piece and given some general comments as well:...

Undergraduatesncooper10 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Tryouts" - essay prompt 1

2 - Good afternoon :) I do think that this is too specific for their prompt. I believe they are...

Undergraduatesncooper10 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Asian Americans and the glass ceiling" - Prompt #1 UC APPL

4 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first paragraph of your piece and included some general suggestions also:...

Undergraduateswt_babiigrl - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.

NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008 -
IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS

3 - Thank you so much, i would definitely keep your corrections in mind.....

Writing Feedbackmie08 - Nov 24, 2008mie08 - Nov 24, 2008
In search of an Epigraph for an essay on Poe's "Ligeia"

3 - I actually liked Antoine's more, but I thought I might've been biased. The Little Prince is my all time...

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